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12JensenDaniels32
AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved it, as Goten got some action to show off with, and everything with Rias and Goten is looking awesome! :D
12JensenDaniels32AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved it, as Goten got some action to show off with, and everything with Rias and Goten is looking awesome! :D
11/3/2014 c13 4Donnard
I like the story but I would stick to just goten x rias not a harem maybe akeno and you should have issei x asia but those are just my opinions
4DonnardI like the story but I would stick to just goten x rias not a harem maybe akeno and you should have issei x asia but those are just my opinions
11/2/2014 c13 MadGod666
Great as always! Happy to see you build a relationship slowly and not rush it. There are 3 things that I want to see in this arc:
1st: I want to see that bastard Valper Galilei suffer instead of getting kill by Kokabiel.
2nd: Make Goten tame Cerberus and keep them as a pet. Gohan used to have a dragon as a pet so I don't see why Goten can't have one. It will be hilarious to see the dxd casts reaction to this. :D
3rd: Either summon Shenron or Porunga to bring Kiba's friend back or has King Yenma let them keep their body so that Kiba can spend time with them before they go to heaven.
Great as always! Happy to see you build a relationship slowly and not rush it. There are 3 things that I want to see in this arc:
1st: I want to see that bastard Valper Galilei suffer instead of getting kill by Kokabiel.
2nd: Make Goten tame Cerberus and keep them as a pet. Gohan used to have a dragon as a pet so I don't see why Goten can't have one. It will be hilarious to see the dxd casts reaction to this. :D
3rd: Either summon Shenron or Porunga to bring Kiba's friend back or has King Yenma let them keep their body so that Kiba can spend time with them before they go to heaven.
10/31/2014 c13 Rias
Please do some lemon for goten x rias next chapter
Please do some lemon for goten x rias next chapter
10/31/2014 c13 12JensenDaniels32
Nice, very well-written chapter! I can hardly wait for the action part, as well! :D
12JensenDaniels32Nice, very well-written chapter! I can hardly wait for the action part, as well! :D
10/24/2014 c12 JensenDaniels32
I LOVED IT! What an awesome chapter! :D I ESPECIALLY Loved the part where Goten unleashed his full power and fought with only his finger! verything else was also magnificently done as well! I can't wait to see your next chapter! :D
I LOVED IT! What an awesome chapter! :D I ESPECIALLY Loved the part where Goten unleashed his full power and fought with only his finger! verything else was also magnificently done as well! I can't wait to see your next chapter! :D
10/24/2014 c11 JensenDaniels32
AWESOME CHAPTER BRO! :D I love your writing style bro! I think that I could read this entire fanfiction forever, if it was possible to have can infinite amount of words! :D
AWESOME CHAPTER BRO! :D I love your writing style bro! I think that I could read this entire fanfiction forever, if it was possible to have can infinite amount of words! :D
10/23/2014 c12 MadGod666
This chapter Goten just literally teach the two exorcists the meaning of talk to my finger bitches XD. Good Job!
Huh, oi oi buddy what happened to Kiba? You're just completely ignore him. This arc is very important since it focus more on Kiba background. Sorry it just doesn't sit well with me how you make him act all calm and cool while in front of Excalibur. I think you're just totally ignore his character development. If there is a reason why he act like that at least put it in the chapter so that the reader can understand.
What about Xenovia decide to chop Asia since she is a heretic?
Can you add Katerea and Gabriel to the harem?
This chapter Goten just literally teach the two exorcists the meaning of talk to my finger bitches XD. Good Job!
Huh, oi oi buddy what happened to Kiba? You're just completely ignore him. This arc is very important since it focus more on Kiba background. Sorry it just doesn't sit well with me how you make him act all calm and cool while in front of Excalibur. I think you're just totally ignore his character development. If there is a reason why he act like that at least put it in the chapter so that the reader can understand.
What about Xenovia decide to chop Asia since she is a heretic?
Can you add Katerea and Gabriel to the harem?
10/22/2014 c12 Rebmul
cant wait for more and unfortunetly goten is as dense as they come they are gona have to rape him or out right say I love you goten to get him to understand great story keepem coming
cant wait for more and unfortunetly goten is as dense as they come they are gona have to rape him or out right say I love you goten to get him to understand great story keepem coming
10/21/2014 c2 Guest
Yeah I'm already worried bout this story. I feel like your bout to power up the dxd verse. Which would suck.
Yeah I'm already worried bout this story. I feel like your bout to power up the dxd verse. Which would suck.
10/20/2014 c11 King kong
Loving this story keep it up
Loving this story keep it up
10/20/2014 c11 King kong
Keep it up man loving this story
Keep it up man loving this story