
2/2/2016 c14
3Varghjartat
Heya, sorry for a late review. Haven't been feeling for reading mood lately but here's the review you deserve. So far, it's really interesting. I got a little squeal escaped out from my throat when Orion came in, I didn't expect to see him directly so I'm approving it. I got a bit stunned to see Lockdown. I didn't expect him either, but it's still good you bring surprises.
Damn, clearly Soundwave's gone dominated and jealous one. I hope that this does not end up a jailor-and-prisoner relationship between him and Darkstrike. To be honest, I don't think they need sparklings in the future. It feels too easy on that path. BUT if you surprises us Darkstrike with a big baby belly then I'd rather shoot myself twice than get excited about it.
On other hand, I've noticed one thing you might need to be noticed: It wasn't heard of, of Gladiators escaping. Does it meant to be like this: It wasn't heard of Gladiators escaping? I want only to help you even if my options suck a lot
Anyway, I hope you update soon

Heya, sorry for a late review. Haven't been feeling for reading mood lately but here's the review you deserve. So far, it's really interesting. I got a little squeal escaped out from my throat when Orion came in, I didn't expect to see him directly so I'm approving it. I got a bit stunned to see Lockdown. I didn't expect him either, but it's still good you bring surprises.
Damn, clearly Soundwave's gone dominated and jealous one. I hope that this does not end up a jailor-and-prisoner relationship between him and Darkstrike. To be honest, I don't think they need sparklings in the future. It feels too easy on that path. BUT if you surprises us Darkstrike with a big baby belly then I'd rather shoot myself twice than get excited about it.
On other hand, I've noticed one thing you might need to be noticed: It wasn't heard of, of Gladiators escaping. Does it meant to be like this: It wasn't heard of Gladiators escaping? I want only to help you even if my options suck a lot
Anyway, I hope you update soon
1/29/2016 c14
6turtlelly
AHHHHMYGOSH SOOOO GOOD. You are doing so well with this fic! There really should be more Soundwave fanfictions, and I would write one myself but he's a pretty complex character and the end result would probably be complete crap bc my writing sucks. Plus, it would never live up to the best Soundwave fic ever, Laconic! ;) Write on!

AHHHHMYGOSH SOOOO GOOD. You are doing so well with this fic! There really should be more Soundwave fanfictions, and I would write one myself but he's a pretty complex character and the end result would probably be complete crap bc my writing sucks. Plus, it would never live up to the best Soundwave fic ever, Laconic! ;) Write on!
1/28/2016 c14 cybergeek84
YESSSSS! You updated. Thank you soooo much, keep up the good work please. And i love the g1 soundwave reference you snaked in there, that was quite clever.
YESSSSS! You updated. Thank you soooo much, keep up the good work please. And i love the g1 soundwave reference you snaked in there, that was quite clever.
1/27/2016 c14 Darkness Protects
The hype I felt waiting for this was real and sir it is amazing also a question did you use to have a update system as in for example update every week? Not meaning in a mean way just curious
The hype I felt waiting for this was real and sir it is amazing also a question did you use to have a update system as in for example update every week? Not meaning in a mean way just curious
1/27/2016 c14 Sunny Side Up
Heh, well this is an interesting start to their...unique relationship. I'm catching a lot of red flags that symbolize unhealthiness. It'll feel passionate and everything for Darkstrike, but if Soundwave keeps that up, then naturally she'll start to rebel, and grow frustrated if he refuses to "allow" her any independence for her own person.
...But I also caught the little Easter Egg with G1 Soundwave's mask and visor. That was very clever! :D
Heh, well this is an interesting start to their...unique relationship. I'm catching a lot of red flags that symbolize unhealthiness. It'll feel passionate and everything for Darkstrike, but if Soundwave keeps that up, then naturally she'll start to rebel, and grow frustrated if he refuses to "allow" her any independence for her own person.
...But I also caught the little Easter Egg with G1 Soundwave's mask and visor. That was very clever! :D
1/27/2016 c14
13The Jagdpanther
I so saw Soundwave's reaction coming and it was pretty funny when she saw he noticed the necklace. I like the chapter it was a good way to get back into the story without much happening. To be honest for some reason I thought she was going to see Ratchet not Lockdown. Did you use animated Lockdown? Just wondering something so Darkstrike's wings are pointed downward correct, so that when she transforms would her wings be like the seekers in War/Fall of cybertron and like a su-47? Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter. Transform and Rise UP!

I so saw Soundwave's reaction coming and it was pretty funny when she saw he noticed the necklace. I like the chapter it was a good way to get back into the story without much happening. To be honest for some reason I thought she was going to see Ratchet not Lockdown. Did you use animated Lockdown? Just wondering something so Darkstrike's wings are pointed downward correct, so that when she transforms would her wings be like the seekers in War/Fall of cybertron and like a su-47? Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter. Transform and Rise UP!
1/27/2016 c14
5AroraHybrid
Yaaaaassssssssssss i love this so much i missed seeing updates~ happy birthday btw

Yaaaaassssssssssss i love this so much i missed seeing updates~ happy birthday btw
1/27/2016 c14
49Nipan and Yuputka
OH MY GOD! SOUNDWAVE'S POSSESSIVE/JEALOUS! SLAG SO HOT! LOVE YA SOUNDERS! Is DarkStrike going to listen? Or is Soundwave going to try to kill Orion?

OH MY GOD! SOUNDWAVE'S POSSESSIVE/JEALOUS! SLAG SO HOT! LOVE YA SOUNDERS! Is DarkStrike going to listen? Or is Soundwave going to try to kill Orion?
1/26/2016 c14
3QueenOfTheSilver98
I love this possessive version of Soundwave, it's so amusing! So glad you updated and happy birthday!

I love this possessive version of Soundwave, it's so amusing! So glad you updated and happy birthday!
1/26/2016 c14
1JahnDavis34
Oh boy! What a chapter. I see Soundwave has definitely become very possessive of Darkstrike now. Swindle is still a jerk. I really enjoyed Orion's portrayal here. I think that's how he would be. Eyes open wide and proud of Iacon. I'm definitely interested to see where this relationship with Orion, Darkstrike, and Soundwave goes. I like the hostility. It definitely suits Soundwave. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh boy! What a chapter. I see Soundwave has definitely become very possessive of Darkstrike now. Swindle is still a jerk. I really enjoyed Orion's portrayal here. I think that's how he would be. Eyes open wide and proud of Iacon. I'm definitely interested to see where this relationship with Orion, Darkstrike, and Soundwave goes. I like the hostility. It definitely suits Soundwave. Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/11/2016 c13
4BeeHideLover
I love this story. I've always wanted to see Soundwave without his visor on. I really like your OC and the way you depict Soundwave's character. And Oh My God! LOVED this chapter. So happy they both gave in. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this story. I've always wanted to see Soundwave without his visor on. I really like your OC and the way you depict Soundwave's character. And Oh My God! LOVED this chapter. So happy they both gave in. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/19/2015 c12 darkwolf
xD I'm at chapter 5 and darkwolf, sorry I find that funny sorry... I'm going to make an account now and btw do you have quotev?
xD I'm at chapter 5 and darkwolf, sorry I find that funny sorry... I'm going to make an account now and btw do you have quotev?
12/19/2015 c13 TheForgottenOne
woooowww, that was interesting xD keep up the good work
woooowww, that was interesting xD keep up the good work