for The Maelstrom Saga
11/25 c5 Guest
I was going to continue reading this story, but every time you make it more ridiculous and meaningless, ninja at 4? without showing ANY of her training, but she is already a kind of super-hyper-mega prodigy who can do anything and without showing anything about how that has been? congratulations I crown you as king of shitty stories, I hope you enjoy it and people see how bad your story is
I was going to continue reading this story, but every time you make it more ridiculous and meaningless, ninja at 4? without showing ANY of her training, but she is already a kind of super-hyper-mega prodigy who can do anything and without showing anything about how that has been? congratulations I crown you as king of shitty stories, I hope you enjoy it and people see how bad your story is
1/25 c4 not a fan
and you've already screwed up the story, "more than 6 years doing missions" naruto is 9 years old so you send him to do missions when he's 3 years old? You're an idiot and you don't know anything about how children work no matter how much chakra they have... from here on it doesn't matter how much the story improves, it will continue to be crap
and you've already screwed up the story, "more than 6 years doing missions" naruto is 9 years old so you send him to do missions when he's 3 years old? You're an idiot and you don't know anything about how children work no matter how much chakra they have... from here on it doesn't matter how much the story improves, it will continue to be crap
1/25 c3 not a fan
Honestly, I'm going to keep reading this story because it interests me... but it's bullshit, seriously with less than 6 years and already graduated and killing people? neither minato was like that, nor kushina. I hope this nonsense changes soon or it will be one less reader... but for what you have to care about... surely nothing
then the time frame everywhere in these 3 episodes, how does a person get himself together in just 1 hour of his best friend's death? Or do they act as if a council meeting after the kiuuby attack was just another meeting... 0 personality
Honestly, I'm going to keep reading this story because it interests me... but it's bullshit, seriously with less than 6 years and already graduated and killing people? neither minato was like that, nor kushina. I hope this nonsense changes soon or it will be one less reader... but for what you have to care about... surely nothing
then the time frame everywhere in these 3 episodes, how does a person get himself together in just 1 hour of his best friend's death? Or do they act as if a council meeting after the kiuuby attack was just another meeting... 0 personality