for When Two Universes Collide11/10/2016 c4 Guest
Really liked how rias and Akeno interacted with goten but I don't think chichi would let the girls stay over
Really liked how rias and Akeno interacted with goten but I don't think chichi would let the girls stay over
11/7/2016 c4 
11Gabriel Herrol
I was wondering where Sirzechs stood power wise against the DBZ Villains. Is he more powerful than Dabura was? Approximately which level would you put him? Perfect Cell? Super Perfect Cell? Majin Buu(the fat one)? I'm kinda curious. And while the Devils have the Underworld, what is the relations between all grade of Kais and the 3 Factions?
11Gabriel HerrolI was wondering where Sirzechs stood power wise against the DBZ Villains. Is he more powerful than Dabura was? Approximately which level would you put him? Perfect Cell? Super Perfect Cell? Majin Buu(the fat one)? I'm kinda curious. And while the Devils have the Underworld, what is the relations between all grade of Kais and the 3 Factions?
11/3/2016 c15 3MysticVegito
Wow, amazing chapter update bro, the date got even better and their kissing moment was more passionate then before, though i got a good laugh when he, along with Gohan, was overprotective of Pan. Also, Goten's ascension to Super Saiyan 2 was a lot more intense and full of rage then before, especially when Kokabiel brutally beaten Koneko and Xenovia. Awesome work, keep it up :)
3MysticVegitoWow, amazing chapter update bro, the date got even better and their kissing moment was more passionate then before, though i got a good laugh when he, along with Gohan, was overprotective of Pan. Also, Goten's ascension to Super Saiyan 2 was a lot more intense and full of rage then before, especially when Kokabiel brutally beaten Koneko and Xenovia. Awesome work, keep it up :)
10/30/2016 c29 23BladeKnightmare
what if goten transformed into ssjssg by an angel holy relic that can change dragons into gods and also worked for super saiyans
23BladeKnightmarewhat if goten transformed into ssjssg by an angel holy relic that can change dragons into gods and also worked for super saiyans
10/22/2016 c29 d
update fast man
update fast man
8/22/2016 c1 Guest
I LOVE THIS FIC
I LOVE THIS FIC
8/12/2016 c1 LightBearer999
Ohh man this is so terrible its almost cringy! Cant you see that DBZ verse and High School DxD verses share nothing in common to go off of!? Thats because DXD verse is based on a real world what if setting, while dbz universe in its completely unique fictional author created mythology environment. Which is like trying mix together a fictional 80s inspired canadian city with a realistic modern day high school japan city with typical harem action drama high school environment. Which is why you should have just focused on one place where you wanted the crossover to take place.
Ohh man this is so terrible its almost cringy! Cant you see that DBZ verse and High School DxD verses share nothing in common to go off of!? Thats because DXD verse is based on a real world what if setting, while dbz universe in its completely unique fictional author created mythology environment. Which is like trying mix together a fictional 80s inspired canadian city with a realistic modern day high school japan city with typical harem action drama high school environment. Which is why you should have just focused on one place where you wanted the crossover to take place.
7/23/2016 c29 Guest
hey man i like your fic pls updated soon and about you add more girls for trunks i like the idea but dont take girls from goten after all you alredy make some escene with them.
hey man i like your fic pls updated soon and about you add more girls for trunks i like the idea but dont take girls from goten after all you alredy make some escene with them.
7/15/2016 c7 Guest
Time for the Hypeeonic mine baser.
Hyperglycenic lime chamber.
Hyperdsonic lion tamer.
Time for the Hypeeonic mine baser.
Hyperglycenic lime chamber.
Hyperdsonic lion tamer.
7/1/2016 c6 Guest
Goten is a pervert
Raynare becomes good? Wtf?
If Goten is dense about Marron's feelings, why does he apologize to her after introducing rias to her.
Overall I liked the fic before the rewrites. It felt more natural. The harem seems forced and a dense harem character never loses his dense personality.
The story is Amazing and the fact that this isn't one of those inter dimensional travel fic is great.
But the development felt more believable before the rewrites.
Keep up with the good work and I hope you don't take this review the wrong way. I really love your fic but I hope you make changes :)
Goten is a pervert
Raynare becomes good? Wtf?
If Goten is dense about Marron's feelings, why does he apologize to her after introducing rias to her.
Overall I liked the fic before the rewrites. It felt more natural. The harem seems forced and a dense harem character never loses his dense personality.
The story is Amazing and the fact that this isn't one of those inter dimensional travel fic is great.
But the development felt more believable before the rewrites.
Keep up with the good work and I hope you don't take this review the wrong way. I really love your fic but I hope you make changes :)