for The Maelstrom Saga7/12/2022 c25 
2Areyem Meyera
Thanks for this wonderful story. I hope this gets finished, it doesn’t matter to me when, as as it gets finished within my life time lol
And when it’s done, I hope u get the chance to edit and improve some parts. Like make dedicated a chapter of the kiri civil war and don’t just rely on a quick flash back. I’m guessing you were aiming to surprise us with the sudden arrival of Kiri, but it just turned out to be an ass pull in my opinion, because it’s so out of the blue and no proper builf up. Not that they got any share of the konoha defensive-war, as it’s already over.
Same thing goes to ALL flashback related scenes. Include them in your timeline. Don’t really too much on doing flash backs unless that’s the only way to keep the readers guesing. But other than that, avoid flashbacks.
2Areyem MeyeraThanks for this wonderful story. I hope this gets finished, it doesn’t matter to me when, as as it gets finished within my life time lol
And when it’s done, I hope u get the chance to edit and improve some parts. Like make dedicated a chapter of the kiri civil war and don’t just rely on a quick flash back. I’m guessing you were aiming to surprise us with the sudden arrival of Kiri, but it just turned out to be an ass pull in my opinion, because it’s so out of the blue and no proper builf up. Not that they got any share of the konoha defensive-war, as it’s already over.
Same thing goes to ALL flashback related scenes. Include them in your timeline. Don’t really too much on doing flash backs unless that’s the only way to keep the readers guesing. But other than that, avoid flashbacks.
7/10/2022 c25 Guest
Woohoo! Sayonara, Danzo! Keep up the good work and stay safe from the coronavirus!
Woohoo! Sayonara, Danzo! Keep up the good work and stay safe from the coronavirus!
7/9/2022 c25 thor94
So all the three main villains are dead.
Hope orochimaru is down for good this time and you don't plan another plot device curse mark reviving.
can't wait next chapter
So all the three main villains are dead.
Hope orochimaru is down for good this time and you don't plan another plot device curse mark reviving.
can't wait next chapter
7/9/2022 c25 dbtiger63
Naruto took a lot of damage but survived and killed his enemies! Time to take a breath and take stock of all that has transpired.
Thanks
DB
Naruto took a lot of damage but survived and killed his enemies! Time to take a breath and take stock of all that has transpired.
Thanks
DB
7/9/2022 c25 Guest
What will happen to Hisashi given his toll in helping to plunder the house of Naruto’s parents!?
What will happen to Hisashi given his toll in helping to plunder the house of Naruto’s parents!?
7/9/2022 c25 101VFSNAKE
Awesome! Lomng time coming. Danzo is no more. The spoiled Fire Prince is dead. So are Orochimaru and that other asshole. LONG LIVE THE UZUMAKI!
101VFSNAKEAwesome! Lomng time coming. Danzo is no more. The spoiled Fire Prince is dead. So are Orochimaru and that other asshole. LONG LIVE THE UZUMAKI!
7/9/2022 c25 MojoBlack
This chapter and this story was made of PURE FUN!
Pure fun. Just action, kicking ass, thwarting evil plans.
Real breath of fresh air.
I enjoyed it very much.
This chapter and this story was made of PURE FUN!
Pure fun. Just action, kicking ass, thwarting evil plans.
Real breath of fresh air.
I enjoyed it very much.
7/9/2022 c25 Guest
Great chapter! Keep it up!
Great chapter! Keep it up!