6/3/2018 c32 5Rivik
Awesome Story, I have to say that I have yet to be amazed by a story like this one, the only one getting close is Rias' Black Knight, but sheesh, it's awesome. I only have one question though, how do you do the grey lines to symbolize a time change or event change
Awesome Story, I have to say that I have yet to be amazed by a story like this one, the only one getting close is Rias' Black Knight, but sheesh, it's awesome. I only have one question though, how do you do the grey lines to symbolize a time change or event change
5/10/2018 c21 snorlax285
Awesome story so far. I liked how you gave vegeta super saiyan 3, but I wished you brought gotanks out to fight, overall loved the conclusion.
Awesome story so far. I liked how you gave vegeta super saiyan 3, but I wished you brought gotanks out to fight, overall loved the conclusion.
5/8/2018 c2 Rebmul
and rias shows what a massive bitch she is if that had been goku I think she would have been space dust she literally said she was watching him die so she could force him to be a member of her peerage
and rias shows what a massive bitch she is if that had been goku I think she would have been space dust she literally said she was watching him die so she could force him to be a member of her peerage
5/6/2018 c32 Omer Durrani
Homie this is by far the best crossover of my favourite shows i have ever read
Cant wait for chapter 33 and the rest of the arc to unfold
Best Wishes
Homie this is by far the best crossover of my favourite shows i have ever read
Cant wait for chapter 33 and the rest of the arc to unfold
Best Wishes
4/23/2018 c32 Envoy of Torrask
This is truly a great series so far.
I hope to see more of it soon.
This is truly a great series so far.
I hope to see more of it soon.
4/6/2018 c6 Guest
Where is trunks
Where is trunks
3/25/2018 c2 TenshiNoAka
Ew, this is bad, really bad.
Its like watching twilight.
I wanna punch myself in the face
Oh you so cute, kyaaa
Watch those muscle, kyaa
You're strong plus you're cute too, kyaaa
Look at these hot chick
Is this fucking american pie?
Kill me.
Is that really the most interresting thing you could think of while writting?
I'm sorry but expect an immature audience, no one would think that its interresting
Ew, this is bad, really bad.
Its like watching twilight.
I wanna punch myself in the face
Oh you so cute, kyaaa
Watch those muscle, kyaa
You're strong plus you're cute too, kyaaa
Look at these hot chick
Is this fucking american pie?
Kill me.
Is that really the most interresting thing you could think of while writting?
I'm sorry but expect an immature audience, no one would think that its interresting
3/6/2018 c1 Sanghyperios
If there's one thing I learned is that you never under any circumstances anger a sayian
If there's one thing I learned is that you never under any circumstances anger a sayian
3/3/2018 c32 Goku
awesome chapter bro really mind blowing.. and specially gohan angers themes . I wanted action like DBS punching shockwaves that shake the entire planets and solar system and lots of destruction..
awesome chapter bro really mind blowing.. and specially gohan angers themes . I wanted action like DBS punching shockwaves that shake the entire planets and solar system and lots of destruction..