for When Two Universes Collide12/5/2014 c16 Guest
Not bad would like 2 keep reading more
Not bad would like 2 keep reading more
12/5/2014 c16 
1Drama Llama-Sama
Another great chapter! :D I mostly read Gohan stories, cause that's just what I'm into, but your story is one of the few outside of that, that I really enjoy. At least it's the only one that's completely well written with proper grammar and a good flow. And now that I've said I'm a major fan of Gohan stories, I can move onto the point that I like the fact that you allowed Gohan some training after the Cell Saga, and you're also letting him get back into fight shape. Anyway, keep up the good work.
1Drama Llama-SamaAnother great chapter! :D I mostly read Gohan stories, cause that's just what I'm into, but your story is one of the few outside of that, that I really enjoy. At least it's the only one that's completely well written with proper grammar and a good flow. And now that I've said I'm a major fan of Gohan stories, I can move onto the point that I like the fact that you allowed Gohan some training after the Cell Saga, and you're also letting him get back into fight shape. Anyway, keep up the good work.
12/4/2014 c16 Guest
Awesome! Great job man! Loved this chapter! Kokabiel was insta-destroyed! Nothing can stand up to SSJ2 Goten! Well, nothing so far. As for your question about dying, I think it's best to have Goten master SSJ2, then have someone close (a friend) get hurt and die, forcing him to ascend to SSJ3, with which he obliterates the enemy! You want inspirationan for that, look up on YouTube 'Gohan vs Ize'. It's from Dragonball AF, I believe, a fan manga that supposedly takes place after GT. Just replace Gohan with Goten, and instead of SSJ5, put SSJ3. Transformation and battle between Gohan and Ize is pretty good, I think. Could inspire you for later chapters, I hope. Anyways, doing a great job so far! Please continue! Looking forward to what the future brings!
Awesome! Great job man! Loved this chapter! Kokabiel was insta-destroyed! Nothing can stand up to SSJ2 Goten! Well, nothing so far. As for your question about dying, I think it's best to have Goten master SSJ2, then have someone close (a friend) get hurt and die, forcing him to ascend to SSJ3, with which he obliterates the enemy! You want inspirationan for that, look up on YouTube 'Gohan vs Ize'. It's from Dragonball AF, I believe, a fan manga that supposedly takes place after GT. Just replace Gohan with Goten, and instead of SSJ5, put SSJ3. Transformation and battle between Gohan and Ize is pretty good, I think. Could inspire you for later chapters, I hope. Anyways, doing a great job so far! Please continue! Looking forward to what the future brings!
11/25/2014 c15 El guerrero Goku
great no words to describe it, I fell forward to read more, please alerts when you have chapter 16, which was the best part.
great no words to describe it, I fell forward to read more, please alerts when you have chapter 16, which was the best part.
11/20/2014 c15 MadGod666
Epic! Shit is about to get real :D
How come Xenovia doesn't summon her Durandal? Are you going to have Kokabiel reveal that the Bible God kick the bucket and make Xenovia become a devil?
Epic! Shit is about to get real :D
How come Xenovia doesn't summon her Durandal? Are you going to have Kokabiel reveal that the Bible God kick the bucket and make Xenovia become a devil?
11/16/2014 c2 46UnTalentedArtist9
Ok I know this chapter is old and all, but how could Goten not be able to react faster then some low level fallen? They are so under his powerlevel and skill, he should have appeared before Raynare right after she told Issei to die and blast her into nonexistens...
46UnTalentedArtist9Ok I know this chapter is old and all, but how could Goten not be able to react faster then some low level fallen? They are so under his powerlevel and skill, he should have appeared before Raynare right after she told Issei to die and blast her into nonexistens...
11/15/2014 c15 12JensenDaniels32
INCREDIBLE! This has got to be among the best chapters-if not THE best chapter-in this story so far! :D I'm hyped for next chapter too!
12JensenDaniels32INCREDIBLE! This has got to be among the best chapters-if not THE best chapter-in this story so far! :D I'm hyped for next chapter too!
11/15/2014 c15 Guest
That... was... AWESOME! Love it! Love it! LOOOOVE IT! Great chapter! Great story so far! Please continue! Looking forward!
That... was... AWESOME! Love it! Love it! LOOOOVE IT! Great chapter! Great story so far! Please continue! Looking forward!
11/15/2014 c15 1Drama Llama-Sama
Nice! Great chapter. Goten is finally a super saiyan 2, huh? About time. I almost feel bad for Kokabiel. Almost. Anyway, hope to see more as soon as you can get it out.
1Drama Llama-SamaNice! Great chapter. Goten is finally a super saiyan 2, huh? About time. I almost feel bad for Kokabiel. Almost. Anyway, hope to see more as soon as you can get it out.
11/8/2014 c14 MadGod666
Great! let's see what you have in store for the villain of dbz. I'm happy that Kiba is the one that deal the finishing blow to Valper instead of Kokabiel :). Did you read "A Demon Among Devils" story? I would definitely recommend it to anyone on fanfic site. The story is a masterpiece.
Great! let's see what you have in store for the villain of dbz. I'm happy that Kiba is the one that deal the finishing blow to Valper instead of Kokabiel :). Did you read "A Demon Among Devils" story? I would definitely recommend it to anyone on fanfic site. The story is a masterpiece.
11/6/2014 c14 mdhunter111
AWESOME! Great story so far! Please continue! Really looking forward to it!
AWESOME! Great story so far! Please continue! Really looking forward to it!
11/6/2014 c14 Titan
Please add lemon between goten rias and akeno. Update soon
Please add lemon between goten rias and akeno. Update soon