for The Maelstrom Saga1/4 c26 Derick Lewis
How long are going to take to finish this fanfic?
How long are going to take to finish this fanfic?
12/29/2022 c26 
48Wolvmbm
Amazing update and nice aftermath of the previous chapter. Fantastic cliffhanger for the story as I cannot wait to see what happens next now that the main villain has appeared in the midst of the celebration. As if the heroes are tired already. Please do keep up your amazing work on this fantastic story.
48WolvmbmAmazing update and nice aftermath of the previous chapter. Fantastic cliffhanger for the story as I cannot wait to see what happens next now that the main villain has appeared in the midst of the celebration. As if the heroes are tired already. Please do keep up your amazing work on this fantastic story.
12/24/2022 c26 Guest
Oh come on, Everyone is EXHAUSTED! How can they fight off Madara now?
Oh come on, Everyone is EXHAUSTED! How can they fight off Madara now?
12/24/2022 c26 Guest
Thanks for great early Christmas present! Happy Holidays!
Thanks for great early Christmas present! Happy Holidays!
12/24/2022 c26 marquis.shax
you don't have to worry about Devilknight as not only had he deleted that story long ago after you adopted it but he's also deleted every single Naruto story he had because he can't handle the Naruto communities complaints about pairings or w/e. As for Jiraiya he'd naturally forgive Konan and Nagato ESPECIALLY Konan lol. I bet if a gorgeous woman like Konan offered to sleep with Jiraiya in exchange for Naruto he'd agree to it lol
you don't have to worry about Devilknight as not only had he deleted that story long ago after you adopted it but he's also deleted every single Naruto story he had because he can't handle the Naruto communities complaints about pairings or w/e. As for Jiraiya he'd naturally forgive Konan and Nagato ESPECIALLY Konan lol. I bet if a gorgeous woman like Konan offered to sleep with Jiraiya in exchange for Naruto he'd agree to it lol
12/24/2022 c26 101VFSNAKE
Awesome! Looks like Obito and Zetsu did things ahead of schedule for their plans. And now THE Madara is in the picture. This will be a problem.
101VFSNAKEAwesome! Looks like Obito and Zetsu did things ahead of schedule for their plans. And now THE Madara is in the picture. This will be a problem.
11/24/2022 c16 Guest
Got boring
Got boring
10/18/2022 c25 48Wolvmbm
Good way to end the war of the sky. Now I wonder what is left for Naruto to face with most of his enemies defeated and dead ? Please do keep up your great work on this wonderful story of yours.
48WolvmbmGood way to end the war of the sky. Now I wonder what is left for Naruto to face with most of his enemies defeated and dead ? Please do keep up your great work on this wonderful story of yours.
10/16/2022 c25 marquis.shax
what the absolute FUCK you already released this chapter so why in the flying fuck is it saying you've updated this story 9 hours ago?
what the absolute FUCK you already released this chapter so why in the flying fuck is it saying you've updated this story 9 hours ago?
10/16/2022 c25 Guest
Does Naruto know that Neji’s father is the one that infiltrated the Namikaze compound and gave Danzo all those Uzumaki and Namikaze techniques? Pity Danzo isn’t alive to see his treachery exposed and be labeled a TRAITOR to Konoha!
Does Naruto know that Neji’s father is the one that infiltrated the Namikaze compound and gave Danzo all those Uzumaki and Namikaze techniques? Pity Danzo isn’t alive to see his treachery exposed and be labeled a TRAITOR to Konoha!