for A Shinobi of Middle-Earth8/16/2021 c3 zirnitradandm
"My arm isnt the way it is because of burns, its because the power it once held is sealed"
is sasuke a troll? this is just too perfect
"My arm isnt the way it is because of burns, its because the power it once held is sealed"
is sasuke a troll? this is just too perfect
7/28/2021 c1 Toras
This looked interesting right up until it was revealed to be Sasuke. After that no longer interesting, the last thing I want to read is a story about traitor emo that should have been knifed in the first chapter of the original manga.
This looked interesting right up until it was revealed to be Sasuke. After that no longer interesting, the last thing I want to read is a story about traitor emo that should have been knifed in the first chapter of the original manga.
5/30/2021 c10 Bridd
I don’t have much hate but besides the uruks wanting the sharingan for reasons and buromir surviving the fellowship is pretty much the same plot wise, sooo, you might as well had made sasuke chill with Galadriel til the fellowship showed up, it was pretty useless content, what little you added could have happened while he waited and in two towers.
I don’t have much hate but besides the uruks wanting the sharingan for reasons and buromir surviving the fellowship is pretty much the same plot wise, sooo, you might as well had made sasuke chill with Galadriel til the fellowship showed up, it was pretty useless content, what little you added could have happened while he waited and in two towers.
5/29/2021 c6 Bridd
Well, that your problem dude, supposedly sasuke is either fullpower or kinda inept, why pick a powerful character to write then... fuck, can’t possibly change a . From the scrip that’s why, you just wrote that madara ripped smaugh a new one and saseku cant fight a balrog at all even though he fought an infinite chakra and unkillable madara himself with his friend.
Well, that your problem dude, supposedly sasuke is either fullpower or kinda inept, why pick a powerful character to write then... fuck, can’t possibly change a . From the scrip that’s why, you just wrote that madara ripped smaugh a new one and saseku cant fight a balrog at all even though he fought an infinite chakra and unkillable madara himself with his friend.
1/5/2021 c34 lucifer
Congrats on making a great story terrible by cucking naruto. Worst ending of any book i have ever read hands down. what a stupid decision to do that.
Congrats on making a great story terrible by cucking naruto. Worst ending of any book i have ever read hands down. what a stupid decision to do that.
11/20/2020 c29 
1fairylover2004
OHMYGHODDDDDDDD I FREAKING SCREAMED WHEN I SAW "SHANNARO!" LIKE SAKURA'S HERE! FINALLLYYYYY
1fairylover2004OHMYGHODDDDDDDD I FREAKING SCREAMED WHEN I SAW "SHANNARO!" LIKE SAKURA'S HERE! FINALLLYYYYY
9/3/2020 c18 scyfly
this battle of helms deep... still no jutsu. sinobi use them to change the landscape but when there are 10.000 perfectly lined up for something like a waterdragon to tear through they decide to use swords for a one on one fight.
where is the overwelming kick assery you know the 7 swords men jumping down the wall and laying waste to the army.
truly this does not deserve to be called a crossover
this battle of helms deep... still no jutsu. sinobi use them to change the landscape but when there are 10.000 perfectly lined up for something like a waterdragon to tear through they decide to use swords for a one on one fight.
where is the overwelming kick assery you know the 7 swords men jumping down the wall and laying waste to the army.
truly this does not deserve to be called a crossover
9/3/2020 c7 scyfly
sasuke is an incarnation of indra so what can galadriel possibly mean by meeting him again.
this is sasuke not naruto
sasuke is an incarnation of indra so what can galadriel possibly mean by meeting him again.
this is sasuke not naruto
9/3/2020 c7 scyfly
yeah right middle earth is on the same planet as the elemental nations, pull the other ond
yeah right middle earth is on the same planet as the elemental nations, pull the other ond
9/3/2020 c6 scyfly
why isnt sasuke using more jutsu's? i can think of dozens of ways it would help.
and what is a balrog compared to a buiju, which he fought at age 12
why isnt sasuke using more jutsu's? i can think of dozens of ways it would help.
and what is a balrog compared to a buiju, which he fought at age 12
9/3/2020 c4 scyfly
sasuke's beliefs as you call them are simple fact even if you explained it very very poorly. though i disagree that being evil is a burden, its is no more burden then being 'good' it is mearly ppl who delude themself thinking that they are right. quirk of the world? fate? who knows but very ppl are honest enough with themself to know what they truly are
sasuke's beliefs as you call them are simple fact even if you explained it very very poorly. though i disagree that being evil is a burden, its is no more burden then being 'good' it is mearly ppl who delude themself thinking that they are right. quirk of the world? fate? who knows but very ppl are honest enough with themself to know what they truly are
9/3/2020 c4 scyfly
sasuke can take over the magic that was in the storm with lightning and direct it back at saruman but fighting a squid is apparently to much to ask
sasuke can take over the magic that was in the storm with lightning and direct it back at saruman but fighting a squid is apparently to much to ask
9/3/2020 c1 scyfly
pretty poor writing.
location: arwen
i couldve sworn she is an elf not a person.
and so on many grammar mistakes. you do not even mention this is not about naruto
pretty poor writing.
location: arwen
i couldve sworn she is an elf not a person.
and so on many grammar mistakes. you do not even mention this is not about naruto