for Yet, mad I am not4/27 c1 
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this is like 10yrs old but i just wanted to say that on my search for good time travel fics i stumbled across it.
ive never been a big itachi reader but this was really nice. i may have to find more itachi fics now lol
3filly8this is like 10yrs old but i just wanted to say that on my search for good time travel fics i stumbled across it.
ive never been a big itachi reader but this was really nice. i may have to find more itachi fics now lol
1/12/2024 c16 jixuel
wtf, a yamanka searched his mind because they think he's delusional or brainwashed? There's a lot of information in his mind that a Chuin definitely shouldn't know. He was captain of the anbu for God's sake, he knows how the leaf anbu works inside and out, this information was simply ignored by the yamanka and given as implanted information? What other things does he know that he shouldn't? It's not the kind of thing you dismiss out of hand...
wtf, a yamanka searched his mind because they think he's delusional or brainwashed? There's a lot of information in his mind that a Chuin definitely shouldn't know. He was captain of the anbu for God's sake, he knows how the leaf anbu works inside and out, this information was simply ignored by the yamanka and given as implanted information? What other things does he know that he shouldn't? It's not the kind of thing you dismiss out of hand...
9/8/2022 c39 hsfd
last 2 chapters are slash. although light. aka itachi dates a dude.
last 2 chapters are slash. although light. aka itachi dates a dude.
9/8/2022 c40 ran
it improved but there was still weridness and you seem to make minito too afraid of mikoto for scared of woman because woman reasons. I personally don't like her because he jabed her verbally so she makes note to do the same in public to him, during a council meeting. Being with such a person would be exhausting.
would of like a scene where instead of the 3 genin going to tackle itachi sasuke instead confronts his mother saying that itachi is good and she shouldn't kill him. That would have been amusing to see the viciousness bite back against her.
it improved but there was still weridness and you seem to make minito too afraid of mikoto for scared of woman because woman reasons. I personally don't like her because he jabed her verbally so she makes note to do the same in public to him, during a council meeting. Being with such a person would be exhausting.
would of like a scene where instead of the 3 genin going to tackle itachi sasuke instead confronts his mother saying that itachi is good and she shouldn't kill him. That would have been amusing to see the viciousness bite back against her.
9/7/2022 c27 ran
improvement but still can't get over the random they know trope.
oh you are thrown into a parallel world bam guess what there are a dozen others who know too. woo
improvement but still can't get over the random they know trope.
oh you are thrown into a parallel world bam guess what there are a dozen others who know too. woo
9/7/2022 c25 ran
that was shit.
instead of sliping up or something reasonable you pull a hey there is someone who knows and attacks you while you are weak then takes over your mother so they both get the confession out of a "helpless" itachi lol
that was shit.
instead of sliping up or something reasonable you pull a hey there is someone who knows and attacks you while you are weak then takes over your mother so they both get the confession out of a "helpless" itachi lol
9/7/2022 c15 ran
I find it odd that he has to act like he remembers everyone when it would be much simply to imply that the "brainwashing" removed his memories fore for 10 years or so. Anything before that could just be attributed to bad memory or weird brainwashing shit shoved in.
I find it odd that he has to act like he remembers everyone when it would be much simply to imply that the "brainwashing" removed his memories fore for 10 years or so. Anything before that could just be attributed to bad memory or weird brainwashing shit shoved in.
9/7/2022 c11 ran
kinda wanted him to reveal his not being a simple chuunin but whatev. this is cool 2
kinda wanted him to reveal his not being a simple chuunin but whatev. this is cool 2
9/7/2022 c3 ran
surprisingly well written. n funny.
surprisingly well written. n funny.
8/27/2022 c12 Olivine the Mineral
Didn’t they just establish that the most likely result of claiming to be from another world would be for them to squint, shrug, and determine that he had cracked and that Itachi had developed the delusion that he was from another world.
Didn’t they just establish that the most likely result of claiming to be from another world would be for them to squint, shrug, and determine that he had cracked and that Itachi had developed the delusion that he was from another world.
5/5/2022 c40 Guest
Really enjoyed this alternate take on it.
Really enjoyed this alternate take on it.
1/2/2022 c18 mickeysofine
Inexplicably perceptive woman.
Itachi was undercover for years amongst powerful and paranoid missing ninja.
He cannot be this easy to read, she cannot be this observant.
This character has ruined whatever enjoyment of the fic I had.
Inexplicably perceptive woman.
Itachi was undercover for years amongst powerful and paranoid missing ninja.
He cannot be this easy to read, she cannot be this observant.
This character has ruined whatever enjoyment of the fic I had.
11/6/2021 c40 Nad19
aww a shame. but alright, i understand that feeling though it would be nice if you could come back to finish this. but alright
aww a shame. but alright, i understand that feeling though it would be nice if you could come back to finish this. but alright
11/6/2021 c15 Nad19
just say you have amnesia please. all of your memories are replaced etc. why took the hard way? or maybe they would be suspicious if you did itachi?
just say you have amnesia please. all of your memories are replaced etc. why took the hard way? or maybe they would be suspicious if you did itachi?