for Follow my Leader7/21/2016 c19 Guest
I like GloryxBee and GloryxWeather, but pretty sure Weatherstorm don't wanna. If so, GloryxEbony
I like GloryxBee and GloryxWeather, but pretty sure Weatherstorm don't wanna. If so, GloryxEbony
4/28/2015 c46 
3Mystified Shadow
I am so late on this! But nuuuuu the story! That was a really cute ending but poor Gloryheart. I honestly thought he would be forgiven for his crimes. He did have the right motives but just not very smart xD. My favorite character would have to be Streamflower. Despite, Gloryheart's "troubled" mind, she forgave him. Though, I do support Mallowleaf x Gloryheart. Streamflower x Gloryheart is way more cuter.
3Mystified ShadowI am so late on this! But nuuuuu the story! That was a really cute ending but poor Gloryheart. I honestly thought he would be forgiven for his crimes. He did have the right motives but just not very smart xD. My favorite character would have to be Streamflower. Despite, Gloryheart's "troubled" mind, she forgave him. Though, I do support Mallowleaf x Gloryheart. Streamflower x Gloryheart is way more cuter.
4/25/2015 c46 6Creek The Mischievous Spirit
The ending was perfect! I'd have to say I liked Weatherstorm the best. Awesome story!
6Creek The Mischievous SpiritThe ending was perfect! I'd have to say I liked Weatherstorm the best. Awesome story!
4/25/2015 c46 9DredgenVale
My favorite character is Streamflower! Yay! I love her! She's so much like me! Well, ok, maybe not, but still. I like her the best, probably Gloryheart next. Anyway, great story! Please do a sequel.
9DredgenValeMy favorite character is Streamflower! Yay! I love her! She's so much like me! Well, ok, maybe not, but still. I like her the best, probably Gloryheart next. Anyway, great story! Please do a sequel.
4/25/2015 c46 3RockingReezy
Well I for one think that this ending is very sweet. I like how Dovekit realizes what needs to be done, it just goes to show, kids can be WAYYYYY smarter than adults xD. My favorite character, hmmmm. I think I may have to go with Gloryheart, I mean I love the conflicts he has within himself. He wants to do good, but he feels like he can't. This was very well written, and I'm glad to see it come to an end, sad that I can't read it anymore, but glad that I got to see the end. I hope you write more stories, cause you are a great writer.
3RockingReezyWell I for one think that this ending is very sweet. I like how Dovekit realizes what needs to be done, it just goes to show, kids can be WAYYYYY smarter than adults xD. My favorite character, hmmmm. I think I may have to go with Gloryheart, I mean I love the conflicts he has within himself. He wants to do good, but he feels like he can't. This was very well written, and I'm glad to see it come to an end, sad that I can't read it anymore, but glad that I got to see the end. I hope you write more stories, cause you are a great writer.
4/23/2015 c45 6Creek The Mischievous Spirit
Kinda sad, but it's a very fitting fate for Gloryheart. The happy ending of the chapter adds to the mood of the chapter very well. Can't wait for more!
6Creek The Mischievous SpiritKinda sad, but it's a very fitting fate for Gloryheart. The happy ending of the chapter adds to the mood of the chapter very well. Can't wait for more!
4/21/2015 c34 Guest
"I should clean this up. He asked Raspberrypaw but I can't make her do this. It's inhumane."
This is incorrect. 'Its inhumane.' In no way shape or form are any of these cats 'humane'. Even if they did 'the right thing' it would never be humane as they are cats and aren't humans.
Fix this.
"I should clean this up. He asked Raspberrypaw but I can't make her do this. It's inhumane."
This is incorrect. 'Its inhumane.' In no way shape or form are any of these cats 'humane'. Even if they did 'the right thing' it would never be humane as they are cats and aren't humans.
Fix this.
4/23/2015 c45 3RockingReezy
I was actually wondering why he would still be called Gloryheart in Starclan, I'm glad you remembered that. I'm sorry about you and your friends, I hope all that gets cleared up. And what the hack you talking about? Of you not supposed to be updating this? Cause I think you made a good choice and I shall wait for the last chapter. I am very excited to see this story come to an end, it's a great story. I wait expectantly.
3RockingReezyI was actually wondering why he would still be called Gloryheart in Starclan, I'm glad you remembered that. I'm sorry about you and your friends, I hope all that gets cleared up. And what the hack you talking about? Of you not supposed to be updating this? Cause I think you made a good choice and I shall wait for the last chapter. I am very excited to see this story come to an end, it's a great story. I wait expectantly.
4/15/2015 c44 Wood Cats
Good ending, as is the twist. Pretty good chapter, well done!
Good ending, as is the twist. Pretty good chapter, well done!
4/15/2015 c44 31walkswithwheels
Not the first time a clan is divided by the leader... But the fact that Gloryheart doesn't have easily named by the end confuses me. By all rights, he is the leader, and it would take too much time to take another cat to Moonpool. Perhaps he decides he is comfortable with the position, but not comfortable with the name? That would make sense, considering being deputy brought him misery... If Starclan accepts him, then it explains that the reason he is living on the border is so he would not have to face his old friends.
31walkswithwheelsNot the first time a clan is divided by the leader... But the fact that Gloryheart doesn't have easily named by the end confuses me. By all rights, he is the leader, and it would take too much time to take another cat to Moonpool. Perhaps he decides he is comfortable with the position, but not comfortable with the name? That would make sense, considering being deputy brought him misery... If Starclan accepts him, then it explains that the reason he is living on the border is so he would not have to face his old friends.
4/6/2015 c43 walkswithwheels
So Bittenstar and his cronies are finally going down… I wonder who the new leader will be… It's not Gloryheart, so who else? Hopefully Gloryheart doesn't die here... That would be too cruel… And the three apprentices receive their warrior named after the rebellion by whoever the new leader is. Other than that, I have no idea what happens.
And the battle scenes are fine. I prefer an overview like this as opposed to something that's overly and forcefully trying to be gory…
So Bittenstar and his cronies are finally going down… I wonder who the new leader will be… It's not Gloryheart, so who else? Hopefully Gloryheart doesn't die here... That would be too cruel… And the three apprentices receive their warrior named after the rebellion by whoever the new leader is. Other than that, I have no idea what happens.
And the battle scenes are fine. I prefer an overview like this as opposed to something that's overly and forcefully trying to be gory…
4/5/2015 c43 6Creek The Mischievous Spirit
That's okay! This chapter was a little short and maybe a little rushed but good nonetheless. Keep it up!
6Creek The Mischievous SpiritThat's okay! This chapter was a little short and maybe a little rushed but good nonetheless. Keep it up!