for Laconic9/6/2014 c1 
3Varghjartat
Oj, oj, oj, oj, such an intensive start! I really enjoyed reading this! So dark, so tensed and so already gripping enough to capture my attention. I really feel sad for Darkstrike. I hope she'll not get into trouble with the other Gladiators soon, also I'm crossing my fingers that she'll survive far enough to make herself free from the Gladiator pits. I think you made an excellent work with Soundwave's character; very well done!
Well, you said that it won't be many chapters if you continue write on this pace... actually I'd say the opposite. I'm a fan of long stories with long chapters. I don't care how fast or slow the pace is, what matters is you focus on the development between Soundwave and Darkstrike as well the plot's development. The deeper you focus on the development, the better it goes.
I enjoyed much reading this one. I may not be directly a Decepticon fan, (I'm an Autobot supporter XD) but I decided why not try something new and also give this story a chance? I hope you'll update soon :D
3VarghjartatOj, oj, oj, oj, such an intensive start! I really enjoyed reading this! So dark, so tensed and so already gripping enough to capture my attention. I really feel sad for Darkstrike. I hope she'll not get into trouble with the other Gladiators soon, also I'm crossing my fingers that she'll survive far enough to make herself free from the Gladiator pits. I think you made an excellent work with Soundwave's character; very well done!
Well, you said that it won't be many chapters if you continue write on this pace... actually I'd say the opposite. I'm a fan of long stories with long chapters. I don't care how fast or slow the pace is, what matters is you focus on the development between Soundwave and Darkstrike as well the plot's development. The deeper you focus on the development, the better it goes.
I enjoyed much reading this one. I may not be directly a Decepticon fan, (I'm an Autobot supporter XD) but I decided why not try something new and also give this story a chance? I hope you'll update soon :D
9/4/2014 c1 Savvy Orion childofcommander
Wow. Now this caught my attention good. Very good for a first chap. I believe Soundwave's character was right on track. It didn't seem too occ. In fact I think you did very well on how his mind work and how his actions were. I can understand how his character are one of the tough ones to write but you managed well. I was hooked on every word. Very good. Keep this up and please more chaps. I want to know how this goes. S.O out.
Wow. Now this caught my attention good. Very good for a first chap. I believe Soundwave's character was right on track. It didn't seem too occ. In fact I think you did very well on how his mind work and how his actions were. I can understand how his character are one of the tough ones to write but you managed well. I was hooked on every word. Very good. Keep this up and please more chaps. I want to know how this goes. S.O out.