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for Percabeth's First Kiss(es)

2/22/2023 c3 Nobody
I hate that last one... TOO SAD!
5/25/2022 c1 2uncle Rick is awesome
I really want a continuation of chapter 1 can someone di that for me?
2/24/2021 c3 Nobody
This wasn’t actually that bad. I’ve read a lot worse. I honestly can’t think of anything to criticise, just maybe make it a tad less dramatic.
Otherwise thanks for giving me something to read i enjoyed it x
2/18/2020 c1 Guest
stupid
2/23/2017 c3 Hi
I liked the Lightning theif one a lot better
12/19/2016 c3 4Heavanly Flower
Right...so he isn't talking to Annabeth?If yes, then boo! but if he is talking to her than whoohoo!
9/18/2016 c1 Madalyn Polovich
This was a cute a impressing version of Percy Jackson and the Olympians: The Lightning Theif good work honestly I liked this version better.
4/2/2016 c2 1emmamellarkvictorsvillage
Thanks so much Rosi! I really liked writing this story and I want to write more, and I have gotten a lot better at writing,but I'm so busy that I really only have time to write in the summer. So I'll try to write some more stories, especially Percabeth!
4/2/2016 c3 Rosi
OMG! You're such a talented writer! This is vet much alike to Rick Riordan's style of writing. Also, you had 100% good grammar, which always annoys me. Please keep writing, you have true passion!
7/5/2015 c1 emmamellarkvictorsvillage
To GreekGeek; Thank you for reading the story and taking time to review. Even if you didn't like it, your constructive criticism was helpful to me! :)
7/5/2015 c3 GreekGeek
i read the reviews for this story. I don't really agree with the other reviewers. This story is not really that great in my opinion. It's okay. Some parts in all 3 chapters u made the characters ooc. They were maybe too dramatic.
12/28/2014 c3 Kim
I loved the two chapters you have done so far. In Titan's Curse I think it should be either during the Chariot ride on the way to Mount Olympus or during the dance, but before Athena talks to Percy, because she disapproves of Percy and Annabeth, so she wouldn't like them dating yet kissing.
9/20/2014 c3 Guest
During dance before talk with athena
9/17/2014 c3 1LaFangirl13
It should be during the chariot ride becuase Percy missed Annabeth and he kissed her, then you can do whatever u want to happen.
9/17/2014 c3 11zejaykay
Maby after that dance going back to the mortal world off Olympus in the elevator
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