for Ghosts of the Past1/11/2015 c3 Cerberus13
Naruto's not to be fucked with. I wonder if Hotel Moscow will be short a few members before this story is over.
Naruto's not to be fucked with. I wonder if Hotel Moscow will be short a few members before this story is over.
1/11/2015 c3 Guest
Good chapter
Good chapter
1/11/2015 c2 
1Captain Reeeena
*sniff sniff* is that blood I smell? No... it's *sniff* Incoming Bloodshed, Levy cursing, and other good things.
1Captain Reeeena*sniff sniff* is that blood I smell? No... it's *sniff* Incoming Bloodshed, Levy cursing, and other good things.
12/2/2014 c2 wander
Naruto is immortal. But the other are not. But the good news is i found a reviewer with a very interesting theory about how to gain eternal life.
he/she said this and i quotes:
Good story so far, one of the best in this crossover genre, however you are wrong about a couple of things. You stated the 'Mate Mark' excuse won't work since Naruto's not a Demon in this story, you seem to forget about Fuinjutsu and Juinjutsu which can be used to mimic 'Mate Mark', an example is Orochimaru's 'Ten no Juin', one person actually made it a plot in their story that it was a bastardized version of a 'Mate Mark' and if you think about it, it really is. The Ten no Juin binds the wearer and Orochimaru's life-forces together, basically through their chakra and souls, it has been mentioned that Orochimaru can actually draw on the chakra of the wearers through the Ten no Juin and was proven when Kabuto used it to power the mass Edo Tensei using Anko, though this was mentioned back during the first part of the series. We also know it now ties the souls together since Sasuke also used Anko's mark to literally revive Orochimaru, who was previously sealed away in Susanoo's 'World of Drunken Dreams', it wouldn't be hard for Naruto to break down and reverse engineer this into a fuinjutsu that instead of taking the wearer's life it instead shares Naruto's life force, and thus his immortality with his lovers, it's a very possible scenario. Even though you haven't mentioned yet if Naruto is a master of Fuinjutsu, I'm sure if he's immortal then he's probably trained in countless arts to master levels just to stave off his boredom, stories with Naruto being immortal but still only knowing the Rasengan are so stupid, Naruto is technically as obsessed with Ninpo as Orochimaru is. There is also the now less frequently used Uzumaki clan 'Mate Mark' which has been featured in several older Uzumakicest stories where when an Uzumaki mates with someone they are destined to be with, they form a mark that shares their life forces, usually seen in older 'NaruKushi' stories.
Naruto is immortal. But the other are not. But the good news is i found a reviewer with a very interesting theory about how to gain eternal life.
he/she said this and i quotes:
Good story so far, one of the best in this crossover genre, however you are wrong about a couple of things. You stated the 'Mate Mark' excuse won't work since Naruto's not a Demon in this story, you seem to forget about Fuinjutsu and Juinjutsu which can be used to mimic 'Mate Mark', an example is Orochimaru's 'Ten no Juin', one person actually made it a plot in their story that it was a bastardized version of a 'Mate Mark' and if you think about it, it really is. The Ten no Juin binds the wearer and Orochimaru's life-forces together, basically through their chakra and souls, it has been mentioned that Orochimaru can actually draw on the chakra of the wearers through the Ten no Juin and was proven when Kabuto used it to power the mass Edo Tensei using Anko, though this was mentioned back during the first part of the series. We also know it now ties the souls together since Sasuke also used Anko's mark to literally revive Orochimaru, who was previously sealed away in Susanoo's 'World of Drunken Dreams', it wouldn't be hard for Naruto to break down and reverse engineer this into a fuinjutsu that instead of taking the wearer's life it instead shares Naruto's life force, and thus his immortality with his lovers, it's a very possible scenario. Even though you haven't mentioned yet if Naruto is a master of Fuinjutsu, I'm sure if he's immortal then he's probably trained in countless arts to master levels just to stave off his boredom, stories with Naruto being immortal but still only knowing the Rasengan are so stupid, Naruto is technically as obsessed with Ninpo as Orochimaru is. There is also the now less frequently used Uzumaki clan 'Mate Mark' which has been featured in several older Uzumakicest stories where when an Uzumaki mates with someone they are destined to be with, they form a mark that shares their life forces, usually seen in older 'NaruKushi' stories.
12/2/2014 c2 Groudon
I love this story so far. One question: Is Naruto going to be paired with anyone in this story and if so who? Revy, Eda, Rosarita, Fabiola, Frederica, Shenhua, Yukio, Balalaika, or is this going to be a harem? I'd like to this become a harem personally.
I love this story so far. One question: Is Naruto going to be paired with anyone in this story and if so who? Revy, Eda, Rosarita, Fabiola, Frederica, Shenhua, Yukio, Balalaika, or is this going to be a harem? I'd like to this become a harem personally.
12/2/2014 c2 Guest
Well this is interesting so keep up the good work and update soon.
Well this is interesting so keep up the good work and update soon.
12/1/2014 c2 Kaiju Fan
Will the twins live? Is Naruto going to adopt them? Is there a pairing in this story?
Will the twins live? Is Naruto going to adopt them? Is there a pairing in this story?
12/1/2014 c1 Guest
This got a lot of potential don't waste it by abandoning
This got a lot of potential don't waste it by abandoning