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11/16/2014 c3 1fairlead
/has an idea

You should have someone get a little mad and he have them transform a little bit! I'm not trying to force you though!

/I can't review twice on chapter 4 D:
11/1/2014 c4 fairlead
I love AUs like this! It's a great idea, but the chapters a a tad short. I'm not forcing you to lengthen the chapters, but they might seem longer and be easier to read is you split those giant paragraphs into smaller ones.

Update soon!

-Arrancar 01
9/29/2014 c3 Last Alice
This is waaaaaaaaaaay easier to read...Awesome! Just wondering, did you say what Byakuya was? Hope you update soon XD
9/29/2014 c2 Last Alice
Grimmjow is awesome ;P
9/29/2014 c1 Last Alice
I'm interested and its pretty good so far. Just one tip: try separating it into paragraphs so its easier to read :)
9/21/2014 c2 3KazumaKaname
Walls of text are painful to read.

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