for When Two Universes Collide3/16/2022 c4 Axccel
I like that ChiChi trusts Goten so much that him saying Rias is good is enough for her to instantly approve. As far as she's concerned, Goten said Rias is alright, therefore it must be true.
I like that ChiChi trusts Goten so much that him saying Rias is good is enough for her to instantly approve. As far as she's concerned, Goten said Rias is alright, therefore it must be true.
3/16/2022 c2 Axccel
Pfft, Rias gives Goten an offer in which he has nothing to gain, would lose his freedom to save whomever he wants whenever he wants, and be subjected to a control spell that Rias can use to force his obedience. Plus what can cause him to mutate into a stray. A stray powerful enough to threaten galaxies.
Yeah, no. That is stupid and she is stupid for even making the offer.
“Oh hey Mr. Overpowered Alien Warrior! Would you like to become my servant in exchange for nothing?” Wow so tempting.
Pfft, Rias gives Goten an offer in which he has nothing to gain, would lose his freedom to save whomever he wants whenever he wants, and be subjected to a control spell that Rias can use to force his obedience. Plus what can cause him to mutate into a stray. A stray powerful enough to threaten galaxies.
Yeah, no. That is stupid and she is stupid for even making the offer.
“Oh hey Mr. Overpowered Alien Warrior! Would you like to become my servant in exchange for nothing?” Wow so tempting.
3/16/2022 c1 Axccel
They have no reason to join a peerage and their loyalty is to humanity first and only. Considering how most devils treat humans in DxD, Goten and Trunks would probably just wipe them out. Or at least terrorize them into leaving humans alone. Combined with Gohan’s canonical release of Groundbreaking Science and that basically resulting in humanity becoming a species of badass curbstompers, it’d work out pretty well.
They have no reason to join a peerage and their loyalty is to humanity first and only. Considering how most devils treat humans in DxD, Goten and Trunks would probably just wipe them out. Or at least terrorize them into leaving humans alone. Combined with Gohan’s canonical release of Groundbreaking Science and that basically resulting in humanity becoming a species of badass curbstompers, it’d work out pretty well.
2/20/2022 c4 Guest
Aww, Goten wanting to train again is so nice! Especially with Goku! And imagining him (and Gohan too tbh) wearing Goku’s gi is so satisfying. And I’m glad Chichi’s first interaction with the girls went better than it did for poor videl lmao. And then her calling them perfect wife material, I can’t lol.
Goten getting flustered over Rias and Akeno was adorable too.
The fight scene/training was really well done and fun to read. I like how you incorporated the after image technique, kamehameha and solar flare as well.
Akeno saying Goten looked better with his shirt off and then sag she’s do CPR if he choked made me laugh out loud, I get such a kick out of her.
And I must say, you characterize Goku better than modern dragon ball does lol. You truly know your stuff!
Great job on this! I’m really enjoying it so much
-Lauren
Aww, Goten wanting to train again is so nice! Especially with Goku! And imagining him (and Gohan too tbh) wearing Goku’s gi is so satisfying. And I’m glad Chichi’s first interaction with the girls went better than it did for poor videl lmao. And then her calling them perfect wife material, I can’t lol.
Goten getting flustered over Rias and Akeno was adorable too.
The fight scene/training was really well done and fun to read. I like how you incorporated the after image technique, kamehameha and solar flare as well.
Akeno saying Goten looked better with his shirt off and then sag she’s do CPR if he choked made me laugh out loud, I get such a kick out of her.
And I must say, you characterize Goku better than modern dragon ball does lol. You truly know your stuff!
Great job on this! I’m really enjoying it so much
-Lauren
2/20/2022 c3 Guest
Another great chapter, more great lines!
“It’s the worst porno ever, that’s what!” LMAO
The dxd and dbz characters interact so organically and believably while still staying true to their respective works. You really do have a talent with dialogue!
- Lauren
Another great chapter, more great lines!
“It’s the worst porno ever, that’s what!” LMAO
The dxd and dbz characters interact so organically and believably while still staying true to their respective works. You really do have a talent with dialogue!
- Lauren
2/19/2022 c2 Guest
Another great chapter!
I like that Goten isn’t outright simping for Rias lol, and that he turned down her offer to become a reasoning was definitely understandable.
I also can’t even tell you have much I appreciate goten and trunk’s interactions. It’s exactly how I’d imagine them to act around each other lol.
you had me wondering if you were going to kill issei off and have Goten take his place, but I’m glad he’s still in the picture!
And Nice authors note!
Your story and I have something in common. I too ignore dragon ball super ;) lol
- Lauren
Another great chapter!
I like that Goten isn’t outright simping for Rias lol, and that he turned down her offer to become a reasoning was definitely understandable.
I also can’t even tell you have much I appreciate goten and trunk’s interactions. It’s exactly how I’d imagine them to act around each other lol.
you had me wondering if you were going to kill issei off and have Goten take his place, but I’m glad he’s still in the picture!
And Nice authors note!
