for When Two Universes Collide9/6/2014 c1 MadGod666
It look quite promising. I just hope you don't downplay the dbz verse or turn Goten into a devil like most story done.
It look quite promising. I just hope you don't downplay the dbz verse or turn Goten into a devil like most story done.
9/4/2014 c1 
6The Slumbering Dragon
Interesting. I will keep tabs on this fic. And the fact that the harem consist of my favorite women, I guess its an added bonus.
An advice to you. Try to be more descriptive in terms of a characters thoughts, emotions and scenario description. Don't end it in one line or one word.
6The Slumbering DragonInteresting. I will keep tabs on this fic. And the fact that the harem consist of my favorite women, I guess its an added bonus.
An advice to you. Try to be more descriptive in terms of a characters thoughts, emotions and scenario description. Don't end it in one line or one word.