for When Two Universes Collide4/13/2017 c29 Guest
When's next chapter?
When's next chapter?
3/23/2017 c29 Guest
Ummm where's Gasper? Did you forget about him?
Ummm where's Gasper? Did you forget about him?
3/22/2017 c29 Guest
I just recently found this story and I have to say that I love it perfect amount of action romance and ecchi material I love the fact that your fic has all these developments for goten since the anime essentially wasted a good character more so in super but I'd love it if you continue your work on this story definitely amazing
I just recently found this story and I have to say that I love it perfect amount of action romance and ecchi material I love the fact that your fic has all these developments for goten since the anime essentially wasted a good character more so in super but I'd love it if you continue your work on this story definitely amazing
2/16/2017 c29 lucasrosa94
muito boa a istória escreva mais não pare é uma das poucas istórias que eu realmente gostei. o geito de você condusir as coisas é muito enteressante.
muito boa a istória escreva mais não pare é uma das poucas istórias que eu realmente gostei. o geito de você condusir as coisas é muito enteressante.
2/10/2017 c17 
3MysticVegito
Another awesome rewrite bro, i really love how you went with this chapter. I really loved Rias' and Akeno's teasing, especially Akeno in the changing room. Keep up the great work :)
3MysticVegitoAnother awesome rewrite bro, i really love how you went with this chapter. I really loved Rias' and Akeno's teasing, especially Akeno in the changing room. Keep up the great work :)
2/1/2017 c5 SuzuWuzu
so much cringe...it hurts man. ahhhh cringe level is over 9000! seriously though, all of the dialogue is robotic, unatural, and cringe as fuck.
so much cringe...it hurts man. ahhhh cringe level is over 9000! seriously though, all of the dialogue is robotic, unatural, and cringe as fuck.
1/30/2017 c1 Guest
Cool story but Bulma's family doesn't have a last name the Brief name is actually just her father's name Dr Briefs. Son is like the only last name in the series. Also Goten and Trunks weren't born with tails which is why they are able to go super saiyan at such a young age. Its basically their genes. Still these don't really matter in this story just thought you should know. it's still my number 1 fan fic.
Cool story but Bulma's family doesn't have a last name the Brief name is actually just her father's name Dr Briefs. Son is like the only last name in the series. Also Goten and Trunks weren't born with tails which is why they are able to go super saiyan at such a young age. Its basically their genes. Still these don't really matter in this story just thought you should know. it's still my number 1 fan fic.
1/29/2017 c29 5Sntakawa Toki
Great story dude I hope we'll get to see more soon because this story is just awesome. And to all those Idiots who think these stories can't coexist well write a better one
5Sntakawa TokiGreat story dude I hope we'll get to see more soon because this story is just awesome. And to all those Idiots who think these stories can't coexist well write a better one
1/26/2017 c29 Guest
Gostei. Muito loco. Muito dez. Show de bola.
Mal posso esperar para próximo capítulo
Gostei. Muito loco. Muito dez. Show de bola.
Mal posso esperar para próximo capítulo
1/21/2017 c29 30diamondholder
just got to say that this story is one of the best i have ever read in fact your talent is not unlike the talent people who write for a living. please continue and will goten learn the spirit bomb at any point in the story
30diamondholderjust got to say that this story is one of the best i have ever read in fact your talent is not unlike the talent people who write for a living. please continue and will goten learn the spirit bomb at any point in the story