for Laconic10/13/2015 c12 A.R
*flops over on the floor* Ahhh! My tiny heart can barely take all this. I love it so much.
I found your story a week ago and can't thank you enough for such interesting reading material for those boring lulls during work. I adore Darkstrike. I like her strength of character. While she's getting physically stronger she's becoming a stronger person for it. When she starts heading into trouble, I find myself saying "Don't do the thing, honey. Oh, you went and did the thing." I think about this story while going about my day wondering what she'll do to get over her trials. Also, I love your characterization for Soundwave. You really know how to make him "cold, aloof" character without falling into generic stock tropes. And oh my god, the tension between the two is such delicious torture!
Keep up the great writing! I look forward to the next update. :)
*flops over on the floor* Ahhh! My tiny heart can barely take all this. I love it so much.
I found your story a week ago and can't thank you enough for such interesting reading material for those boring lulls during work. I adore Darkstrike. I like her strength of character. While she's getting physically stronger she's becoming a stronger person for it. When she starts heading into trouble, I find myself saying "Don't do the thing, honey. Oh, you went and did the thing." I think about this story while going about my day wondering what she'll do to get over her trials. Also, I love your characterization for Soundwave. You really know how to make him "cold, aloof" character without falling into generic stock tropes. And oh my god, the tension between the two is such delicious torture!
Keep up the great writing! I look forward to the next update. :)
10/12/2015 c12 Stick
Love love love it. 3 can't wait for the next
Love love love it. 3 can't wait for the next
10/12/2015 c12 
14Alexandra-Sasha
To my favorite stories updated in one day,yours and 'Promise'
Thanks!:)
I like your writing, all the details, nicely selected words so. It make the story really interesting to read:) I'm not an English person, so I have to translate some in order to understand, but it is worth the efforts;)
I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
Darkstrike cried!:((( Soundwave! You're so hardsparked! ( but something is telling me she'll be able to melt its coldness soon;))
And, cool, Rocket is coming back:) waiting
14Alexandra-SashaTo my favorite stories updated in one day,yours and 'Promise'
Thanks!:)
I like your writing, all the details, nicely selected words so. It make the story really interesting to read:) I'm not an English person, so I have to translate some in order to understand, but it is worth the efforts;)
I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
Darkstrike cried!:((( Soundwave! You're so hardsparked! ( but something is telling me she'll be able to melt its coldness soon;))
And, cool, Rocket is coming back:) waiting
10/11/2015 c12 13The Jagdpanther
Very good chapter didn't have a lot of violence like the last on which is understandable, but still good. Can't wait for the next one and thanks for the thanks. P.S what is your favorite version/ generation of Soundwave?
13The JagdpantherVery good chapter didn't have a lot of violence like the last on which is understandable, but still good. Can't wait for the next one and thanks for the thanks. P.S what is your favorite version/ generation of Soundwave?
10/11/2015 c12 Xemnass
AH THE TORTURE! I really enjoyed this chapter and the fact that Soundwave was just as angry about Rocketshield disrespecting him as well. Once again love the little teasing moments of sparks between Soundwave and Darkstrike. Can't wait till the next chapter!
AH THE TORTURE! I really enjoyed this chapter and the fact that Soundwave was just as angry about Rocketshield disrespecting him as well. Once again love the little teasing moments of sparks between Soundwave and Darkstrike. Can't wait till the next chapter!
10/11/2015 c12 3Varghjartat
Ah, congratulations for reach over over 100 reviews, my friend. You have made a long way and you've done it so well. Honestly thank you a lot for your English helps me to better understand because English is not my first language. Anyway, time to focus on this chapter.
Tensed like always. I feel sad for Darkstrike to be called Soundwave's whore which is so stupid said by RocketShield! He should really deserve a hard smack in his face by Soundwave.
Just a note; you left Megatron by mistake when it should be Megatronus. Sorry for be little picky on mistakes, I want only the best for you. Also, it's a big chapter so don't be surprised for that. Mistakes can happen. And yes, I hope to read more soon. Just don't update too fast. And a special chapter?! Now I changed my mind, HURRY UP!
3VarghjartatAh, congratulations for reach over over 100 reviews, my friend. You have made a long way and you've done it so well. Honestly thank you a lot for your English helps me to better understand because English is not my first language. Anyway, time to focus on this chapter.
Tensed like always. I feel sad for Darkstrike to be called Soundwave's whore which is so stupid said by RocketShield! He should really deserve a hard smack in his face by Soundwave.
Just a note; you left Megatron by mistake when it should be Megatronus. Sorry for be little picky on mistakes, I want only the best for you. Also, it's a big chapter so don't be surprised for that. Mistakes can happen. And yes, I hope to read more soon. Just don't update too fast. And a special chapter?! Now I changed my mind, HURRY UP!
10/11/2015 c12 5AroraHybrid
I can't wait for the next update! It was about time she kicked that oaf's aft. Wonderful chapter dear, i will be awaiting the next one!
5AroraHybridI can't wait for the next update! It was about time she kicked that oaf's aft. Wonderful chapter dear, i will be awaiting the next one!
10/11/2015 c12 9Da DJ Jazzy
O...M...G...
This has to one of my absolute favorite chapters of all time! I love, love, love it!
Continue onward!
9Da DJ JazzyO...M...G...
This has to one of my absolute favorite chapters of all time! I love, love, love it!
Continue onward!
10/1/2015 c11 5AroraHybrid
I love this so much! You write Soundwave so well its amazing! I love that he is getting possessive! The fact that he marked her! Omg i love it. I cant wait for the sexual tension to just snap! Please update soon!
5AroraHybridI love this so much! You write Soundwave so well its amazing! I love that he is getting possessive! The fact that he marked her! Omg i love it. I cant wait for the sexual tension to just snap! Please update soon!
9/30/2015 c11 6Generalfanatic
Such wonder everywhere. I congaluate for gaining popluarity. I've enjoyed this too.
6GeneralfanaticSuch wonder everywhere. I congaluate for gaining popluarity. I've enjoyed this too.
9/26/2015 c11 Stick
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9/26/2015 c11 Guest
finallly new chapters ,i was so bored with other stories that arent as good as this one
finallly new chapters ,i was so bored with other stories that arent as good as this one
9/26/2015 c11 13The Jagdpanther
Very good chapter. It was worth the wait. Can't wait for the next one and love how you write Soundwave.
13The JagdpantherVery good chapter. It was worth the wait. Can't wait for the next one and love how you write Soundwave.
9/26/2015 c11 3Varghjartat
Now that was really great chapter to say. The battle action turned surprisingly well and I liked how Darkstrike actually spared the mechs to give them the humiliation of them being defeated by her, a gladiator femme! I don't like Airachnid much but you are doing very well with her personality. I hope to see and read more soon. Update soon when you can!
3VarghjartatNow that was really great chapter to say. The battle action turned surprisingly well and I liked how Darkstrike actually spared the mechs to give them the humiliation of them being defeated by her, a gladiator femme! I don't like Airachnid much but you are doing very well with her personality. I hope to see and read more soon. Update soon when you can!