for A Dauntless leader in search of love10/13/2014 c11 Guest
I like the story so far. Thank you for not making Tris traditional with intimacy fears and being extra gullible this Tris is more believable.
I like the story so far. Thank you for not making Tris traditional with intimacy fears and being extra gullible this Tris is more believable.
10/13/2014 c11 Nanou13118
Hi,
I am french and I read your story thanks to google traduction. I love it and particulary this chapter. Thank you for taking time to write it. I am sorry for the mistakes
All the best !
Hi,
I am french and I read your story thanks to google traduction. I love it and particulary this chapter. Thank you for taking time to write it. I am sorry for the mistakes
All the best !
10/12/2014 c11 N.c
I have been waiting for an update I love this story it's awsome
I have been waiting for an update I love this story it's awsome
10/13/2014 c11 CherryBerryCasey
Hello Ello again! :)
As always, amazing. Loved it and, God, who could ever get bored of this story?! Twists and turns around every chapter. Loved, loved, loved it.
Makes me happy to see tough, yet vulnerable Tris and sappy Eric.
Also, I couldn't contain the laughter when I read 'just like my cock is yours, so is my heart.' Hehehehehehee I know. I'm very immature! :)
Awesome sauce!
Hello Ello again! :)
As always, amazing. Loved it and, God, who could ever get bored of this story?! Twists and turns around every chapter. Loved, loved, loved it.
Makes me happy to see tough, yet vulnerable Tris and sappy Eric.
Also, I couldn't contain the laughter when I read 'just like my cock is yours, so is my heart.' Hehehehehehee I know. I'm very immature! :)
Awesome sauce!
10/12/2014 c11 Gemmalou1994
This story is amazing and this chapter really allowed me to see another side of Eric. Keep writing I love it :)
This story is amazing and this chapter really allowed me to see another side of Eric. Keep writing I love it :)
9/29/2014 c9 
4Olivia Williams
yeah id say he better have that conversation but I cant see triss sharing him nor wanting too ay least I hope they don't go down that path
4Olivia Williamsyeah id say he better have that conversation but I cant see triss sharing him nor wanting too ay least I hope they don't go down that path
9/20/2014 c7 brittany
I'm very sorry to hear about your migraine, I hope you feel better soon. I, too, suffer from them so I know your pain; the chapter was amazing. I can not wait to read what is in the future for these couples.
I'm very sorry to hear about your migraine, I hope you feel better soon. I, too, suffer from them so I know your pain; the chapter was amazing. I can not wait to read what is in the future for these couples.
9/21/2014 c7 CherryBerryCasey
Hello again!
I hope you are feeling better, I know how you feel, I suffer with migraines too. Sending you lots of love and hope you are okay now.
Loved the last chapter. Even with a migraine, your English and grammar is amazing. Keep rocking dude. :)
Hello again!
I hope you are feeling better, I know how you feel, I suffer with migraines too. Sending you lots of love and hope you are okay now.
Loved the last chapter. Even with a migraine, your English and grammar is amazing. Keep rocking dude. :)