for When Two Universes Collide5/13/2020 c22 Guest
What’s wrong with SSJG and ssjblue
What’s wrong with SSJG and ssjblue
5/4/2020 c4 Mideku Brandio
This is just my thoughts by I'd like to see this story go down the dragonball super route. It'd be cool to see the interactions of Sirzechs and Beerus or Zamasu/Goku Black and Azazel. But that's just my opinion, you don't have to listen to me.
This is just my thoughts by I'd like to see this story go down the dragonball super route. It'd be cool to see the interactions of Sirzechs and Beerus or Zamasu/Goku Black and Azazel. But that's just my opinion, you don't have to listen to me.
4/30/2020 c1 Guest
Asco de historia ascoooooo
Asco de historia ascoooooo
184/18/2020 c31 p6lishb6kser
Seriously dude this fanfic is great but once again when Marron showed up I skipped 1/3of a chapter... Seriously every interaction between her and others is so bad I'm simply skipping it
Seriously dude this fanfic is great but once again when Marron showed up I skipped 1/3of a chapter... Seriously every interaction between her and others is so bad I'm simply skipping it
4/18/2020 c29 p6lishb6kser
I skipped almost all chapter while your story is really good I'll drop it if I'll read more about Marron
I skipped almost all chapter while your story is really good I'll drop it if I'll read more about Marron
3/29/2020 c2 User Closed
ok Has Goten swapped at least one chapter for his brain with Issei?
I do not know Dbz enough and even less its characters to pronounce me but this chapter is simply horrible
I want to facepalm at the simple reading of this chapter because you have to be perverted to have your eyes on Rias' Oppais but above all incredibly stupid to swallow the lies of Rias!
it sounds horribly wrong!
as if Goten's brain was plugged into his d ... rather than having a logical and rational reaction!
ok Has Goten swapped at least one chapter for his brain with Issei?
I do not know Dbz enough and even less its characters to pronounce me but this chapter is simply horrible
I want to facepalm at the simple reading of this chapter because you have to be perverted to have your eyes on Rias' Oppais but above all incredibly stupid to swallow the lies of Rias!
it sounds horribly wrong!
as if Goten's brain was plugged into his d ... rather than having a logical and rational reaction!
3/8/2020 c34 Guest
Like the story, ombut please at least xenovia,koneko t ravel apart of the harem keep
Like the story, ombut please at least xenovia,koneko t ravel apart of the harem keep
3/7/2020 c34 Mideku Brandio
I absolutely love this story, the way you made the worlds of dragon ball and highschool dxd merge was perfect. Every single thing makes sense, like of course majin buu was a formidable villain for every one and of course goku would be known across all 3 factions. The only thing I have a question about is what was Dabura's deal in this world? Since he was the king of the demon realm in dragon ball, would've he been a maou of the underworld like Sirzechs or something else? Anyway I bid you luck with this story, I love it so much. And you don't have to listen to me but it would be awesome if you made a side story that focuses on Trunks and Tsubaki. I personally prefer Trunks over Goten so I would really like it if you did that, but again you don't have if you don't want to.
I absolutely love this story, the way you made the worlds of dragon ball and highschool dxd merge was perfect. Every single thing makes sense, like of course majin buu was a formidable villain for every one and of course goku would be known across all 3 factions. The only thing I have a question about is what was Dabura's deal in this world? Since he was the king of the demon realm in dragon ball, would've he been a maou of the underworld like Sirzechs or something else? Anyway I bid you luck with this story, I love it so much. And you don't have to listen to me but it would be awesome if you made a side story that focuses on Trunks and Tsubaki. I personally prefer Trunks over Goten so I would really like it if you did that, but again you don't have if you don't want to.
2/1/2020 c19 fanfictionboy1998
perfect i want the magical girl a milf herself a older women in goten harem.
perfect i want the magical girl a milf herself a older women in goten harem.
2/1/2020 c18 fanfictionboy1998
oh poor goten he mess up but i do hope he can fixed it and nice akeno showing off her true side as well.
oh poor goten he mess up but i do hope he can fixed it and nice akeno showing off her true side as well.
2/1/2020 c17 fanfictionboy1998
Hehehe Goten and two girls wanting him be fun to see how it turns out here.
Hehehe Goten and two girls wanting him be fun to see how it turns out here.
2/1/2020 c16 fanfictionboy1998
Its fine man and this story pretty thrilling and xenovia interested in goten seems interesting but i like Serafall and sona to be involved with goten and sometime in the future.
Its fine man and this story pretty thrilling and xenovia interested in goten seems interesting but i like Serafall and sona to be involved with goten and sometime in the future.