for The Maelstrom Saga9/5/2020 c23 
2darkblade2814
I just hope Naruto does have a good escuse, because killing the heir to the throne cause a lot of trouble
2darkblade2814I just hope Naruto does have a good escuse, because killing the heir to the throne cause a lot of trouble
8/30/2020 c17 Cranky Monkey 699
Lol I knew after your mention of the rough necks you’d find a way to slip in the motto. COME ON YOU APES! YOU WANNA LIVE FOREVER?! It’s even funnier given it was Asuma who said it given the relationship with the monkey clan
Lol I knew after your mention of the rough necks you’d find a way to slip in the motto. COME ON YOU APES! YOU WANNA LIVE FOREVER?! It’s even funnier given it was Asuma who said it given the relationship with the monkey clan
7/22/2020 c22 Guest
“LONG LIVE THE KI-“
*Raikage is killed*
“whOopsie”
“LONG LIVE THE KI-“
*Raikage is killed*
“whOopsie”
7/1/2020 c16 31Uncanny Planet
Was that a refrence to Transformers The Movie? :D
Have to say, I really liked Kosuke's final stand. It was very moving.
31Uncanny PlanetWas that a refrence to Transformers The Movie? :D
Have to say, I really liked Kosuke's final stand. It was very moving.
7/1/2020 c15 Uncanny Planet
Tayuya and Neji disgusts me. Each time Tayuya speaks I scroll down without reading
Tayuya and Neji disgusts me. Each time Tayuya speaks I scroll down without reading
6/20/2020 c17 AvatarUzumaki
story is getting more and more interesting. I look forward to the fights but I really hope that vision of shion having naruto's kid does not come true I mean naruto loves hinata too much to betray her that way, I do hope naruto and hinata get help where they can for the upcoming war but he better not betray hinata that way
story is getting more and more interesting. I look forward to the fights but I really hope that vision of shion having naruto's kid does not come true I mean naruto loves hinata too much to betray her that way, I do hope naruto and hinata get help where they can for the upcoming war but he better not betray hinata that way
6/3/2020 c22 Home World Security
An outstanding story! Thank you so much! I hope to read more soon! :D
An outstanding story! Thank you so much! I hope to read more soon! :D
6/2/2020 c22 12Ookami88
Pretty good climax between Hinata and the Raikage, very intense and nicely written.
12Ookami88Pretty good climax between Hinata and the Raikage, very intense and nicely written.
5/29/2020 c22 puzahx2
ouch..this pandemic sucks ass, but still stay safe man.
nice the raikage is finally dead! and now naruto clones are now closing in on danzo and his cronies, I hope you humiliate the shit out of the fire daimyo boy and make his death really 't wait for the next chap! thanks for the update!
ouch..this pandemic sucks ass, but still stay safe man.
nice the raikage is finally dead! and now naruto clones are now closing in on danzo and his cronies, I hope you humiliate the shit out of the fire daimyo boy and make his death really 't wait for the next chap! thanks for the update!
5/27/2020 c22 48Wolvmbm
Now THAT was a battle of well deserve payback, but what will become of Kumo now that their leader is dead ?
I mean even Orrochimaru isn't that powerful enough to absorb all of Kumo or what remain of it to the Sound army of his ?
Keep up the good work upon such a great tale as I cannot wait to see what happens next in this overall story after a battle like that.
48WolvmbmNow THAT was a battle of well deserve payback, but what will become of Kumo now that their leader is dead ?
I mean even Orrochimaru isn't that powerful enough to absorb all of Kumo or what remain of it to the Sound army of his ?
Keep up the good work upon such a great tale as I cannot wait to see what happens next in this overall story after a battle like that.
5/25/2020 c22 Guest
Fucking Danzo, I hope that assholes entire world comes crashing down on him before he dies! What about all the Uzumaki clansman brought back by the Edo Tensei, how are they going to be dealt with!?
Fucking Danzo, I hope that assholes entire world comes crashing down on him before he dies! What about all the Uzumaki clansman brought back by the Edo Tensei, how are they going to be dealt with!?