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9/6/2014 c1 MadGod666
It look quite promising. I just hope you don't downplay the dbz verse or turn Goten into a devil like most story done.
9/5/2014 c1 9JLKAuthor
Update, UPDATE!, UPATEEEEEE good fanfiction by the way,
9/4/2014 c1 6The Slumbering Dragon
Interesting. I will keep tabs on this fic. And the fact that the harem consist of my favorite women, I guess its an added bonus.

An advice to you. Try to be more descriptive in terms of a characters thoughts, emotions and scenario description. Don't end it in one line or one word.
9/4/2014 c1 6Silerius
Well, it doesn't seem bad at all, I kinda like it :D

I would suggest you to be more descriptive, the reading almost feels like a script
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