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for Naruto the son of Tobirama Senju

9/26/2014 c3 Guest
oh thaths a good excuse
9/26/2014 c3 Guest
Like the story so far, except for all the spelling errors as it take away from the flow of the story. It should be where instead of were for a lot of the sentences that were in this ch. U should try to get a Beta reader to help u w/ proof reading the ch. before u release the next ch. (keep up the good work)
9/26/2014 c3 Blazeknight26
your fic was funny i hope chapter is just as good
9/20/2014 c2 1Raven097
Good chapter.

The whole plot of the story is good.

Continue writing.
9/18/2014 c2 Shadow-Shinobi666
This is an AMAZING fanfiction, please update soon.
9/18/2014 c1 15Zelga Lim Li
interesting plot:)
but there are some part of your story that needed polishing.. somewhat..
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