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10/24/2014 c12 27JensenDaniels32
I LOVED IT! What an awesome chapter! :D I ESPECIALLY Loved the part where Goten unleashed his full power and fought with only his finger! verything else was also magnificently done as well! I can't wait to see your next chapter! :D
10/24/2014 c11 JensenDaniels32
AWESOME CHAPTER BRO! :D I love your writing style bro! I think that I could read this entire fanfiction forever, if it was possible to have can infinite amount of words! :D
10/23/2014 c12 MadGod666
This chapter Goten just literally teach the two exorcists the meaning of talk to my finger bitches XD. Good Job!

Huh, oi oi buddy what happened to Kiba? You're just completely ignore him. This arc is very important since it focus more on Kiba background. Sorry it just doesn't sit well with me how you make him act all calm and cool while in front of Excalibur. I think you're just totally ignore his character development. If there is a reason why he act like that at least put it in the chapter so that the reader can understand.

What about Xenovia decide to chop Asia since she is a heretic?
Can you add Katerea and Gabriel to the harem?
10/22/2014 c12 Rebmul
cant wait for more and unfortunetly goten is as dense as they come they are gona have to rape him or out right say I love you goten to get him to understand great story keepem coming
10/21/2014 c2 Guest
Yeah I'm already worried bout this story. I feel like your bout to power up the dxd verse. Which would suck.
10/21/2014 c11 1rinnegan18
great story
10/20/2014 c11 King kong
Loving this story keep it up
10/20/2014 c11 King kong
Keep it up man loving this story
10/16/2014 c11 MadGod666
Xenovia and Irina come all the way to the wildness to test out Goten strength such dedication in their fate. I want to see Goten do the finger stopping sword style like what Goku did to future Trunks :) It will be fun to see the shock face from Xenovia and Irina XD. So I guess this chapter is the introduction to the holy sword arc.

I want to confirm something SK. In dbz when character died they go to the check in station to get judged by King Yemma but what about supernatural being like angel, devil, Norse god, Greek god, etc... Do they go to the same place to get judge?

Have you ever consider to make side story that involve other characters?
How does Great Red and Ophis compare to the villain of dbz: Super PC, Buuhan, Janemba, Omega Shenron?
10/16/2014 c11 derp
So is Goten going to be stronger than Goku and Gohan?
10/15/2014 c11 Guest
Going by power ranking if I had to give one the I would go for this - Tier 1: 2 winged angels, low class devils, 2 winged fallen angels, saibamen, and generic mythical creatures. Tier 2: Gasper, Koneko, Kiba, Saji, Yamcha, and 4 to 6 winged angels and fallen angels, and middle class devils. Tier 3: 8-10 winged angels and fallen angels, high class devils, Master Roshi, Kami, Dende, Tien, Rias, Akeno, Issei, Riser. Tier 4: 12 winged angles and fallen angels, ultimate class devils, Earth saiyans in base form, and Piccolo. Tier 5: Sirzechs, Ajuka, Rizivem, Michael, Azazel, Frieza, low level gods, and Super Saiyans. Tier 6: Mid level gods Super Saiyan 2, and Cell. Tier 7: Majin Buu, Broly, Super Saiyan 3, dragon kings, evil dragons, and high class gods. Tier 8: Super Saiyan 4, Pantheon Leaders, Ddraig, Albion, and Shadow Dragons. Tier 9: Super Saiyan God, Weiss, Biblical God, and Bills. Tier 10: Ophis, Great Red, Trihexa, Shenron, and Porunga. (Unofficial Tier 11): Goku post-GT epilogue after finishing training with Shenron.
10/12/2014 c1 turtle329
I'm not even half way through the first chapter, and I already love it! I also noticed that you frequently update, so I like that too. Keep up the great work!
10/8/2014 c10 Shavi Uzumaki
Where's Trunks at
10/8/2014 c6 Shavi Uzumaki
I rly dont see trunks that much man u need to fix up goten and trunks can fuse
10/6/2014 c10 27JensenDaniels32
That really means something special to me that you'd mention me in the author's Notes like that! Thank you! :D By the way, I loved this chapter as well! :D
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