for When Two Universes Collide4/19/2019 c33 Guest
TeraBaapBSDK
What the fuck are you talking about? Goten doesn't become a devil, evil, or die. If you even read the story you wouldn't even make stupid ass comments.
TeraBaapBSDK
What the fuck are you talking about? Goten doesn't become a devil, evil, or die. If you even read the story you wouldn't even make stupid ass comments.
2/7/2019 c32 Guest
If not god form how about super saiyan 4.
If not god form how about super saiyan 4.
1/21/2019 c15 Hexmaster23
Your villains are OOC (except Freed and Riser) too foul mouthed and impulsive
Your villains are OOC (except Freed and Riser) too foul mouthed and impulsive
1/10/2019 c33 
4Ultimate10
Really hope you can get your groove back! Enjoying this story so far. This chapter was very intense.
Noticed this error in the last sentence though. Need to complete the sentence.
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How will they cope with the rock of their
4Ultimate10Really hope you can get your groove back! Enjoying this story so far. This chapter was very intense.
Noticed this error in the last sentence though. Need to complete the sentence.
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How will they cope with the rock of their
1/10/2019 c33 3MysticVegito
Wow, really awesome chapter man, glad to see you back on track, it didnt disappoint at all. Goten's Broly-esk sadism when he DESTROYED Diodora and Shalba, how he nearly killed Rias with no remorse whatsoever in his berserk state, SSJ3 Goku domination over his son, so many damn highlights in this chapter :D That scene with SSJ3 Goku and Goten was a really, really close call cause Goten was THIS close to dying on the spot, good thing Goku reacted quickly with his Kamehameha Wave.
I like how you didn't make it so Dende can heal his wounds in that scene, because that scene turned out to be a reminiscent of when Issei dropped from his Juggernaut Drive and was thrown into a coma, which is really good. I cant wait to see what will next chapter bring :)
3MysticVegitoWow, really awesome chapter man, glad to see you back on track, it didnt disappoint at all. Goten's Broly-esk sadism when he DESTROYED Diodora and Shalba, how he nearly killed Rias with no remorse whatsoever in his berserk state, SSJ3 Goku domination over his son, so many damn highlights in this chapter :D That scene with SSJ3 Goku and Goten was a really, really close call cause Goten was THIS close to dying on the spot, good thing Goku reacted quickly with his Kamehameha Wave.
I like how you didn't make it so Dende can heal his wounds in that scene, because that scene turned out to be a reminiscent of when Issei dropped from his Juggernaut Drive and was thrown into a coma, which is really good. I cant wait to see what will next chapter bring :)
1/9/2019 c33 Marouan
where is your goddamn faith Arthur HAVE SOME GODDAMN FAITH
sorry couldn't help it when you said "for those loyal readers" lol ;)
it doesn't matter if it takes some time like few months just don't abandon this story I have been here from the start. so it would be a shame if it had to stop like this.
and accept me on as a friend on PS4, please not like i am gonna stalk ya or something i have my own things to do just don't ignore it my PSN name is marouan213 or CookieComics
where is your goddamn faith Arthur HAVE SOME GODDAMN FAITH
sorry couldn't help it when you said "for those loyal readers" lol ;)
it doesn't matter if it takes some time like few months just don't abandon this story I have been here from the start. so it would be a shame if it had to stop like this.
and accept me on as a friend on PS4, please not like i am gonna stalk ya or something i have my own things to do just don't ignore it my PSN name is marouan213 or CookieComics
1/8/2019 c33 Blake2020
Great chapter and poor goten and like it all friend and always keep up the good job and appreciate all you do here and coming back to this story as well and major thanks and love the story and lots of support to you and see on the next chapter then and Happy Late new years to you.
Great chapter and poor goten and like it all friend and always keep up the good job and appreciate all you do here and coming back to this story as well and major thanks and love the story and lots of support to you and see on the next chapter then and Happy Late new years to you.
11/7/2018 c28 Guest
amazing story!
amazing story!