for The Maelstrom Saga8/29/2014 c1 Guest
Oh, I forgot the important thing―review!
Can't wait the next chapter! xD Thanks for your writing, Namikaze of Cloud-san!
Oh, I forgot the important thing―review!
Can't wait the next chapter! xD Thanks for your writing, Namikaze of Cloud-san!
8/29/2014 c1 Guest
to SilentSambo88-san
Hi, I'm a japanese narutard. Some Japanese use the honorific '-kun' for a baby boy, so 'Naruto-kun' is no problem. Yep, Japanese language is really complicated, particularly the honorific title and so on. Ja, sayounara!
to SilentSambo88-san
Hi, I'm a japanese narutard. Some Japanese use the honorific '-kun' for a baby boy, so 'Naruto-kun' is no problem. Yep, Japanese language is really complicated, particularly the honorific title and so on. Ja, sayounara!
8/29/2014 c1 DragonPony022
Okay first. AWWWW i love the end of this chapter it was too cute. I have high hopes for this story the idea is interesting. I really hope you say away from having ether of them being raped to be honest that leaves a really bad taste in my mouth to think of that happening to two of my favorite characters. I wonder will they keep the two of them apart to not risk them trying to run away. Anyway i can't wait to see the next chapter, keep up the good work
Okay first. AWWWW i love the end of this chapter it was too cute. I have high hopes for this story the idea is interesting. I really hope you say away from having ether of them being raped to be honest that leaves a really bad taste in my mouth to think of that happening to two of my favorite characters. I wonder will they keep the two of them apart to not risk them trying to run away. Anyway i can't wait to see the next chapter, keep up the good work
8/29/2014 c1 
2SilentSambo88
Even though you may have beat me to successful adoption, if the original author of Namikaze of Cloud is reading this, I've actually thought about making my own version of Children of the Cloud for some time now, though it would adhere a bit closer to the first story, and would end up having lots of crack humor at times. Still, I'm glad you didn't let this story die.
The ending was pretty cute. However, I have a couple of nitpicks. First, your name for the Haruno councilwoman is incorrect. If we're assuming this is Sakura's mother and not a random OC Haruno, then her canon name is Mebuki. (Also, don't make Mebuki pink-haired; Kizashi was the one Sakura inherited her hair color from.) And second, you're using the wrong honorific for Naruto. Since he's only a baby right now, the correct honorific is -chan, not -kun.
2SilentSambo88Even though you may have beat me to successful adoption, if the original author of Namikaze of Cloud is reading this, I've actually thought about making my own version of Children of the Cloud for some time now, though it would adhere a bit closer to the first story, and would end up having lots of crack humor at times. Still, I'm glad you didn't let this story die.
The ending was pretty cute. However, I have a couple of nitpicks. First, your name for the Haruno councilwoman is incorrect. If we're assuming this is Sakura's mother and not a random OC Haruno, then her canon name is Mebuki. (Also, don't make Mebuki pink-haired; Kizashi was the one Sakura inherited her hair color from.) And second, you're using the wrong honorific for Naruto. Since he's only a baby right now, the correct honorific is -chan, not -kun.
8/29/2014 c1 devilzxknight86
On a break from work. Read the first chapter awesome.
On a break from work. Read the first chapter awesome.
8/29/2014 c1 drannakka
awww the ending was so cute(or kawaii if you must) that it makes you want to read more
awww the ending was so cute(or kawaii if you must) that it makes you want to read more
8/29/2014 c1 3bcsclaymore
glad to see that someone adopted the story, and i can't wait to see where ya go with it.
3bcsclaymoreglad to see that someone adopted the story, and i can't wait to see where ya go with it.