for When Two Universes Collide8/30/2023 c2 rageouss
;"From this moment forward, you will live your life for my sake." A bright red glow The pieces then melted into Issei's body and fused with him.;
why does nobody call her out on this? how about no you bitch, she literally sat around waiting for him to die just so he can enslave him. wtf?
;"From this moment forward, you will live your life for my sake." A bright red glow The pieces then melted into Issei's body and fused with him.;
why does nobody call her out on this? how about no you bitch, she literally sat around waiting for him to die just so he can enslave him. wtf?
7/5/2023 c34 Imababysitter
I made my stepdaughter jealous by kissing one of her friends. Made the night I spent in her bed much more interesting.
I made my stepdaughter jealous by kissing one of her friends. Made the night I spent in her bed much more interesting.
5/31/2023 c1 Guest
Great, well written story. Hope it continue.
Great, well written story. Hope it continue.
5/31/2023 c1 Guest
Really well written crossover. Everything feels natural and connected. Hope this continues one day.
Really well written crossover. Everything feels natural and connected. Hope this continues one day.
5/5/2023 c10 Guest
Really good story. Hope this comes back again.
Really good story. Hope this comes back again.
4/6/2023 c8 
5thebestofall
Wtf Riser is so dumb. He knows Goten is a Saiyan but still ...
Do the devils simply not know about how powerful Saiyans actually are?
5thebestofallWtf Riser is so dumb. He knows Goten is a Saiyan but still ...
Do the devils simply not know about how powerful Saiyans actually are?
4/6/2023 c3 thebestofall
Awesome so far, I'm only wondering how you are going to create tension. I mean, freaking Krillin could take care of almost all the DxD villains.
Awesome so far, I'm only wondering how you are going to create tension. I mean, freaking Krillin could take care of almost all the DxD villains.
4/6/2023 c2 thebestofall
Goddamn Rias needs to be seriously humbled for even daring to make such an offer to Goten.
Yeah Goku is a nice guy, but I doubt he would take it too kindly that someone wants to turn his son into their slave/servant. And Vegeta would be furious as well, that someone wants to enslave a Saiyan.
Moreover, I doubt even 8 pieces would be enough to turn Goten. I don't think Rias can recruit him even with her entire chess board, even if every piece was a mutated one.
Anyway sorry for rambling on such a pointless matter since you didn't go down that route anyway. As for this chapter, it was really nice. You captured the personalities of the characters quite well, and your writing style is easy on the eyes.
Goddamn Rias needs to be seriously humbled for even daring to make such an offer to Goten.
Yeah Goku is a nice guy, but I doubt he would take it too kindly that someone wants to turn his son into their slave/servant. And Vegeta would be furious as well, that someone wants to enslave a Saiyan.
Moreover, I doubt even 8 pieces would be enough to turn Goten. I don't think Rias can recruit him even with her entire chess board, even if every piece was a mutated one.
Anyway sorry for rambling on such a pointless matter since you didn't go down that route anyway. As for this chapter, it was really nice. You captured the personalities of the characters quite well, and your writing style is easy on the eyes.
1/31/2023 c5 The One True God
Basically your taking your favorite / “the best parts of each” and then slightly shifting the timing so that they would line up
Basically your taking your favorite / “the best parts of each” and then slightly shifting the timing so that they would line up
1/31/2023 c1 The One True God
In my head cannon Goten still has the same hair as Goku and Bardock just like Goku jr. did
In my head cannon Goten still has the same hair as Goku and Bardock just like Goku jr. did
12/11/2022 c6 Guest
Why is trunks just a side character you should have done a chapter or b plot for him
Why is trunks just a side character you should have done a chapter or b plot for him
11/24/2022 c34 10RANGER1863
From what I have seen, the story does not take into consideration the Dragon Ball Super saga or the tournament of power, but just out of curiosity in this story, is the destructive power of the Gremory similar to what the destructive power of Bills?
10RANGER1863From what I have seen, the story does not take into consideration the Dragon Ball Super saga or the tournament of power, but just out of curiosity in this story, is the destructive power of the Gremory similar to what the destructive power of Bills?
10/23/2022 c34 Korking
This Story is nice and all but, WHERES MAJIN BUU?! I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA BE HERE AND I CAN"T FIND HIM
This Story is nice and all but, WHERES MAJIN BUU?! I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA BE HERE AND I CAN"T FIND HIM
9/17/2022 c34 StefonRichardson
Come on keep going
Come on keep going