for Laconic5/30/2016 c15 Guest
Really good! Keep it up!
Really good! Keep it up!
5/15/2016 c15 crazyscribble
are sunstreaker and sideswipe going to turn up? love the story and the character development by the way. A lot of these OCs come in all tough and ready and you wonder how they got there, which you have. so go you. Keep it coming.
are sunstreaker and sideswipe going to turn up? love the story and the character development by the way. A lot of these OCs come in all tough and ready and you wonder how they got there, which you have. so go you. Keep it coming.
4/18/2016 c15 AshMountian216
Please update! This story is so good and interesting. Love how you did the pits cuz there's not many stories about kaons pits. I like it :)
Please update! This story is so good and interesting. Love how you did the pits cuz there's not many stories about kaons pits. I like it :)
4/16/2016 c13 
2ChuckNorris'ssister
Hehehe.. Well now.
This went from scary to saucy verey VERY quickly~
Not that I'm complaining or anything~
2ChuckNorris'ssisterHehehe.. Well now.
This went from scary to saucy verey VERY quickly~
Not that I'm complaining or anything~
3/20/2016 c2 ChuckNorris'ssister
I fucking love this. The violence! The bloodshed! The personality!
And Soundwave! Where do i even start?! He's perfectly in character!
I fucking love this. The violence! The bloodshed! The personality!
And Soundwave! Where do i even start?! He's perfectly in character!
3/12/2016 c15 1SeaKissed140
So happy you updated again! I really love this chapter, and Darkstrike and Orion were definitely amusing. Hehe, what's SW gonna do when he finds out?
1SeaKissed140So happy you updated again! I really love this chapter, and Darkstrike and Orion were definitely amusing. Hehe, what's SW gonna do when he finds out?
3/10/2016 c15 graceful but forgetful
Fantastic chapter (as always!), but beyond that, very interesting... I cannot wait to see how everything unfolds.
Fantastic chapter (as always!), but beyond that, very interesting... I cannot wait to see how everything unfolds.
3/10/2016 c15 13The Jagdpanther
Oh I can't wait till Soundwave and Orion meet I'm sure sparks will fly. I enjoyed this chapter even if it was little shorter than the last one. Keep up the good work. Now here's my question: Will Blitzwing appear at all and will we see Darkstrike fight in the arena again? Can't wait for the next chapter.
13The JagdpantherOh I can't wait till Soundwave and Orion meet I'm sure sparks will fly. I enjoyed this chapter even if it was little shorter than the last one. Keep up the good work. Now here's my question: Will Blitzwing appear at all and will we see Darkstrike fight in the arena again? Can't wait for the next chapter.
3/10/2016 c15 3Varghjartat
Oj, oj, oj... now that I didn't expect to happen directly with Soundwave helping with Darkstrike in the showering room and the kiss, damn. And then there's little Orion Pax. Hmm, I get a little tensing bad feeling about Megatronous. Sometimes tells me we're knocking on the door for huge and drastic changes ahead of us now.
I'm puzzled but thrilled over Darkstrike's view of the system. There will be always a few people on the peak of the pyramid while there's millions on the bottom; injustice, corruption and mistreatment are in every civilization, either highly sophisticated or primitive ones. I'm glad that Darkstrike is a femme with the voice to question about the system and may join the rebelution too.
However, I have another bad feeling that is happening now or can happen with Darkstrike, which I want to give you the question:
Is Darkstrike getting the risk to develop Stockholm Syndrome?
Anyway, good so far and getting more thrilling as we'll see what happens next with Darkstrike. I hope you update soon as possible when you can.
3VarghjartatOj, oj, oj... now that I didn't expect to happen directly with Soundwave helping with Darkstrike in the showering room and the kiss, damn. And then there's little Orion Pax. Hmm, I get a little tensing bad feeling about Megatronous. Sometimes tells me we're knocking on the door for huge and drastic changes ahead of us now.
I'm puzzled but thrilled over Darkstrike's view of the system. There will be always a few people on the peak of the pyramid while there's millions on the bottom; injustice, corruption and mistreatment are in every civilization, either highly sophisticated or primitive ones. I'm glad that Darkstrike is a femme with the voice to question about the system and may join the rebelution too.
However, I have another bad feeling that is happening now or can happen with Darkstrike, which I want to give you the question:
Is Darkstrike getting the risk to develop Stockholm Syndrome?
Anyway, good so far and getting more thrilling as we'll see what happens next with Darkstrike. I hope you update soon as possible when you can.
3/10/2016 c15 Guest
Noooooo give me moreeeee pleaseeee
Noooooo give me moreeeee pleaseeee
3/9/2016 c15 49Nipan and Yuputka
SCREAAAAMMM! WHAT WILL SOUNDWAVE DOOO? WILL HE ATTACK ORION? WILL HE PUNISH HER? WHY DOESN'T HE WANT HER SHARING INFORMATION ANYWAYS? PLLEEEAAASSEEE UPDATE! SOOOOOON!
49Nipan and YuputkaSCREAAAAMMM! WHAT WILL SOUNDWAVE DOOO? WILL HE ATTACK ORION? WILL HE PUNISH HER? WHY DOESN'T HE WANT HER SHARING INFORMATION ANYWAYS? PLLEEEAAASSEEE UPDATE! SOOOOOON!
2/25/2016 c14 6Generalfanatic
This was very good after so long in not updating. For the sake of myself and the readers, I'd appreciate another update soon please.
6GeneralfanaticThis was very good after so long in not updating. For the sake of myself and the readers, I'd appreciate another update soon please.
2/25/2016 c14 Guest
When are you going to update?
When are you going to update?