
6/9/2013 c2 kabri3593
Is Sparky/Snively a Raichu by any chance?Please let me know,and please continue this story.
Is Sparky/Snively a Raichu by any chance?Please let me know,and please continue this story.
9/28/2002 c1
9Spug
-_-;;. What can I say? Even tho I'd really hate to say it. Being a fellow writer of odd things. But this is lame. Snively got turned into a Pokemon. Without ANY reason to really explain how Dr. Robotnik got Pokemon DNA. It wouldn't be so bad, if it wasn't so poorly written. I think you need to go back over it again. Because.. Lame is all I can say. And that's harsh out of me. Shame on you.

-_-;;. What can I say? Even tho I'd really hate to say it. Being a fellow writer of odd things. But this is lame. Snively got turned into a Pokemon. Without ANY reason to really explain how Dr. Robotnik got Pokemon DNA. It wouldn't be so bad, if it wasn't so poorly written. I think you need to go back over it again. Because.. Lame is all I can say. And that's harsh out of me. Shame on you.
8/10/2001 c2
5Perri Lightfoot
Write more! More! More! I love this fic! You haven't written anything on it since FEBRUARY! You need to! I wanna know what happens next! Pwease? For me? *gets down on her knees* WRITE MORE DAMMIT! Don't be mean! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!

Write more! More! More! I love this fic! You haven't written anything on it since FEBRUARY! You need to! I wanna know what happens next! Pwease? For me? *gets down on her knees* WRITE MORE DAMMIT! Don't be mean! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!
5/9/2001 c2 ChibiCharizard dang fanfic.net logged me out p
You reviewed my story so I decided to return the favor. Nice story! ^^
It has a nice plotline. (Nice is my favorite word. ^^*)
You reviewed my story so I decided to return the favor. Nice story! ^^
It has a nice plotline. (Nice is my favorite word. ^^*)
4/13/2001 c2
4Princess Of Quake
Hmm... I thought I already reviewed this... But anyway, that was goodie! :)

Hmm... I thought I already reviewed this... But anyway, that was goodie! :)
2/1/2001 c2 Metalla-san
Good begining, but I would get rid of the personal accounts at the beginings because most people use that as an excuse to MIST a story.
Good begining, but I would get rid of the personal accounts at the beginings because most people use that as an excuse to MIST a story.
1/28/2001 c1
5Perri Lightfoot
I liked it! A lot! Puts my to shame! *runs around like a monkey on crack looking for a next part* You're really good, dude! You have lots of writing talent, use it well! :) PPG, the little girl from South Park, Colorado

I liked it! A lot! Puts my to shame! *runs around like a monkey on crack looking for a next part* You're really good, dude! You have lots of writing talent, use it well! :) PPG, the little girl from South Park, Colorado
1/25/2001 c1
20Majin Magus
Err...good, has promise. But, ah, next time could you spell check it, please?

Err...good, has promise. But, ah, next time could you spell check it, please?
1/8/2001 c1
2Your Humble Narrator Drewgie
Sorry for calling you a guy. And I have updated the fic just for you! NOW STOP CALLING ME GAY! Can we be friends now?

Sorry for calling you a guy. And I have updated the fic just for you! NOW STOP CALLING ME GAY! Can we be friends now?