
5/30/2017 c7 Blake2020
Exciting chapter and will Goten reach SS2 or SS3 and learn his father instant transmission as well with enough training goten can learn it or in the time chamber?
Exciting chapter and will Goten reach SS2 or SS3 and learn his father instant transmission as well with enough training goten can learn it or in the time chamber?
5/30/2017 c6 Blake2020
Epic chapter and like a good harem story and this is rich for sure and goten a very lucky dude as well and love the story please update in 2017 in june this summer? Like the hold goten harem as well
Epic chapter and like a good harem story and this is rich for sure and goten a very lucky dude as well and love the story please update in 2017 in june this summer? Like the hold goten harem as well
5/30/2017 c4 Blake2020
Love it and Goten pairing with both Rias and Akeno as well and love it and please update this story in 2017 as well
Love it and Goten pairing with both Rias and Akeno as well and love it and please update this story in 2017 as well
5/29/2017 c29 Guest
In response to Sntakawa Toki I did watch the fight. I've seen it dozens of times and it isn't canon as it is not in the manga. Also in the fight against Hit in the universe 7 vs universe 6 tournament both Goku and old kai clearly state kaio ken can ONLY be use with the blue form as the regular super saiyan forms would put a lot of strain on his body and possible kill him.
In response to Sntakawa Toki I did watch the fight. I've seen it dozens of times and it isn't canon as it is not in the manga. Also in the fight against Hit in the universe 7 vs universe 6 tournament both Goku and old kai clearly state kaio ken can ONLY be use with the blue form as the regular super saiyan forms would put a lot of strain on his body and possible kill him.
5/29/2017 c1
5Sntakawa Toki
a Lil' reply to the guest, who said that Kaioken can't be used, while being in the Super Saiyan form. watch the Buu saga and write that again. no offense, but you should watch the fight between Goku and Pikkon

a Lil' reply to the guest, who said that Kaioken can't be used, while being in the Super Saiyan form. watch the Buu saga and write that again. no offense, but you should watch the fight between Goku and Pikkon
5/29/2017 c1 Sntakawa Toki
this story still rocks. despite reading t
it so often, I still love it. I hope, like everyone does, that you start writing again. I know how pesky it can be, when someone, or a group of people becomes pushy, but it would be cool, to just receive news about how long it'd take to get a new chapter update
this story still rocks. despite reading t
it so often, I still love it. I hope, like everyone does, that you start writing again. I know how pesky it can be, when someone, or a group of people becomes pushy, but it would be cool, to just receive news about how long it'd take to get a new chapter update
5/15/2017 c29 Guest
Man you gotta come back and finish this best goten based story I've read in a while
Man you gotta come back and finish this best goten based story I've read in a while
5/2/2017 c29 Guest
Great chapter.
I hope that Trunks gets his own harem so Goten can laugh at him as he struggles.
Hope you update very soon as I miss this story of actually Trunks and Goten raise in power.
Great chapter.
I hope that Trunks gets his own harem so Goten can laugh at him as he struggles.
Hope you update very soon as I miss this story of actually Trunks and Goten raise in power.
4/28/2017 c14
3MysticVegito
Awesome work on the rewrites, the scenes are now alot better and i really like the newly added ones :)

Awesome work on the rewrites, the scenes are now alot better and i really like the newly added ones :)
4/26/2017 c29 Guest
Best crossover in my opinion. Anyways if you're going to give Goten kaioken just know that he can't use it with the super saiyan forms as it would probably put a lot of strain on his body and kill him. It can only be used with super saiyan blue because of its better and calmer ki control as it is stated by Goku and supreme kai in the anime and manga of DBS.
Best crossover in my opinion. Anyways if you're going to give Goten kaioken just know that he can't use it with the super saiyan forms as it would probably put a lot of strain on his body and kill him. It can only be used with super saiyan blue because of its better and calmer ki control as it is stated by Goku and supreme kai in the anime and manga of DBS.