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10/10/2014 c1 9sillypandalover91
That's wonderful! I like how it reads, I can feel poor Russia going through that mental transformation. It's like, the monster pushes out the more he thinks about other nations not likening him and the more he acknowledges it's dark thoughts. Also, lol for some reason I just pictured you as a kitten wearing one of those assassin creed capes flying into the snow pile lol :D
8/28/2014 c1 8FragrantAlmond
Yes, it is a success! I loved all the descriptive language - the similies and metaphors you used effectively captured Russia's insanity.

Please write more Hetalia poetry, you are very talented :)
8/28/2014 c1 Lauren K
I'm listening to Imagine Dragon's "Monster" while reading this...it makes an amazing combination...

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