10/5/2020 c18 Guest
Will we get a chapter 18 with the reaction of soundwave with the Insectibot incident or will everything be edited first

9/27/2020 c18 6Dome of Bones
Well this was a surprise and a half to see pop up in my notifications. Looking forward to see how you continue this. Welcome back.

9/26/2020 c18 Epiczen
Yes Yeeeeeeees. Loved the story and was sad it might not get completed. Love that its back.

9/26/2020 c18 Herobrine0928
Glad your back I love this story and I'm very excited to see where you take it.

9/2/2020 c17 kerozeron
A great story of soundwave/oc ! I begin to wonder which side Darkstrike may choose in the war. Really hope you can continue on this

5/15/2020 c17 Wika0304
please update, it's brilliant

11/25/2018 c17 accountdeactivated1234567890
Omg! This is just so so amazing! Such a great Soundwave x OC fanfic! I really enjoyed reading this and I really really do hope that you continue this. There are a few errors on grammar and some misspelled words, but nothing to worry about. These can be edited easily. I really love your OC, Darkstrike, as she was a character of many flaws. Personally, I have moments, while reading some chapters, that I find her so irritating, when I finally understood why she acts the ways she is: control and approval, above all else. Some bad experiences can really take a toll on oneself and you really showed this side to your OC. Really great work! :)
Also, I’m pretty sure this is going to be a long long story if you consider going over the War For Cybertron and Fall Of Cybertron. Suggestion: You don’t need to go over some details unless you’re going to tell Darkstrike’s side of the story. I believe you can retell the stories of these two major events within six chapters, I guess. You write long chapters so I think six would be enough. I guess 3 chapters for War For Cybertron and 3 chapters for Fall Of Cybertron. But, that’s just a suggestion.
Really great work! Please do continue this if you get the chance! :) Keep this up!