
5/8/2018 c2 Rebmul
and rias shows what a massive bitch she is if that had been goku I think she would have been space dust she literally said she was watching him die so she could force him to be a member of her peerage
and rias shows what a massive bitch she is if that had been goku I think she would have been space dust she literally said she was watching him die so she could force him to be a member of her peerage
5/6/2018 c32 Omer Durrani
Homie this is by far the best crossover of my favourite shows i have ever read
Cant wait for chapter 33 and the rest of the arc to unfold
Best Wishes
Homie this is by far the best crossover of my favourite shows i have ever read
Cant wait for chapter 33 and the rest of the arc to unfold
Best Wishes
4/23/2018 c32 Envoy of Torrask
This is truly a great series so far.
I hope to see more of it soon.
This is truly a great series so far.
I hope to see more of it soon.
4/6/2018 c6 Guest
Where is trunks
Where is trunks
3/25/2018 c2 TenshiNoAka
Ew, this is bad, really bad.
Its like watching twilight.
I wanna punch myself in the face
Oh you so cute, kyaaa
Watch those muscle, kyaa
You're strong plus you're cute too, kyaaa
Look at these hot chick
Is this fucking american pie?
Kill me.
Is that really the most interresting thing you could think of while writting?
I'm sorry but expect an immature audience, no one would think that its interresting
Ew, this is bad, really bad.
Its like watching twilight.
I wanna punch myself in the face
Oh you so cute, kyaaa
Watch those muscle, kyaa
You're strong plus you're cute too, kyaaa
Look at these hot chick
Is this fucking american pie?
Kill me.
Is that really the most interresting thing you could think of while writting?
I'm sorry but expect an immature audience, no one would think that its interresting
3/6/2018 c1 Sanghyperios
If there's one thing I learned is that you never under any circumstances anger a sayian
If there's one thing I learned is that you never under any circumstances anger a sayian
3/3/2018 c32 Goku
awesome chapter bro really mind blowing.. and specially gohan angers themes . I wanted action like DBS punching shockwaves that shake the entire planets and solar system and lots of destruction..
awesome chapter bro really mind blowing.. and specially gohan angers themes . I wanted action like DBS punching shockwaves that shake the entire planets and solar system and lots of destruction..
3/1/2018 c32 DarkSaiyan764
This Chapter is Amazing! Can't wait for the next one, as an author myself. Losing inspiration on writing something sucks, I get that all lot because there is so many things that have to be done. I understand completely and I think this story is pretty cool in my opinion. I appreciate your hard work that you put into this story and I have to thank you again. This is one of the most epic fanfics that read and it's the best one than the others I read. From a Dragonball fan, I respect you and I appreciate your efforts and progress that you made in this story, your super cool! Keep up the good work, man!
This Chapter is Amazing! Can't wait for the next one, as an author myself. Losing inspiration on writing something sucks, I get that all lot because there is so many things that have to be done. I understand completely and I think this story is pretty cool in my opinion. I appreciate your hard work that you put into this story and I have to thank you again. This is one of the most epic fanfics that read and it's the best one than the others I read. From a Dragonball fan, I respect you and I appreciate your efforts and progress that you made in this story, your super cool! Keep up the good work, man!
2/26/2018 c32 Guest
Awesome dude please update soon
Awesome dude please update soon
2/26/2018 c27 Guest-Questioner
I am still wondering where the (good) buu is, the one Mr. "hercule" Satan befriended,
The one who fought WITH the Z warriors in the final moments!
Too be fair a handful of story's have considered Satan as a title or last name for him
and keeping Hercule as an "official" first name.
Also, i meant the fat Buu he's supposed to be around in either the GT or Super timeline's!
and before you ask me,
DB-GT has a 12 -14(by japan terms) year old pan going off with a De-aged goku and Buu timeline, Trunks Briefs into space to gather the (Black-star) Dragonballs before earth blows up.
Since this story still has Pan around 3-5 it would stand to reason you would most likely take
more from the Dragon-Ball Super storyline making Super Saiyan 4 obsolete.
With vegeta as a SSJ-3, NOW SSJ-4 is obsolete
in the GT timeline Vegeta used artificial means by way of the Blutz Wave generator to force himself
into the fourth level.
I am still wondering where the (good) buu is, the one Mr. "hercule" Satan befriended,
The one who fought WITH the Z warriors in the final moments!
Too be fair a handful of story's have considered Satan as a title or last name for him
and keeping Hercule as an "official" first name.
Also, i meant the fat Buu he's supposed to be around in either the GT or Super timeline's!
and before you ask me,
DB-GT has a 12 -14(by japan terms) year old pan going off with a De-aged goku and Buu timeline, Trunks Briefs into space to gather the (Black-star) Dragonballs before earth blows up.
Since this story still has Pan around 3-5 it would stand to reason you would most likely take
more from the Dragon-Ball Super storyline making Super Saiyan 4 obsolete.
With vegeta as a SSJ-3, NOW SSJ-4 is obsolete
in the GT timeline Vegeta used artificial means by way of the Blutz Wave generator to force himself
into the fourth level.
2/22/2018 c32 Mcleanbryce7
Awesome chapter as always I wanted to see how you would make goten rage out like how issei did and you did a amazing job now my question is will trunks be the one to fight him like vali did or will it be goku?
Awesome chapter as always I wanted to see how you would make goten rage out like how issei did and you did a amazing job now my question is will trunks be the one to fight him like vali did or will it be goku?
2/22/2018 c22 Guest-Questioner
If this has not been said, In answer(sort-of) for this chapter,
Krillin is, was, considered by far, the strongest AVERAGE human on earth
surpassing Tien and Yamcha, BEFORE his retirement... he also could give Vali,
a run for his money, or however you say that.
If this has not been said, In answer(sort-of) for this chapter,
Krillin is, was, considered by far, the strongest AVERAGE human on earth
surpassing Tien and Yamcha, BEFORE his retirement... he also could give Vali,
a run for his money, or however you say that.