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9/2/2014 c2 blunt.raps69
Is it bad that I want to hug you right now for bringing one of my favorite storys back. I can't wate to see how you plan on making this story your own. And from what I've seen so fare killa bee isn't to happy about the kidnapping. Hope to see bee as more of a friend to then a teacher. Don't get me wrong I loved the original but I felt that bee should have been portrayed a bit more light hearted like in cannon. All and all can't wate for the next chapter and all that fallow.
9/1/2014 c2 Guest
I enjoyed this chapter so much! But...in the previous version, Hinata was...? NOOOOO... If you're going to write that, Please, Please warn it beforehand in the summary or author's note. I'm really weak in that incident...
9/1/2014 c2 Guest
I look forward to the next chapters!

I am releaved that the Breedign Program isn't as extensive in this version as it was in the previous one!
9/1/2014 c2 Guest
At least Bee and Yugito are A LOT NICER in this story!
9/1/2014 c2 101VFSNAKE
Awesome! Looking forward to more.
9/1/2014 c2 Guest
I hope this is better than the one from the other author; his writing style was not so great because of his bad grammar.
9/1/2014 c2 1Fleightfire
For God's sake don't let Hinata Get into...that program. I Really annd I mean really hope that someone overthrows A before things go to far
9/1/2014 c2 SPark681
Man I hope that bastard doesn't get his wish and somehow Naruto and Hinata are able to eventually get away from kumo anyways keep up the great work!
9/1/2014 c2 UnsanMusho
I hope you don't plan on Hinata getting raped over and over again?
9/1/2014 c1 DBlade59
Good start for the story. Keep up the good work, maybe go for a little less dark Kumo or at least make Naruto and Hinata more badass than in the original story. Have the two as an ANBU duo? Elemental bloodline limit for each? kekkei tori for Naruto? Nibi jinchuuriki Hinata?
8/30/2014 c1 anarion87
nice
8/30/2014 c1 nhalltheway
A good start! Worth waiting to be honest. Next chapter please :))
8/29/2014 c1 101VFSNAKE
Nice! So far so good. Love how things are going so far. Keep it up.
8/29/2014 c1 shadow-hunter104
Is it just me or does there more and more stories about hinata and/or naruto getting kidnapped stories...?

Anyway great chapter. Please update soon.
8/29/2014 c1 Guest
Aaaaa, SORRY! You're Legion343-san! oh, no...cough...well...until next time,bye!
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