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6/19/2020 c4 HeavenlyDemonAsura
Could use a little work, moving a little fast in development but overall , it's good could be better but so can many things . Show a little of family perspective or situation , some wirld building like in the chapter 3 with forum and all but with more participants like in the worm books . But don't lose heart it's good keep at it please
9/26/2019 c4 Guest
Ok, I'll admit, this is interesting, Yashwant...~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean.
8/11/2019 c4 cageheart01
Sweet story I look forward to more
10/4/2018 c2 1YeTianshi
The whole, his future self came back to the past, seemed a bit... much. Also is this a teen wolf crossover? Seems that way.
10/4/2018 c1 YeTianshi
Seems interesting so far. I took a tiny break from "The Spider" at chapter 24, felt like a time out xD
Decided to check out your other stories, and this one seems promising, I'll probably read the rest too.
8/21/2018 c4 1Monkeymandb
nice please if this is going to be a teen wolf xover that would be sick but if your just using the characters as fill ins then that cool especially if you end up using their personalities as well. I hope this fic isn't abandoned though. I really like you writing style and iv read almost everything that you've written that's not game of thrones related as iv never seen that.
7/29/2018 c4 7hibesdude
Good story, i'm not much of a fan of DC but this was a good story. I dont see why you got such hate for it, I can see why you stopped but I enjoyed it. Not as good as your newer story's though but still great
8/9/2017 c4 timothy.nguyen.73
I was liking the story but I perfer it didn't go the cliche route and keeping your OC cold, cynical, and apathetic. I won't lie to you. Kinda annoyed this Taylor making him soft.
5/18/2017 c1 lel
Superman sucks
2/28/2017 c4 Marshman101
More pls
2/19/2017 c1 565555
I'm getting tired of this,
yash
1/31/2017 c4 jdhmac
¡don delete meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee33!
1/31/2017 c4 spam
Spam spam spam spam spam
1/28/2017 c4 Login to post as
¿Journey begginings? ¡More like journey hiatus!
1/27/2017 c3 gigidi
needs more descriptions
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