for When Two Universes Collide7/9/2022 c34 Guest
Is the next chapter ever coming out? This series is good
Is the next chapter ever coming out? This series is good
6/26/2022 c34 Guest
Have you even gave Dragon Ball Super: Broly a chance or even try to watch it? I personally like the Super version of Broly more than the Z Broly.
Have you even gave Dragon Ball Super: Broly a chance or even try to watch it? I personally like the Super version of Broly more than the Z Broly.
4/10/2022 c1 Guest
Is it just me who thinks this story is boring
Is it just me who thinks this story is boring
3/23/2022 c34 LIPAS 108
hey my guy that was a great chapter for 34 I can't wait for 35 to drop and see what happens I hope to see more villains even dxd ones this was good and I am glad to join you in this story as you tell it I am like sitting out of my chair bc of how much I enjoy it. as it gets me in all the emotions like laughing and crying etc. plz don't stop and keep it going if anything plz make a patreon to this I would love to support you as much as I can just to see where things go from here until then I am going to re-read this story bc of how much I love it thank you so much this is by far the best FanFic out there hands down
hey my guy that was a great chapter for 34 I can't wait for 35 to drop and see what happens I hope to see more villains even dxd ones this was good and I am glad to join you in this story as you tell it I am like sitting out of my chair bc of how much I enjoy it. as it gets me in all the emotions like laughing and crying etc. plz don't stop and keep it going if anything plz make a patreon to this I would love to support you as much as I can just to see where things go from here until then I am going to re-read this story bc of how much I love it thank you so much this is by far the best FanFic out there hands down
3/23/2022 c34 
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I can't wait for the next amazing chapter! i have an idea for a new oc that could be a villain or a friend
1Arkham Knight22I can't wait for the next amazing chapter! i have an idea for a new oc that could be a villain or a friend
3/22/2022 c33 LIPAS 108
hey just wanted to say that this chapter 33 was damn good and I have been reading you A/N and want to say that take your time on it but do get more out I want to see this story come to a close with more chapters but do take your time I hope you have been doing ok though. Just want to say I get that sometimes you wanna relax which is ok but I really do hope you get 35 out soon this is by far the best and my most fav fanfic you are even focusing on gotten and not Goku which I do love even though Goku is my fav but it is great and I love how you been taking things idc that u been going off manly dxd story in a way lol bu hope to see you soon and getting more chapters out my guy
hey just wanted to say that this chapter 33 was damn good and I have been reading you A/N and want to say that take your time on it but do get more out I want to see this story come to a close with more chapters but do take your time I hope you have been doing ok though. Just want to say I get that sometimes you wanna relax which is ok but I really do hope you get 35 out soon this is by far the best and my most fav fanfic you are even focusing on gotten and not Goku which I do love even though Goku is my fav but it is great and I love how you been taking things idc that u been going off manly dxd story in a way lol bu hope to see you soon and getting more chapters out my guy
3/21/2022 c32 LIPAS 108
love the chapter so damn good I hope on in later chapters I see more dragon ball enemies tbh I almost thought Towa and Mira were going to show up but it was still good to know Orphins made a showing love the chapter can't wait for 35 plz get it out sooner
love the chapter so damn good I hope on in later chapters I see more dragon ball enemies tbh I almost thought Towa and Mira were going to show up but it was still good to know Orphins made a showing love the chapter can't wait for 35 plz get it out sooner
3/20/2022 c31 LIPAS 108
love this chapter I hope to see more this year I want to see you make it all the way to 80 chapters if not more I love reading this plz keep up this great work I can't wait for chapter 35 plz get it out sooner
love this chapter I hope to see more this year I want to see you make it all the way to 80 chapters if not more I love reading this plz keep up this great work I can't wait for chapter 35 plz get it out sooner
3/20/2022 c14 Axccel
Rias isn't making any sense. If there is tension between the factions against the Devils due to her connection to Goten, then A) none of the other two factions would dare threaten the Devils unless they just plain have no comprehension of what even normal saiyans really are or are capable of, or B) Goten helping the Church with a mission would improve relations and help soothe tensions. Which would make Rias being against him helping them utterly nonsensical. Which I also realized in the canon storyline when I read it and saw it in the anime and wondered why this obvious fact didn't occur to her. "Oh noes, we can't help another faction because that would increase tensions between us and them." is utterly stupid and wrong. It was back when I first read it in canon and it still is now.
