for A Dauntless leader in search of love7/8/2016 c11 Guest
aaaaaaw! so cute!
aaaaaaw! so cute!
7/8/2016 c3 Guest
hahahahahahahahaha that was so funny!
hahahahahahahahaha that was so funny!
7/8/2016 c1 amazeballs
aaaaawww! where the hell do good writers get such good plot ideas?
and just by looking at how much words and chapters are, I can see that you're very dedicated to writing. Well done! LOVE IT ALREADY!
aaaaawww! where the hell do good writers get such good plot ideas?
and just by looking at how much words and chapters are, I can see that you're very dedicated to writing. Well done! LOVE IT ALREADY!
6/29/2016 c49 
2SomethingNeverComes
Prob one of my favorite stories...please keep writing and quickly please...lol
2SomethingNeverComesProb one of my favorite stories...please keep writing and quickly please...lol
6/18/2016 c49 Debbydq
welcome back .there are a lot of story lines going on, it might be a time to have someone reflect about everything that has happened.
sitting on hands waiting to see what comes next.
welcome back .there are a lot of story lines going on, it might be a time to have someone reflect about everything that has happened.
sitting on hands waiting to see what comes next.
3/26/2016 c48 Debbydq
Tris HAS to tell Eric! That just wouldn't be right for her not too!
So I've caught up to your writing and see it hasn't been updated since January. I hope there is more to this coming!
Tris HAS to tell Eric! That just wouldn't be right for her not too!
So I've caught up to your writing and see it hasn't been updated since January. I hope there is more to this coming!
3/25/2016 c32 Debbydq
Another reason I love your writing - your description of the colors being intensified by the sun rays- symbolizing society. Colors have emotions for me, bright colors in sunshine mean happy and peaceful. Definitely a sign of hope of what could be!
Another reason I love your writing - your description of the colors being intensified by the sun rays- symbolizing society. Colors have emotions for me, bright colors in sunshine mean happy and peaceful. Definitely a sign of hope of what could be!
3/25/2016 c29 Debbydq
Yay, thank you for standing up to those who can't have an open mind to other people's ideas!
I have been following stories and reviews threaten and then the authors leave and never finish their stories here. I am not on tumbler or a writer, so this is only the place that I read and post. Thank you for staying and thanks for sharing your wonderful art and craft of writing! I can't wait to finish what you have written here and find more!
Again, thanks for sticking to your craft (and explaining the difference between BDSM and abuse to those who didn't know!)
Yay, thank you for standing up to those who can't have an open mind to other people's ideas!
I have been following stories and reviews threaten and then the authors leave and never finish their stories here. I am not on tumbler or a writer, so this is only the place that I read and post. Thank you for staying and thanks for sharing your wonderful art and craft of writing! I can't wait to finish what you have written here and find more!
Again, thanks for sticking to your craft (and explaining the difference between BDSM and abuse to those who didn't know!)
3/25/2016 c24 Debbydq
Well that was interesting!
I don't need stand the logic of everyone will think she committed suicide.
Well that was interesting!
I don't need stand the logic of everyone will think she committed suicide.
3/25/2016 c23 Debbydq
They are getting hit from all sides to defend their loyalty to each other!
Can't wait to read about Christina and Peter!
They are getting hit from all sides to defend their loyalty to each other!
Can't wait to read about Christina and Peter!