Your story and I have something in common. I too ignore dragon ball super ;) lol
- Lauren
2/19/2022 c1 Guest
THIS IS SO GOOD SO FAR
As always, I love all those little details you incorporate when characterizing the members of the Son family, such as chichi making her son a big breakfast, goten eating more than trunks, and him doodling in class lol. Also poor trunks, he definitely would get followed around by girls all day lol. It’s probably nice at first but I’m sure it would get old kinda fast
Goten comparing issei to master roshi after his boob rant, and then telling him “You're gonna get killed one day if you keep that shit up. You know that right?" Cracked me up lmao.
I also loved the line: “The way she carried herself oozed elegance and the mature sexiness of an older woman, but she made it look completely natural. She had brilliant sea-blue eyes with a very pretty face and perfect body.” You described her perfectly
And Chi-Chi’s reaction to Goten talking about Rias was extremely accurate and a nice nod to her calling Videl a hussy back in the day lmao. She’s always so protective of her sons!
I’m loving how you’re tying the two series together so perfectly! You really are a great writer️ can’t wait to see how the story progresses!
THIS IS SO GOOD SO FAR
As always, I love all those little details you incorporate when characterizing the members of the Son family, such as chichi making her son a big breakfast, goten eating more than trunks, and him doodling in class lol. Also poor trunks, he definitely would get followed around by girls all day lol. It’s probably nice at first but I’m sure it would get old kinda fast
Goten comparing issei to master roshi after his boob rant, and then telling him “You're gonna get killed one day if you keep that shit up. You know that right?" Cracked me up lmao.
I also loved the line: “The way she carried herself oozed elegance and the mature sexiness of an older woman, but she made it look completely natural. She had brilliant sea-blue eyes with a very pretty face and perfect body.” You described her perfectly
And Chi-Chi’s reaction to Goten talking about Rias was extremely accurate and a nice nod to her calling Videl a hussy back in the day lmao. She’s always so protective of her sons!
I’m loving how you’re tying the two series together so perfectly! You really are a great writer️ can’t wait to see how the story progresses!
2/18/2022 c34 Mhoza
Where is new chapter
Where is new chapter
1/20/2022 c1 shaswatpatnayakthewriter26
When is the next chapter of this story coming?...Waiting anxiously...please upload the next chapter... It's too good to be read in a continuous manner...not to be stopped in a cliffhanger
When is the next chapter of this story coming?...Waiting anxiously...please upload the next chapter... It's too good to be read in a continuous manner...not to be stopped in a cliffhanger
1/1/2022 c34 Godrush
I just remembered this fanfic I missed reading it please bring it back!
I just remembered this fanfic I missed reading it please bring it back!
12/2/2021 c1 
5TheDreamingScorpio
Okay okay okay so first of all the titles for the chapters are absolutely fabulous to say the least, like I can actually see the intro where the dragon balls roll in to stop and then the title shows up, then the flashback to the ending of the Buu era is so grand I'm always... enamored really, like its so active, passive, distant, present at the same time it feels like... yeah okay maybe this is the wording for it, but it feels like witnessing a supernova or the journey through a hyper speed time catapult and then for there to be this gravelling fading silence zooming into the present, like the big bang, it's quite a trip, that one :))
Then oh my God the relatability of it all, the dialogue is just so so organic, it is because of that, that you forget that it is a piece of writing and not a movie, like I can *see* his room, him grimacing, scratching his head, the itchiness of the uniform, i couldn't relate more! Oh and your description for apparel is just so finely tuned, it's magnificent, like you can see the description, love how realistic it is and you understand the fuss over the formalities lol!
Then the breakfast and him leaving, I'm reminded of the earlier description of the day then and this is weird lol, maybe its just me but I'm always feeling the fresh air and a mixture of warmth from leftover drowsiness, nerves and anticipation. And Chi-Chi! I love how she's a mama bear just so concerned and doting and still wanting him to go live, the checklist is so damn relatable its hard to express!
And I know I've said it before but the dialogue and just Goten's internal monologue, everything it all simply paints, like the words are there but its like this sublimatory state, I watch them fully fleshed out, with their little nuisances, things, details that the mind just makes up, the overview of the academy from Goten's eyes , the entrance, the class everything, I can see Trunks' eye-rolls and chuckles and Goten pouting is so natural, their comradery, the pats on his back, ooh and when Rias shows up that's like simply entering a trance like state, like it's so slow motion romance for me like I always go...mhm! oooh and the solid three seconds, I sooo felt them!
Goten's obliviousness is played on so well, that's just like him, and the fact that you don't portray him as dumb but rather someone simply not academically inclined is so so nice, I've always felt that trait of his is often misinterpreted, but you do a beautiful job here.
