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5Okara SSJ
Awesome chapter as always and you should have Goten in the rating games it's always better when he's in and fighting
5Okara SSJAwesome chapter as always and you should have Goten in the rating games it's always better when he's in and fighting
11/16/2017 c1 1337nateouji
Since you don't want Goten to reach SSJ God and SSJ Blue, have Goten reach SSJ4 then SSJ5. Yeah, for those forms Goten will have to get his tail back, and before anyone says SSJ5 isn't canon, if you look it up, SSJ5 has been the most consistent transformation for a saiyan created by fans. If anyone hates Dragonball GT(which most haters only dislike it because it was made by someone else thats not Akira Toriyama) well this isn't your story. If you're opinion is "Well SSJ4 sucks", idk I think the whole point in unlocking it is cool: a saiyan not losing control of his or her body/mind after accessing SSJ Great Ape, where the saiyan understands their primal mind. They are not just a saiyan and they are not just Great Ape. To fully be one, they must understand and accept the two halves that make them." It's like a Bruce Banner/Incredible HulkJinchuriki/Bijuu relationship. This is a great story, I was just voicing an idea, and do what you thinks best.
Since you don't want Goten to reach SSJ God and SSJ Blue, have Goten reach SSJ4 then SSJ5. Yeah, for those forms Goten will have to get his tail back, and before anyone says SSJ5 isn't canon, if you look it up, SSJ5 has been the most consistent transformation for a saiyan created by fans. If anyone hates Dragonball GT(which most haters only dislike it because it was made by someone else thats not Akira Toriyama) well this isn't your story. If you're opinion is "Well SSJ4 sucks", idk I think the whole point in unlocking it is cool: a saiyan not losing control of his or her body/mind after accessing SSJ Great Ape, where the saiyan understands their primal mind. They are not just a saiyan and they are not just Great Ape. To fully be one, they must understand and accept the two halves that make them." It's like a Bruce Banner/Incredible HulkJinchuriki/Bijuu relationship. This is a great story, I was just voicing an idea, and do what you thinks best.
11/13/2017 c31 El guerrero Goku
good cap and I like that later gotten and trunks have the ssj3, but I think that transformation will not be enough for the future enemies as it fell far behind the god levels, so I hope the young saiyan can go beyond the ssj3.
good cap and I like that later gotten and trunks have the ssj3, but I think that transformation will not be enough for the future enemies as it fell far behind the god levels, so I hope the young saiyan can go beyond the ssj3.
11/13/2017 c31 3MysticVegito
Awesome chapter bro, i loved it. Seems not everyone approves Rias' relationship with a Saiyan like Goten, well they can suck it :D I loved the scene with Goten, Trunks and Marron, i can see you loved writing that scene. I also really enjoyed how Diodora has no idea who he's dealing with, even though he called Goten a Super Saiyan, this is going to be interesting :)
3MysticVegitoAwesome chapter bro, i loved it. Seems not everyone approves Rias' relationship with a Saiyan like Goten, well they can suck it :D I loved the scene with Goten, Trunks and Marron, i can see you loved writing that scene. I also really enjoyed how Diodora has no idea who he's dealing with, even though he called Goten a Super Saiyan, this is going to be interesting :)
11/12/2017 c31 1BobaRaptor
Great Chapter! New Rating Games, Diodora, and love rivalries. You sure do pack a lot in one chapter, dont cha? lol/
1BobaRaptorGreat Chapter! New Rating Games, Diodora, and love rivalries. You sure do pack a lot in one chapter, dont cha? lol/
11/12/2017 c31 4The Azure Reaper
Great chapter! I just have one request.
Please don't kill diodora peerage
4The Azure ReaperGreat chapter! I just have one request.
Please don't kill diodora peerage
11/12/2017 c30 ARSLOTHES
Hope you include a sub harem for girls like Irina, Xenovia, Ravel, Serafall, Sona, and Koneko who genuinely love him
Hope you include a sub harem for girls like Irina, Xenovia, Ravel, Serafall, Sona, and Koneko who genuinely love him
11/12/2017 c25 5Sntakawa Toki
Lil question though Where was Loki?is his ass gonna appear Anytime soon?Not that he would be a match for the super saiyans, if even Issei was able to beat him. And is Future Trunks gonna appear?
5Sntakawa TokiLil question though Where was Loki?is his ass gonna appear Anytime soon?Not that he would be a match for the super saiyans, if even Issei was able to beat him. And is Future Trunks gonna appear?
11/12/2017 c31 1kyro11
Great Chapter as Usual,
Awesome to see the Z Fighters kids have moment together,
Oh man, did not expect that from Rias, and Astaroth asking for Akeno?!
I always like chapters like these
Can’t wait to see what is the connection with Akeno and that jerkweed Astaroth
Glad your planning on making Goten and Trunks earn SSj3
1kyro11Great Chapter as Usual,
Awesome to see the Z Fighters kids have moment together,
Oh man, did not expect that from Rias, and Astaroth asking for Akeno?!
I always like chapters like these
Can’t wait to see what is the connection with Akeno and that jerkweed Astaroth
Glad your planning on making Goten and Trunks earn SSj3
11/12/2017 c31 dragonsayianblue
OH HELL NO! Diodora in to SHINTO MIKOS!?. How you want to bet he had Akenos mom fied in a horrific death to get her only to Rias take her first. Also the fight with marron and Rias was funny. Also next DBZ villain should be janemba.
OH HELL NO! Diodora in to SHINTO MIKOS!?. How you want to bet he had Akenos mom fied in a horrific death to get her only to Rias take her first. Also the fight with marron and Rias was funny. Also next DBZ villain should be janemba.
11/12/2017 c31 Goku Black
Another awesome chapter from my favorite crossover on this site. Anyways I got two questions. Is this story going the GT or super route? And where is Gasper?
Another awesome chapter from my favorite crossover on this site. Anyways I got two questions. Is this story going the GT or super route? And where is Gasper?