9/13/2020 c1 xpolymerobsessed50
I love love love how this is focused on Elizabeth! She was definitely a true pirate and becoming King was really no coincidence. The only thing I didn't like is that Will and Elizabeth weren't endgame but everyone has a different opinion and I'm sure a lot of other people loved that
I love love love how this is focused on Elizabeth! She was definitely a true pirate and becoming King was really no coincidence. The only thing I didn't like is that Will and Elizabeth weren't endgame but everyone has a different opinion and I'm sure a lot of other people loved that
11/6/2016 c1 15Alexxis T. Swan
Wow I think this might be my favorite PotC fic. I agree with you that it's Elizabeth who was the real pirate rather than Will.
Wow I think this might be my favorite PotC fic. I agree with you that it's Elizabeth who was the real pirate rather than Will.
3/16/2016 c1 59Sleepy Lotus
Oh this is incredibly beautiful!
""I always knew you were heartless, darling, but I did rather mean it in a more figurative than literal sense"
Lol! Wonderful line!
You captured Elizabeth so perfectly, and what a great twist! And of course the bit of Sparrabeth at the end warmed my heart! :)
Bravo!
Oh this is incredibly beautiful!
""I always knew you were heartless, darling, but I did rather mean it in a more figurative than literal sense"
Lol! Wonderful line!
You captured Elizabeth so perfectly, and what a great twist! And of course the bit of Sparrabeth at the end warmed my heart! :)
Bravo!
9/29/2015 c1 Pud
Stunning, but oh it makes me disappointed all over again. Personally, I think this suits Elizabeth's character better than what we were actually given. It also would've made for a surprising yet apt end to the trilogy. Alas.
Stunning, but oh it makes me disappointed all over again. Personally, I think this suits Elizabeth's character better than what we were actually given. It also would've made for a surprising yet apt end to the trilogy. Alas.
8/20/2015 c1 Guest
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
1/6/2015 c1 46Gentle Breezes
I haven't ventured very far into the fanfic of Pirates of the Caribbean, but this fic has made me reconsider that! This is one of the most gorgeous fics I've read in a VERY long time. It flows freely between ideas and emotion. I would have preferred this infinitely to the movie's plot. Elizabeth was many things, and this could easily have been one of them. You made it believable and your writing style it easy to engage. I can almost smell the sea salt and hear the waves! 10 out of 10!
I haven't ventured very far into the fanfic of Pirates of the Caribbean, but this fic has made me reconsider that! This is one of the most gorgeous fics I've read in a VERY long time. It flows freely between ideas and emotion. I would have preferred this infinitely to the movie's plot. Elizabeth was many things, and this could easily have been one of them. You made it believable and your writing style it easy to engage. I can almost smell the sea salt and hear the waves! 10 out of 10!
12/5/2014 c1 writingramblr
this is everything. this is perfection. this is what i want for Elizabeth Swann, pirate king.
headcanon AU accepted.
this is everything. this is perfection. this is what i want for Elizabeth Swann, pirate king.
headcanon AU accepted.
10/31/2014 c1 Guest
Great story! I hope you write more with this pairing.
Great story! I hope you write more with this pairing.
10/29/2014 c1 belaginess
gorgeous fic! some of the turns of phrase are almost decadent — and you offer so much more of a worthwhile continuation to the story of the Pirate King. thank you for sharing! )
gorgeous fic! some of the turns of phrase are almost decadent — and you offer so much more of a worthwhile continuation to the story of the Pirate King. thank you for sharing! )
10/5/2014 c1 SuperWhoLock of the Carribean
Wow! I don't normally enjoy Jack/Elizabeth stories but this one was beautiful! You spoke so eloquently and with such amazing imagery, I loved it! Also I found your portrayal of Elizabeth very new and interesting!
Wow! I don't normally enjoy Jack/Elizabeth stories but this one was beautiful! You spoke so eloquently and with such amazing imagery, I loved it! Also I found your portrayal of Elizabeth very new and interesting!
9/21/2014 c1 thebestpeopleinlifearefree
So good! I really enjoyed it. I think that that's how it should've been. Also, i'm a huge elisabeth/jack fan soo...
So good! I really enjoyed it. I think that that's how it should've been. Also, i'm a huge elisabeth/jack fan soo...