In other words, the only thing in their group causing problems and increasing the risk of war is Rias herself.
Rias isn't making any sense. If there is tension between the factions against the Devils due to her connection to Goten, then A) none of the other two factions would dare threaten the Devils unless they just plain have no comprehension of what even normal saiyans really are or are capable of, or B) Goten helping the Church with a mission would improve relations and help soothe tensions. Which would make Rias being against him helping them utterly nonsensical. Which I also realized in the canon storyline when I read it and saw it in the anime and wondered why this obvious fact didn't occur to her. "Oh noes, we can't help another faction because that would increase tensions between us and them." is utterly stupid and wrong. It was back when I first read it in canon and it still is now.
In other words, the only thing in their group causing problems and increasing the risk of war is Rias herself.
3/20/2022 c12 Axccel
I don't get why Rias is so defensive over not sharing Goten compared to her canon self. Or am I remembering her attitude from canon wrong? I know that the supernatural in DxD considers harems to be normal and monogamy to be weird.
It's amusing how much everyone doesn't realize just how much they're still underestimating Goten and more specifically, saiyans. The average high class devil is possibly weaker than or perhaps equal to the average saiyan *infant*. Judging by the power levels of the Z-Fighters back when Raditz first showed up and what they were capable of back then. It just tickles me how the whole of DxD simply cannot begin to fathom just how outclassed they are by even a baby in terms of raw power.
I don't get why Rias is so defensive over not sharing Goten compared to her canon self. Or am I remembering her attitude from canon wrong? I know that the supernatural in DxD considers harems to be normal and monogamy to be weird.
It's amusing how much everyone doesn't realize just how much they're still underestimating Goten and more specifically, saiyans. The average high class devil is possibly weaker than or perhaps equal to the average saiyan *infant*. Judging by the power levels of the Z-Fighters back when Raditz first showed up and what they were capable of back then. It just tickles me how the whole of DxD simply cannot begin to fathom just how outclassed they are by even a baby in terms of raw power.
3/20/2022 c30 LIPAS 108
hey my guy I am new here and read all chapters up to here and will be continuing and I like to ask when will you be making more chapters I enjoy this fanfic my 1 tbh I have heard others but they were okay sad to know Goten won't get god powers but could he get ssj4 then I think that be awsome and hyped and I love the black arc and tournament of power arc with UI Love to see Goku and Goten get those in this fanfic
hey my guy I am new here and read all chapters up to here and will be continuing and I like to ask when will you be making more chapters I enjoy this fanfic my 1 tbh I have heard others but they were okay sad to know Goten won't get god powers but could he get ssj4 then I think that be awsome and hyped and I love the black arc and tournament of power arc with UI Love to see Goku and Goten get those in this fanfic
3/20/2022 c11 Axccel
The Holy Sword Project was meant to study light and the ability to use holy swords. The archbishop in charge took it in a radical direction with child experimentation and murder. The participants and test subjects were massacred by him and his subordinates to try and cover up what they were doing because the Church found out and tried to rescue the kids. Kiba managed to escape in the fighting when the Church launched its assault on the project. I can't remember fully but I think he might have been flat-out rescued by the Church's soldiers and told to flee or something to escape the battle.
Instead, because Rias didn't tell Goten that, Goten thinks the Church was experimenting on and murdering children, when in canon the Church was not doing so and when the Church found out that was happening they went apeshit and tried to save everyone. The opposite of what Goten thinks thanks to Rias basically lying by omission.
