for Cliff Diving2/2/2015 c4 Guest
Oh Tenzin a little to late don't you think?
Oh Tenzin a little to late don't you think?
9/25/2014 c4 Destroyer
PLEASE make an alternate ending otherwise we, linzin shippers, will find you and kill you... just kidding xD
But seriously, please make another ending
PLEASE make an alternate ending otherwise we, linzin shippers, will find you and kill you... just kidding xD
But seriously, please make another ending
9/21/2014 c4 Metalbenderinc
WHAT happened ;_;
ARRRRGSGSRAGS you have to continue this !
*heart attack*
WHAT happened ;_;
ARRRRGSGSRAGS you have to continue this !
*heart attack*
9/16/2014 c4 
33avatarfanlin
where does pema get off talking to her like that grrrrr. i love this story and look forward to your update
33avatarfanlinwhere does pema get off talking to her like that grrrrr. i love this story and look forward to your update
9/16/2014 c4 untamableshipper
Oh, shit. My Linzin heart! It has broken to pieces! Whyyyy? This fanfic is still awesome! Keep it up!
Oh, shit. My Linzin heart! It has broken to pieces! Whyyyy? This fanfic is still awesome! Keep it up!
9/14/2014 c3 Guest
Please keep writing on it, this story is amazing
Please keep writing on it, this story is amazing
9/5/2014 c3 Gummi
I'm so glad you updated so soon. A word of advice would be to proof-read your fiction a few times or get a beta reader of some sort as the fairly frequent spelling and grammar mistakes somewhat mar an otherwise great story.
I'm so glad you updated so soon. A word of advice would be to proof-read your fiction a few times or get a beta reader of some sort as the fairly frequent spelling and grammar mistakes somewhat mar an otherwise great story.
9/4/2014 c2 Guest
now thats one way to think things through. Having a bad day? the cliff is high and the water is refreshing, go for it! anyway i like this idea
now thats one way to think things through. Having a bad day? the cliff is high and the water is refreshing, go for it! anyway i like this idea
9/3/2014 c2 Guest
This is so good! Please write more as soon as you caaaaaaaaaaaaan :)
You could make two possible endings, you know, one where she lives and one where she dies and Tenzin's reaction... I kinda like angsty fics :/
This is so good! Please write more as soon as you caaaaaaaaaaaaan :)
You could make two possible endings, you know, one where she lives and one where she dies and Tenzin's reaction... I kinda like angsty fics :/
9/3/2014 c2 quest
interesting story and good written too, now i am really curious, please continue and could you possibly considerate make it a Kyalin pairing?
interesting story and good written too, now i am really curious, please continue and could you possibly considerate make it a Kyalin pairing?
9/3/2014 c2 3TheEvilMelonLord
Oh... ahahaha! I get it now. I'm glad Lin's not dead... at least, not yet. Really well written. Just one thing; it's 'intention' instead of 'intension'
3TheEvilMelonLordOh... ahahaha! I get it now. I'm glad Lin's not dead... at least, not yet. Really well written. Just one thing; it's 'intention' instead of 'intension'
9/1/2014 c1 1CheesyLinFanatic
Wow...speechless. Did she just-? That was deep. I loved it, but it was incredibly sad too.
1CheesyLinFanaticWow...speechless. Did she just-? That was deep. I loved it, but it was incredibly sad too.