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10/16/2014 c11 MadGod666
Xenovia and Irina come all the way to the wildness to test out Goten strength such dedication in their fate. I want to see Goten do the finger stopping sword style like what Goku did to future Trunks :) It will be fun to see the shock face from Xenovia and Irina XD. So I guess this chapter is the introduction to the holy sword arc.

I want to confirm something SK. In dbz when character died they go to the check in station to get judged by King Yemma but what about supernatural being like angel, devil, Norse god, Greek god, etc... Do they go to the same place to get judge?

Have you ever consider to make side story that involve other characters?
How does Great Red and Ophis compare to the villain of dbz: Super PC, Buuhan, Janemba, Omega Shenron?
10/16/2014 c11 derp
So is Goten going to be stronger than Goku and Gohan?
10/15/2014 c11 Guest
Going by power ranking if I had to give one the I would go for this - Tier 1: 2 winged angels, low class devils, 2 winged fallen angels, saibamen, and generic mythical creatures. Tier 2: Gasper, Koneko, Kiba, Saji, Yamcha, and 4 to 6 winged angels and fallen angels, and middle class devils. Tier 3: 8-10 winged angels and fallen angels, high class devils, Master Roshi, Kami, Dende, Tien, Rias, Akeno, Issei, Riser. Tier 4: 12 winged angles and fallen angels, ultimate class devils, Earth saiyans in base form, and Piccolo. Tier 5: Sirzechs, Ajuka, Rizivem, Michael, Azazel, Frieza, low level gods, and Super Saiyans. Tier 6: Mid level gods Super Saiyan 2, and Cell. Tier 7: Majin Buu, Broly, Super Saiyan 3, dragon kings, evil dragons, and high class gods. Tier 8: Super Saiyan 4, Pantheon Leaders, Ddraig, Albion, and Shadow Dragons. Tier 9: Super Saiyan God, Weiss, Biblical God, and Bills. Tier 10: Ophis, Great Red, Trihexa, Shenron, and Porunga. (Unofficial Tier 11): Goku post-GT epilogue after finishing training with Shenron.
10/12/2014 c1 turtle329
I'm not even half way through the first chapter, and I already love it! I also noticed that you frequently update, so I like that too. Keep up the great work!
10/8/2014 c10 Shavi Uzumaki
Where's Trunks at
10/8/2014 c6 Shavi Uzumaki
I rly dont see trunks that much man u need to fix up goten and trunks can fuse
10/6/2014 c10 12JensenDaniels32
That really means something special to me that you'd mention me in the author's Notes like that! Thank you! :D By the way, I loved this chapter as well! :D
10/5/2014 c10 MadGod666
Awesome keep it up. There is something kinda bugging me for a while. How come many people of underworld keep underestimate the saiyan so much? If they see the cell game's video then they should know how powerful the z fighters are.

How does the seraph view the kai that govern the universe? Do they consider them higher than bible god or just respect them because of their status? What about Xenovia and Irina do they know anything about the kai and do they also worship them like the bible god? Does the heaven from bible faction heaven the same in dbz or completely different?
10/1/2014 c9 MadGod666
The fight kinda short wish it was a little longer. Is it just me or your Goten just like a carbon copy of Gohan? I kinda wish you would make Goten personality like young adult Goku in the early dragon ball. Innocent, love to fight strong opponent and don't get embarrassed around female. This Goten feel kinda awkward. Looking forward the fight with Kokabiel.
9/29/2014 c9 JensenDaniels32
THAT WAS AWESOME, BROTHER! :D I loved this chapter! :D
9/24/2014 c8 THE CROW 88
nice fic and for the girls :kuroka, serafall, Gabriel, rossewise, ravel and grayfia(i know she is the wife of lucifer but hey she could be the mature in the harem)
9/23/2014 c8 JensenDaniels32
NICE! Lolz, that Roshi scene! XD
9/22/2014 c8 MadGod666
Goten going to fried chicken head next chapter. Hope that he is a good cook :) For the harem members: Ravel, Koneko, Ophis (every badass need a loli in the harem) Kuroka, and Rossweisse, Serafall, and Xenovia.

I chuckle a little when Rias and the group surprise at the hypbolic time chamber. Should they have something similar like that since the devil capable create a small alternative dimension? Wait until Rias heard about the time machine, Shenron, and 400 times gravity training.
9/22/2014 c8 Guest
I think you should add Sona. She's a great character.
9/22/2014 c8 02D34th
Bad story
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