for A Rose In Bloom4/9 c22 KMariaJ
I'm reading your story and so far it's been a good read .
But chapter 22 was should have told her about his conflict with Gideon Cross so she could understand that she's at risk of being hurt. Ana is unreasonable immature treating José the way she does- telling the teacher about his use of his phone Having someone pose as the mother of José seems too much.
I'm reading your story and so far it's been a good read .
But chapter 22 was should have told her about his conflict with Gideon Cross so she could understand that she's at risk of being hurt. Ana is unreasonable immature treating José the way she does- telling the teacher about his use of his phone Having someone pose as the mother of José seems too much.
3/7/2023 c3 Ad
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11/23/2022 c32 Kim972
As I said previously this is the first story where Elena is sorry and now she expressed it Christian. He is so stuck up his own ways Elena is still Ana's aunt blood or not. What he said was hurtful especially when she asked for forgiveness, I not saying just forget but forgiving is moving on. You did a great job, but we aren't no one to decide what someone's punishment should be. That is in God hands. In other story he defends what she did as helping him and in this story she is regretful redeeming herself and he has that reaction isn't logique.
As I said previously this is the first story where Elena is sorry and now she expressed it Christian. He is so stuck up his own ways Elena is still Ana's aunt blood or not. What he said was hurtful especially when she asked for forgiveness, I not saying just forget but forgiving is moving on. You did a great job, but we aren't no one to decide what someone's punishment should be. That is in God hands. In other story he defends what she did as helping him and in this story she is regretful redeeming herself and he has that reaction isn't logique.
11/21/2022 c17 Kim972
There isn't much story where Elena is shameful and regretful for what she did to Christian. In your story he is the only one and after all she did for Ana she should be more forgiving. I really hate her character but you made regretful that's something. On her part it was wrong but she is asking for forgiveness And should at least cool a little on her.
There isn't much story where Elena is shameful and regretful for what she did to Christian. In your story he is the only one and after all she did for Ana she should be more forgiving. I really hate her character but you made regretful that's something. On her part it was wrong but she is asking for forgiveness And should at least cool a little on her.
10/26/2022 c22 raven haired girl
ana is such a bitch ..i know she is young so she is having trouble having someone to watch her .. but she is not young to jump into bed with Christian .. god how stupid could u show her to be
ana is such a bitch ..i know she is young so she is having trouble having someone to watch her .. but she is not young to jump into bed with Christian .. god how stupid could u show her to be
6/25/2022 c21 
3Guddu tales
Mommies dont clean the room after you have fucked and beat the shit out of a girl, Grey
3Guddu talesMommies dont clean the room after you have fucked and beat the shit out of a girl, Grey
9/20/2021 c41 Kimberly972
Yeah she is not blood just like the Greys to their children. But when her parents passed away she was there to give her a shelter. In God’s eyes no crime is bigger or smaller than the other, for him we are just that sinners. She changed she regrets what she did to Christian as a teenager not like other stories where she is in denial no she took responsibility even asked Christian to forgive that should come in her favor no? She is not blood but took Ana in her house and believe that changed her. No one is perfect.
Yeah she is not blood just like the Greys to their children. But when her parents passed away she was there to give her a shelter. In God’s eyes no crime is bigger or smaller than the other, for him we are just that sinners. She changed she regrets what she did to Christian as a teenager not like other stories where she is in denial no she took responsibility even asked Christian to forgive that should come in her favor no? She is not blood but took Ana in her house and believe that changed her. No one is perfect.
9/18/2021 c14 Kimberly972
Ana is wrong she knows she was wrong and ask for forgiveness. When someone is remorse of doing something and ask for forgiveness we must forgive your Elena sees and knows she was wrong in bringing Christian into bdsm. No one is perfect, she can’t act like Elena didn’t help her when her parents die. I am not happy what she to Christian but she ask to forgive her yes she must go to Grace and Christian too Ana is no one to juge we humans are to judgmental
Ana is wrong she knows she was wrong and ask for forgiveness. When someone is remorse of doing something and ask for forgiveness we must forgive your Elena sees and knows she was wrong in bringing Christian into bdsm. No one is perfect, she can’t act like Elena didn’t help her when her parents die. I am not happy what she to Christian but she ask to forgive her yes she must go to Grace and Christian too Ana is no one to juge we humans are to judgmental