for Hunted1/27/2020 c20 Harry Snape-Potter
Towards the end if I had been felicity I would’ve even let him in let alone get the close to me to kiss me like he did to her. The second she felt his hands on her... I would’ve pushed him away and be like “we are done! End of story.”
Towards the end if I had been felicity I would’ve even let him in let alone get the close to me to kiss me like he did to her. The second she felt his hands on her... I would’ve pushed him away and be like “we are done! End of story.”
7/6/2018 c28 
27ChiefPam
Finally! It's about damn time. And very well-written. Thank you! It was a long, slow burn but the payoff was lovely.
(I guess I'm over being mad at you about the Isabel thing.)
27ChiefPamFinally! It's about damn time. And very well-written. Thank you! It was a long, slow burn but the payoff was lovely.
(I guess I'm over being mad at you about the Isabel thing.)
7/6/2018 c21 ChiefPam
Coming in way late, here... but just so you know, at least one person is still reading your novel. You've got me sucked in... I wasn't going to comment, but I was so happy to read the last sentence of this part that I wanted to say something.
Oliver thinks Felicity deserves better than him, so he's going to *be* better.
That is awesome and unexpected, because canon Oliver just hates himself too much sometimes. Thank you! And the idea of the soulmate bond is always fun, too. Very much looking forward to seeing how this plays out!
(But don't think this means I'm not mad at you about the Isabel thing.)
Coming in way late, here... but just so you know, at least one person is still reading your novel. You've got me sucked in... I wasn't going to comment, but I was so happy to read the last sentence of this part that I wanted to say something.
Oliver thinks Felicity deserves better than him, so he's going to *be* better.
That is awesome and unexpected, because canon Oliver just hates himself too much sometimes. Thank you! And the idea of the soulmate bond is always fun, too. Very much looking forward to seeing how this plays out!
(But don't think this means I'm not mad at you about the Isabel thing.)
3/15/2018 c35 4mfaerie32
I seriously can't put into words how amazing I found the evolution from him not able to stand the idea of what she was, to him making pancakes for their little girl. It was beautiful and very well done. I do hope Felicity ages though. I can't remember if you said earlier in the story what kind of vampire she was. Just that she was. I love how you kept Tommy alive & merged him into their group. I love that Roy stayed w/them in your story. (I'm so happy he's back on the show for the moment). Thank you for an amazingly well-written story that flowed nicely and had realistic issues meshed into the supernatural. This will definitely be put on my favs list. )
4mfaerie32I seriously can't put into words how amazing I found the evolution from him not able to stand the idea of what she was, to him making pancakes for their little girl. It was beautiful and very well done. I do hope Felicity ages though. I can't remember if you said earlier in the story what kind of vampire she was. Just that she was. I love how you kept Tommy alive & merged him into their group. I love that Roy stayed w/them in your story. (I'm so happy he's back on the show for the moment). Thank you for an amazingly well-written story that flowed nicely and had realistic issues meshed into the supernatural. This will definitely be put on my favs list. )
3/15/2018 c34 mfaerie32
If she's a hybrid still, doesn't that mean she won't age? Kinda puts a hamper on your relationship if one of you can age & the other can't. ( The thought makes me sad.
If she's a hybrid still, doesn't that mean she won't age? Kinda puts a hamper on your relationship if one of you can age & the other can't. ( The thought makes me sad.
3/15/2018 c33 mfaerie32
I loved the twist that Isobel was the master. I seriously was not expecting Slade to just be a pawn. Well done.
I loved the twist that Isobel was the master. I seriously was not expecting Slade to just be a pawn. Well done.
3/14/2018 c28 mfaerie32
Well damn girl. I definitely heed a cold shower now. That was just perfect. So freakin' intimate & hot at the same time. It was beautiful.
Well damn girl. I definitely heed a cold shower now. That was just perfect. So freakin' intimate & hot at the same time. It was beautiful.
3/14/2018 c18 mfaerie32
Well damn...I would say I need a cold shower now, but as it's 230 in the morning, that's not gonna happen. Lol.
Sorry this is the first review I've left. I've been chewing through the chapters so quickly. I'm very addicted to this story. ) I love the realistic slow evolution of their relationship.
Well damn...I would say I need a cold shower now, but as it's 230 in the morning, that's not gonna happen. Lol.
Sorry this is the first review I've left. I've been chewing through the chapters so quickly. I'm very addicted to this story. ) I love the realistic slow evolution of their relationship.
2/1/2018 c35 2mommabuilder
Whoop whoop and awwwww no. Really really enjoyed this so much fantastic story and ending. Totally ready for any more one shots you do. Thank you for entertaining with this story been brilliant to read
2mommabuilderWhoop whoop and awwwww no. Really really enjoyed this so much fantastic story and ending. Totally ready for any more one shots you do. Thank you for entertaining with this story been brilliant to read
1/31/2018 c35 Lililovingreading
Loved every chapter of this story
Such a fun and good story.
Great job!
Loved every chapter of this story
Such a fun and good story.
Great job!
1/30/2018 c35 3Saphir Blue
*tear drop*
It always feels the same when a good story end. Like you will have to wait an eternity to find something worth reading again.
So thank you because while finding a Olicity story as good as yours will certainly be a challenge, your words will definitely stay with me the whole time I will be searching for something to quench my thirst.
I wish for you to be able to write another masterpiece and I will wait patiently for your return if it ever happen. Good luck to you, old friend.
3Saphir Blue*tear drop*
It always feels the same when a good story end. Like you will have to wait an eternity to find something worth reading again.
So thank you because while finding a Olicity story as good as yours will certainly be a challenge, your words will definitely stay with me the whole time I will be searching for something to quench my thirst.
I wish for you to be able to write another masterpiece and I will wait patiently for your return if it ever happen. Good luck to you, old friend.