for Jane Eyre: an alternate ending1/22/2015 c13 Marzz
Great chapter! I do feel so terribly for Jane I hope she gets the happiness she deserves. I gotta admit this tension is killing me.
Great chapter! I do feel so terribly for Jane I hope she gets the happiness she deserves. I gotta admit this tension is killing me.
1/22/2015 c13 StayerOfJonas
Finally I've been checking everyday for an update! and I'm not disappointed at all. The encounter between Jane and Edward at the end I was so breathless you nailed it just hope st. john does not take advantage of this situation please post soon
Finally I've been checking everyday for an update! and I'm not disappointed at all. The encounter between Jane and Edward at the end I was so breathless you nailed it just hope st. john does not take advantage of this situation please post soon
1/7/2015 c12 wistful reader
I'm hooked :) I love that you've stayed loyal to the characters- it's almost as if CB had written this. Hope you can update soon!
I'm hooked :) I love that you've stayed loyal to the characters- it's almost as if CB had written this. Hope you can update soon!
12/26/2014 c12 
9callofhonor
Thanks for posting! I wish Bronte was around to read this and congratulate you on a job well done. I wish all fanfiction was written so authentically and wisely!
9callofhonorThanks for posting! I wish Bronte was around to read this and congratulate you on a job well done. I wish all fanfiction was written so authentically and wisely!
12/25/2014 c12 9Bonbonnett
Ah yes, an encounter never seen in the original - very well done! I am sure that R would have loved to take St.J down, and vice-versa of course - dogs snarling over a juicy bone! Jane stands firm in the midst, as is true to her character.
9BonbonnettAh yes, an encounter never seen in the original - very well done! I am sure that R would have loved to take St.J down, and vice-versa of course - dogs snarling over a juicy bone! Jane stands firm in the midst, as is true to her character.
12/13/2014 c1 Guest
I love the way you by-passed St. John. Compared to Rochester, St John is lifeless. Making St. John's sisters cautious and suspicious instead of saintly was a nice touch.
I love the way you by-passed St. John. Compared to Rochester, St John is lifeless. Making St. John's sisters cautious and suspicious instead of saintly was a nice touch.
12/12/2014 c5 4Mere24
This chapter was rough (in content, not in execution!) but very well done. I am very interested in seeing how things progress.
4Mere24This chapter was rough (in content, not in execution!) but very well done. I am very interested in seeing how things progress.
12/12/2014 c2 Mere24
I love that you have captured the essence of both character, I particularly enjoyed your Rochester. This is a lovely variation, I am intrigued at Bertha still living - though appreciate it. Her rather timely death makes things far too easy!
I love that you have captured the essence of both character, I particularly enjoyed your Rochester. This is a lovely variation, I am intrigued at Bertha still living - though appreciate it. Her rather timely death makes things far too easy!
12/10/2014 c10 Anonymouse
I can't wait for the next chapter... I read Halton Cray and it was BLOODY BRILLIANT. Really enjoyed it can't wait to buy the sequel. There were one or two typos in it though just thought you should know.
I can't wait for the next chapter... I read Halton Cray and it was BLOODY BRILLIANT. Really enjoyed it can't wait to buy the sequel. There were one or two typos in it though just thought you should know.
12/6/2014 c10 1NBRoberts
Thank you everybody for your wonderful words and support! I hope you enjoy Halton Cray as much as I enjoyed writing it; I look forward to your thoughts! – I am just SO glad you enjoyed this chapter with Jane and Rochester finally being able to have a good kiss and cuddle without the ‘mere human law’ mattering too much for five minutes! Oh, and yes, I just had to use the ‘am I hideous’ line somewhere :) that line always tickled me so much!
I’m working on the next chapter, so won’t be too long away. Seems I have to be a bit more focused on catching those typos – I noticed one or two in there – sorry! (illusion allusion lol)
1NBRobertsThank you everybody for your wonderful words and support! I hope you enjoy Halton Cray as much as I enjoyed writing it; I look forward to your thoughts! – I am just SO glad you enjoyed this chapter with Jane and Rochester finally being able to have a good kiss and cuddle without the ‘mere human law’ mattering too much for five minutes! Oh, and yes, I just had to use the ‘am I hideous’ line somewhere :) that line always tickled me so much!
I’m working on the next chapter, so won’t be too long away. Seems I have to be a bit more focused on catching those typos – I noticed one or two in there – sorry! (illusion allusion lol)
12/5/2014 c10 9callofhonor
I think this was very tastefully done. You know the characters well, and I loved the "am I hideous" line!
9callofhonorI think this was very tastefully done. You know the characters well, and I loved the "am I hideous" line!
12/4/2014 c10 Marzz
Soooooo not disappointed . I loved every moment! Brilliant chapter! And I am totally getting your book:)
Soooooo not disappointed . I loved every moment! Brilliant chapter! And I am totally getting your book:)