I like how his nature coverts Issei to change his mind regarding popular guys as well, how he meets up with Trunks later, talks about him but is mindful of his new friendship as well, that's so Goten and the dialogue there is brilliant once again :))
My God and the cafeteria scene, it's a rollercoaster ride the whole way, the piling up always makes me smile, his nonchalant attitude all the more, and when the girls enter... I have never till date been able to read this scene in one go, I'm always dancing to a song first then return back, like I have the stupidest grin on when that happens, my mouth doesn't wanna close then lol, and the thrill from there on, with their questions, the wariness, its so perfectly balanced, like you feel it in the pit of your stomach but its still progressing and in the simple gestures, you feel everyone's emotions at once, even after with so much happening, their talk, talking to the family, Chi-Chi's outburst, you know exactly where everyone stands but the talk in the building always gets me, I'm like :)...*_* all the time, like it dwindles, I'm like she's nice, she's good, I root for them, but... is she? lol
The suspense is very real!
Ooh and... my first proper comment on AO3 was on your fic and same is the case here lol, thats your fun fact haha! But love WTUC from the very core of my heart, makes you keep flipping and repeating :)) !
5TheDreamingScorpioOkay okay okay so first of all the titles for the chapters are absolutely fabulous to say the least, like I can actually see the intro where the dragon balls roll in to stop and then the title shows up, then the flashback to the ending of the Buu era is so grand I'm always... enamored really, like its so active, passive, distant, present at the same time it feels like... yeah okay maybe this is the wording for it, but it feels like witnessing a supernova or the journey through a hyper speed time catapult and then for there to be this gravelling fading silence zooming into the present, like the big bang, it's quite a trip, that one :))
Then oh my God the relatability of it all, the dialogue is just so so organic, it is because of that, that you forget that it is a piece of writing and not a movie, like I can *see* his room, him grimacing, scratching his head, the itchiness of the uniform, i couldn't relate more! Oh and your description for apparel is just so finely tuned, it's magnificent, like you can see the description, love how realistic it is and you understand the fuss over the formalities lol!
Then the breakfast and him leaving, I'm reminded of the earlier description of the day then and this is weird lol, maybe its just me but I'm always feeling the fresh air and a mixture of warmth from leftover drowsiness, nerves and anticipation. And Chi-Chi! I love how she's a mama bear just so concerned and doting and still wanting him to go live, the checklist is so damn relatable its hard to express!
And I know I've said it before but the dialogue and just Goten's internal monologue, everything it all simply paints, like the words are there but its like this sublimatory state, I watch them fully fleshed out, with their little nuisances, things, details that the mind just makes up, the overview of the academy from Goten's eyes , the entrance, the class everything, I can see Trunks' eye-rolls and chuckles and Goten pouting is so natural, their comradery, the pats on his back, ooh and when Rias shows up that's like simply entering a trance like state, like it's so slow motion romance for me like I always go...mhm! oooh and the solid three seconds, I sooo felt them!
Goten's obliviousness is played on so well, that's just like him, and the fact that you don't portray him as dumb but rather someone simply not academically inclined is so so nice, I've always felt that trait of his is often misinterpreted, but you do a beautiful job here.
I like how his nature coverts Issei to change his mind regarding popular guys as well, how he meets up with Trunks later, talks about him but is mindful of his new friendship as well, that's so Goten and the dialogue there is brilliant once again :))
My God and the cafeteria scene, it's a rollercoaster ride the whole way, the piling up always makes me smile, his nonchalant attitude all the more, and when the girls enter... I have never till date been able to read this scene in one go, I'm always dancing to a song first then return back, like I have the stupidest grin on when that happens, my mouth doesn't wanna close then lol, and the thrill from there on, with their questions, the wariness, its so perfectly balanced, like you feel it in the pit of your stomach but its still progressing and in the simple gestures, you feel everyone's emotions at once, even after with so much happening, their talk, talking to the family, Chi-Chi's outburst, you know exactly where everyone stands but the talk in the building always gets me, I'm like :)...*_* all the time, like it dwindles, I'm like she's nice, she's good, I root for them, but... is she? lol
The suspense is very real!
Ooh and... my first proper comment on AO3 was on your fic and same is the case here lol, thats your fun fact haha! But love WTUC from the very core of my heart, makes you keep flipping and repeating :)) !
8/27/2021 c34 Trigon999
Awesome dude when is page 35 coming?
Awesome dude when is page 35 coming?
6/15/2021 c1 GloGang214
the evil pieces cant reincarnate poeple stronger than the king. I'm pretty sure goten is way stronger
the evil pieces cant reincarnate poeple stronger than the king. I'm pretty sure goten is way stronger
3/15/2021 c5 Guest
I love it but the one thing that bugs me it’s that all the girls can fly on their own I know it’s suppose to be romantic but it’s every time they fly they do it with hotels help
I love it but the one thing that bugs me it’s that all the girls can fly on their own I know it’s suppose to be romantic but it’s every time they fly they do it with hotels help
1/30/2021 c34 GozukuTheLegendaryWarrior
Finally i got to this ending chapter(until you will update it). This is a beautiful story. And idc if my age is smaller then the age you need to really read this story :D
Finally i got to this ending chapter(until you will update it). This is a beautiful story. And idc if my age is smaller then the age you need to really read this story :D