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9/5/2014 c1 Cat
Oh wow... not sure what to say about this one, except that I think it's very well written. I have never played either game, and only know about them from things I've been told, but I could still follow the story... and I guessed the truth before "Robert" did... right about the time she said they had a body, and were working on getting it refurbished and prepped.

I am curious what he plans to do when he finds out what the truth is...I imagine someone who has been in Blackwatch could be their own type of mess for the MetalGear World, couldn't they?
9/2/2014 c1 13DarkGidora
I really liked this one, as I said before. I just wanted to add I like the little thoughts that enter Cross's head, like his distaste for Randall and his repeated views of the generic-ness of the doctor. You always fill your writing with a lot of little touches that draw me into it.

As an aside I also keep drawing the parallels between a prominent New England professional sports franchise and the La-Li-Lu-Le-Lo.

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