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8/11/2018 c1 ginabowman2005
My heart breaks for Adrian when reading this.

This is how I felt when I first read Adrian's Lost Chapter. The harsh break between Last Sacrifice and the beginnings of Bloodlines when Adrian makes an appearance completely deletes how torn up he was after he catches Rose and Dimitri in the parking lot before she goes in and exposes Tasha then gets shot. He's hurt, for sure, but the first time I read Last Sacrifice I didn't get this feeling of harsh pain.

Adrian's Lost Chapter goes into how much he's hurting but your chapter here, it's explicit, deep, and shows us how much he truly loved Rose; even though he could see she didn't love him as much, he knew she did love him some. She could have been happy with him in their romance.
8/11/2018 c2 ginabowman2005
Wow! Made me tear up.
1/25/2015 c2 a.leer.se.ha.dicho
Very moving.
1/25/2015 c1 a.leer.se.ha.dicho
Interesting
11/11/2014 c2 10hiseask17
Both pieces made me cry, so very beautiful
8/31/2014 c1 23Dimitri's.Smexi.Shewolf
Poor Adrian, I feel so bad for him :( You did a great job with this, well done! Good luck with the competition :)
8/30/2014 c1 8SarahBelikova
Nice start, I like how you portrayed the side of Adrian's loss of Rose...it's not normally done so I like it!

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