I think this was an accident on your part, but the consequences given Goten's power and the fact the Church in DxD is the primary defense of humanity...yeah, pretty important.
That said, I don't remember if Rias even knew about this additional information at this point. I think it may have been Irina or Xenovia who told them when confronted by Issei about what the Holy Sword Project had done and they explained what actually happened.
The Holy Sword Project was meant to study light and the ability to use holy swords. The archbishop in charge took it in a radical direction with child experimentation and murder. The participants and test subjects were massacred by him and his subordinates to try and cover up what they were doing because the Church found out and tried to rescue the kids. Kiba managed to escape in the fighting when the Church launched its assault on the project. I can't remember fully but I think he might have been flat-out rescued by the Church's soldiers and told to flee or something to escape the battle.
Instead, because Rias didn't tell Goten that, Goten thinks the Church was experimenting on and murdering children, when in canon the Church was not doing so and when the Church found out that was happening they went apeshit and tried to save everyone. The opposite of what Goten thinks thanks to Rias basically lying by omission.
I think this was an accident on your part, but the consequences given Goten's power and the fact the Church in DxD is the primary defense of humanity...yeah, pretty important.
That said, I don't remember if Rias even knew about this additional information at this point. I think it may have been Irina or Xenovia who told them when confronted by Issei about what the Holy Sword Project had done and they explained what actually happened.
3/16/2022 c8 Axccel
If you're a dying race, pissing off a saiyan is a good way to finish yourself off. Not even Goten, Gohan, and Goku would give a damn about it. For all that they are merciful and sympathetic, one of their best traits is that if you bring your doom upon yourself, they're not going to hesitate being that doom. Repenting will earn you a second chance from them, but if Goten for example decided the only way to protect Rias was to wipe out all the pureblood devils, he would do so without hesitation or remorse.
Honestly, if things didn't play out the way they did in either canon or fanfics, Rias either would have been cast out for refusing to marry Riser at the altar and thereby embarrassing her House and his (leaving her basically as free pickings for anyone though with her power and friends that probably would be suicidal), or she'd have played a long and then killed herself partly to escape and partly out of sheer spite and hatred.
If you're a dying race, pissing off a saiyan is a good way to finish yourself off. Not even Goten, Gohan, and Goku would give a damn about it. For all that they are merciful and sympathetic, one of their best traits is that if you bring your doom upon yourself, they're not going to hesitate being that doom. Repenting will earn you a second chance from them, but if Goten for example decided the only way to protect Rias was to wipe out all the pureblood devils, he would do so without hesitation or remorse.
Honestly, if things didn't play out the way they did in either canon or fanfics, Rias either would have been cast out for refusing to marry Riser at the altar and thereby embarrassing her House and his (leaving her basically as free pickings for anyone though with her power and friends that probably would be suicidal), or she'd have played a long and then killed herself partly to escape and partly out of sheer spite and hatred.
3/16/2022 c7 Axccel
Wonder if their little time-space bubble can even survive Goten's base power.
While Riser is right about her duty if they marry, he would be a shitty excuse of a husband as he would totally neglect what his own duty to her is as part of the symbiotic relationship that is marriage. Personally, I believe that if one spouse or both violates whatever oath their religion or culture has for marriage, then the marriage is void and the perpetrator should, if there is proof, be punished.
Wonder if their little time-space bubble can even survive Goten's base power.
While Riser is right about her duty if they marry, he would be a shitty excuse of a husband as he would totally neglect what his own duty to her is as part of the symbiotic relationship that is marriage. Personally, I believe that if one spouse or both violates whatever oath their religion or culture has for marriage, then the marriage is void and the perpetrator should, if there is proof, be punished.
3/16/2022 c6 Axccel
ChiChi...YOU'RE a princess...
Technically, ChiChi is an actual princess whereas Rias is just a noble scion.
ChiChi...YOU'RE a princess...
Technically, ChiChi is an actual princess whereas Rias is just a noble scion.