for A Dauntless leader in search of love5/24/2015 c37 kim4trisntobias4ever
Ooo ooo I have been dying for this club time! You did not disappoint! Amazing! I am hoping there is more to their time in the club! So damn hot!
Ooo ooo I have been dying for this club time! You did not disappoint! Amazing! I am hoping there is more to their time in the club! So damn hot!
5/24/2015 c37 
2Silverlumos1
This is not it I don't like where it's going. I don't like that Eric is going around fucking whomever. I thought Tris and him were suppose to be all in love. And he was "in search of love". This story doesn't make sense anymore and seems to be a bit sloppy. It would have been just as hot if they were exclusive in that club.
2Silverlumos1This is not it I don't like where it's going. I don't like that Eric is going around fucking whomever. I thought Tris and him were suppose to be all in love. And he was "in search of love". This story doesn't make sense anymore and seems to be a bit sloppy. It would have been just as hot if they were exclusive in that club.
5/24/2015 c37 Guest
I don't like where this had gone... Even if Tris slept with Four, it doesn't make it right. Sorry if I'm living in some made up fantasized world. But after they got together, Eric and Tris should have stayed together. I don't know. Sorry, but it just doesn't feel right anymore.
I don't like where this had gone... Even if Tris slept with Four, it doesn't make it right. Sorry if I'm living in some made up fantasized world. But after they got together, Eric and Tris should have stayed together. I don't know. Sorry, but it just doesn't feel right anymore.
5/24/2015 c37 Sinfully Sweet
It was great like always, but sooooooo short- where is the rest of it? I was wondering what happened with Tori and What Four and Tris were still doing. Eric should feel find about Tris having sex with another guy, right?
It was great like always, but sooooooo short- where is the rest of it? I was wondering what happened with Tori and What Four and Tris were still doing. Eric should feel find about Tris having sex with another guy, right?
5/24/2015 c37 Guest
Holy crap that was the hottest thing I've ever read!... Wow ... AWESOME:)... Still I really hope that things will be alright with Eric and tris after this
Holy crap that was the hottest thing I've ever read!... Wow ... AWESOME:)... Still I really hope that things will be alright with Eric and tris after this
5/24/2015 c37 Guest
Damn! These chapters are always good :)
Damn! These chapters are always good :)
5/22/2015 c35 Sinfully sweet
Pleeaaaaaasssseeeee update. This is the most unique and fun I have read and need to read more...update today...please
Pleeaaaaaasssseeeee update. This is the most unique and fun I have read and need to read more...update today...please
5/23/2015 c35 priprisci
I need to know what happens in orgy
Please, that's hot, I need it fast
Update
I need to know what happens in orgy
Please, that's hot, I need it fast
Update
5/10/2015 c35 Guest
Wow holy crap that's messed up lol not in a bad way lol... Hope Eric and tris can survive this... Awesome two chapters:)... Can't wait to see where this will lead next... Sorry to hear that you've been having migraines lately ... They absolutely suck ... Hope you get some relief:)..."L"
Wow holy crap that's messed up lol not in a bad way lol... Hope Eric and tris can survive this... Awesome two chapters:)... Can't wait to see where this will lead next... Sorry to hear that you've been having migraines lately ... They absolutely suck ... Hope you get some relief:)..."L"
5/11/2015 c35 JackyAttacky
You are brilliant. You've found an ingenious way to highlight and indulge the sexual tension between all the characters without (necessarily) jeopardizing their relationships - although I'm curious how the aftermath will go. Counting down til the next update! Thank you for this masterpiece.
You are brilliant. You've found an ingenious way to highlight and indulge the sexual tension between all the characters without (necessarily) jeopardizing their relationships - although I'm curious how the aftermath will go. Counting down til the next update! Thank you for this masterpiece.
5/10/2015 c35 kim4trisntobias4ever
Oh man I can't wait to read how it all goes down! Who all fucks who?!I like this twist! Great chapter glad they have more info now as well. Can't wait for more.
Oh man I can't wait to read how it all goes down! Who all fucks who?!I like this twist! Great chapter glad they have more info now as well. Can't wait for more.
5/10/2015 c35 lady Abbiss
Wow. Absolutely intrigued with what is going to happen next. Thanks for not making me wait for this one! I'm glad that all the couples are willing to help each other out in this oh so hard mission. Please update soon! Pretty please with Eric and Four on top?
Wow. Absolutely intrigued with what is going to happen next. Thanks for not making me wait for this one! I'm glad that all the couples are willing to help each other out in this oh so hard mission. Please update soon! Pretty please with Eric and Four on top?