for Ghosts of the Past10/28/2017 c9 Old steamer
Ouch losing your notes must've been painful metaphorically speaking but maybe you should have considered backing them up, anyway I think that you should think about what actually happened Naruto's daughter and whare she is or whatever left of her considering what happens to dead bodies in Black Lagoon.
Ouch losing your notes must've been painful metaphorically speaking but maybe you should have considered backing them up, anyway I think that you should think about what actually happened Naruto's daughter and whare she is or whatever left of her considering what happens to dead bodies in Black Lagoon.
9/15/2017 c9 
1atchoum35
Thanks
Good to see this story continue. And for your question i think a relationship ( love or not) with balalaika can be really fun. With her and naruto together in the same room this can be fun. Anyway continue and thanks
1atchoum35Thanks
Good to see this story continue. And for your question i think a relationship ( love or not) with balalaika can be really fun. With her and naruto together in the same room this can be fun. Anyway continue and thanks
9/6/2017 c9 Guest
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
8/17/2017 c9 14Foxcomm
Hope you finish this. Gonna be interesting if Revy takes a shot at the twins with Naruto besides them.
14FoxcommHope you finish this. Gonna be interesting if Revy takes a shot at the twins with Naruto besides them.
6/20/2017 c9 MrJakeFozzie
Just found this story and i'm definitely enjoying it.
Glad to hear that you've come back to this story so that it can continue, feel like its too good to be left in the dust like many stories on this site.
Keep up the good work, cant wait for the next update.
Just found this story and i'm definitely enjoying it.
Glad to hear that you've come back to this story so that it can continue, feel like its too good to be left in the dust like many stories on this site.
Keep up the good work, cant wait for the next update.
6/12/2017 c9 Guest
Come on dude update already!
Come on dude update already!
5/9/2017 c9 1EVA-Saiyajin
This is pretty fun to read. I like it.
As for what I want to see: preferably just the blatantly superhuman stuff kept...out of sight, so to speak, from the general population that doesn't immediately die to it.
I find revelations of such powers to everyone tend to make or break stories in crossovers. Right now, the interaction and story is fun and Naruto looks to have the capabilty to keep the fun going without blatantly, unmistakably doing impossible things right in front of people. The mystery and intrigue helps too.
And I'm talking full blatant stuff like a water dragon, turning a corner from a pursuer and disappearing before the pursuer rounds the corner is quite easily achieved.
1EVA-SaiyajinThis is pretty fun to read. I like it.
As for what I want to see: preferably just the blatantly superhuman stuff kept...out of sight, so to speak, from the general population that doesn't immediately die to it.
I find revelations of such powers to everyone tend to make or break stories in crossovers. Right now, the interaction and story is fun and Naruto looks to have the capabilty to keep the fun going without blatantly, unmistakably doing impossible things right in front of people. The mystery and intrigue helps too.
And I'm talking full blatant stuff like a water dragon, turning a corner from a pursuer and disappearing before the pursuer rounds the corner is quite easily achieved.
4/28/2017 c9 Guest
Good to see another chapter again, update soon!
Good to see another chapter again, update soon!
4/24/2017 c4 YuukiAsuna-Chan
I still see no need for them. Shit why is it even taking Naruto so long to start with? He could straight up wipe out the entire city without hassle yet it takes him so long to wipe out one group.
Basically, this story has the twins? for no other reason than "because".
I still see no need for them. Shit why is it even taking Naruto so long to start with? He could straight up wipe out the entire city without hassle yet it takes him so long to wipe out one group.
Basically, this story has the twins? for no other reason than "because".
4/24/2017 c2 YuukiAsuna-Chan
1st, oops. wrong fic, this isn't dead and was updated not long ago.
Ok, really don't see the reason he bothered to work with them. He obviously has the Sharingan so he could easily get all info they have using it. So really, what is the point of them?
1st, oops. wrong fic, this isn't dead and was updated not long ago.
Ok, really don't see the reason he bothered to work with them. He obviously has the Sharingan so he could easily get all info they have using it. So really, what is the point of them?