for Laconic4/18/2015 c7 Guest
Please undate! I love how done this story, especially Darkstrike's personality.
Please undate! I love how done this story, especially Darkstrike's personality.
3/15/2015 c7 Guest
This is AWESOME!
This is AWESOME!
3/14/2015 c7 Guest
You're doing a super fantastical job! Keep it up :)
You're doing a super fantastical job! Keep it up :)
3/8/2015 c7 19MedixNight
So, I will start a review.
I love how you capture Soundwave's true character, it is rather a unique and advanced ability of a fanfic writer to capture the true thoughts and complexity of a canon character. I really want to take lessons from you honestly. Writers fail to capture this and yes, I am one of them.
And the relationship between the two is realistic! I love it! This takes its own pace calmly, with the two slowly/realistically start having feelings.
As for critique, I will admit that the complex words are making me dizzy. You use these words that make me re-read a sentence 3 times before I understand it.
Other then that, this story deserves a 9.6/10!
So, I will start a review.
I love how you capture Soundwave's true character, it is rather a unique and advanced ability of a fanfic writer to capture the true thoughts and complexity of a canon character. I really want to take lessons from you honestly. Writers fail to capture this and yes, I am one of them.
And the relationship between the two is realistic! I love it! This takes its own pace calmly, with the two slowly/realistically start having feelings.
As for critique, I will admit that the complex words are making me dizzy. You use these words that make me re-read a sentence 3 times before I understand it.
Other then that, this story deserves a 9.6/10!
2/27/2015 c7 
6turtlelly
Finally! :) ive been waiting to hear more forever; this is so interesting bc hardly anyone ever does anything with Soundwave. Please keep writing!
6turtlellyFinally! :) ive been waiting to hear more forever; this is so interesting bc hardly anyone ever does anything with Soundwave. Please keep writing!
2/27/2015 c7 14Alexandra-Sasha
Yes! You updated)))
I started dancing when I saw it ...))
I liked the meeting with Soundwave in the energon room, and when magnesium wanted to find out the name Dirkstripe nearly said, hehe.
Waiting for the next)
14Alexandra-SashaYes! You updated)))
I started dancing when I saw it ...))
I liked the meeting with Soundwave in the energon room, and when magnesium wanted to find out the name Dirkstripe nearly said, hehe.
Waiting for the next)
2/26/2015 c7 Xemnass
Love the chapter! So glad you didn't decide to leave this story! I always look forwards to a new chapter from you. I like the way you brought in Laserbeak. Also are we going to get an appearance from Sentor Ratbat? Or any of the Senators anytime soon?
Love the chapter! So glad you didn't decide to leave this story! I always look forwards to a new chapter from you. I like the way you brought in Laserbeak. Also are we going to get an appearance from Sentor Ratbat? Or any of the Senators anytime soon?
2/26/2015 c7 Neon
I'm not upset, i mean no offense but I hold an out of sight out of mind view, since I'm ADD. Plus the fact that my sister and I's fic Search for the Allspark hasn't been updated in so long. If you read it that would be awesome.
Okay, so... Okay, finally remembered my question. Okay, so will Soundwave and Darkstrike ever fight? I know they're far apart in rank, but WILL they ever fight?
When is Darkstrike's next fight? I wanna see if she'll kill a bot if pushed.
I'm not upset, i mean no offense but I hold an out of sight out of mind view, since I'm ADD. Plus the fact that my sister and I's fic Search for the Allspark hasn't been updated in so long. If you read it that would be awesome.
Okay, so... Okay, finally remembered my question. Okay, so will Soundwave and Darkstrike ever fight? I know they're far apart in rank, but WILL they ever fight?
When is Darkstrike's next fight? I wanna see if she'll kill a bot if pushed.
2/26/2015 c7 3Varghjartat
EEEEEEEEEEEEE! Finally another great chapter to read at long last. I've missed reading this much. Damn, damn and double damn, now this was very hot one! I was so close on the edge of my chair by reading this, and seeing Darkstrike so submissive to Soundwave made me to think certainly that we'll get more sexy moments soon. I can't wait to read more for this is seriously getting very hot now. HURRY UP!
3VarghjartatEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Finally another great chapter to read at long last. I've missed reading this much. Damn, damn and double damn, now this was very hot one! I was so close on the edge of my chair by reading this, and seeing Darkstrike so submissive to Soundwave made me to think certainly that we'll get more sexy moments soon. I can't wait to read more for this is seriously getting very hot now. HURRY UP!
2/23/2015 c6 cybergeek84
I beg u and I don't beg to continue this fic. This is probably the best soundwave and oc fic ever.
I beg u and I don't beg to continue this fic. This is probably the best soundwave and oc fic ever.
2/8/2015 c1 Xemnass
Please update soon! Love this story! And btw long chapters don't bother me, longer the better!
Please update soon! Love this story! And btw long chapters don't bother me, longer the better!