for When Two Universes Collide9/9/2014 c2 JensenDaniels32
No, seriously. Don't go underpowering DBZ. Also, to clear some things up: sharp objects CANNOT pierce a Saiyan UNLESS the wielder of it is stronger than the Saiyan.
No, seriously. Don't go underpowering DBZ. Also, to clear some things up: sharp objects CANNOT pierce a Saiyan UNLESS the wielder of it is stronger than the Saiyan.
9/9/2014 c1 JensenDaniels32
I LOVE IT! Just please don't severely overpower HSDXD just so they can match up with DBZ world. It would be impossible and it would ruin the story if you did that. So please keep it the way it should be, with DBZ unmatchebly stronger than DXD.
I LOVE IT! Just please don't severely overpower HSDXD just so they can match up with DBZ world. It would be impossible and it would ruin the story if you did that. So please keep it the way it should be, with DBZ unmatchebly stronger than DXD.
9/8/2014 c2 
12xchrispx
Great fic so far keep up the good work. Although I don't think Goten would swear even in his head, not with his personality being so much like Goku's and Chi Chi being so strict about manners and stuff.
12xchrispxGreat fic so far keep up the good work. Although I don't think Goten would swear even in his head, not with his personality being so much like Goku's and Chi Chi being so strict about manners and stuff.
9/6/2014 c2 MadGod666
I just hope you don't do something silly like having Goten struggle again small fries like Raynare or Riser and his harem. These guy are even weaker than the Ginryu Force. Goku easily oneshot Recoome before achieving SSJ. How on earth did Rias know about Goku? You do realize that there is also a descendant of Son Goku that base on Journey to the West from dxd right.
I just hope you don't do something silly like having Goten struggle again small fries like Raynare or Riser and his harem. These guy are even weaker than the Ginryu Force. Goku easily oneshot Recoome before achieving SSJ. How on earth did Rias know about Goku? You do realize that there is also a descendant of Son Goku that base on Journey to the West from dxd right.
9/4/2014 c1 Guest
only one thing not make goten weakling i mean he can blow the planet
only one thing not make goten weakling i mean he can blow the planet
9/4/2014 c1 Destruction God
It's a first chapter so I can't judge it good or not. There are a few question that I want to know:
Are you going to downplaying the dbz characters like most other author done?
How on earth is Rias know about the event in dbz?
You do realize that kid buu blow up the earth right and if this take place in the same universe then what happen to the other factions while they are on earth?
Please don't something silly like making Goten weaker then Rias or turn him into a devil. He is way stronger then her heck not even Sirzech mutate pieces can turn the SSJ to a devil.
Most of the character in dxd verse are strong but they have to relies on the sacred gear to accomplish the task unlike the character in dbz where they use their own power. For example: Vali can shrink the dimension but in other to do that he need his sacred gear to do it whereas buuhan almost collapse the universe by destroying the dimensional wall with his own raw power.
To make it short the character in dxd are strong but compare them to high tier in dbz is like an ant vs a dragon (I know it elephant but dragon sound cooler)
It's a first chapter so I can't judge it good or not. There are a few question that I want to know:
Are you going to downplaying the dbz characters like most other author done?
How on earth is Rias know about the event in dbz?
You do realize that kid buu blow up the earth right and if this take place in the same universe then what happen to the other factions while they are on earth?
Please don't something silly like making Goten weaker then Rias or turn him into a devil. He is way stronger then her heck not even Sirzech mutate pieces can turn the SSJ to a devil.
Most of the character in dxd verse are strong but they have to relies on the sacred gear to accomplish the task unlike the character in dbz where they use their own power. For example: Vali can shrink the dimension but in other to do that he need his sacred gear to do it whereas buuhan almost collapse the universe by destroying the dimensional wall with his own raw power.
To make it short the character in dxd are strong but compare them to high tier in dbz is like an ant vs a dragon (I know it elephant but dragon sound cooler)
9/6/2014 c1 MadGod666
It look quite promising. I just hope you don't downplay the dbz verse or turn Goten into a devil like most story done.
It look quite promising. I just hope you don't downplay the dbz verse or turn Goten into a devil like most story done.
9/4/2014 c1 6The Slumbering Dragon
Interesting. I will keep tabs on this fic. And the fact that the harem consist of my favorite women, I guess its an added bonus.
An advice to you. Try to be more descriptive in terms of a characters thoughts, emotions and scenario description. Don't end it in one line or one word.
6The Slumbering DragonInteresting. I will keep tabs on this fic. And the fact that the harem consist of my favorite women, I guess its an added bonus.
An advice to you. Try to be more descriptive in terms of a characters thoughts, emotions and scenario description. Don't end it in one line or one word.