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10/13/2014 c2 24ellie2498
So sorry I didn't review this sooner... haha... Anyway, this is really good! The quote you put in the very beginning is just killing me, I need to know what that was about! Just a bit of advice though, if you don't mind, there's a few grammar mistakes here and there and the story tends to bunch up on itself a few times. Sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi, but if you want I could proofread the next chapter before you publish it. Just a thought. Plus I'm really excited to see what happens next. Glad to see you're back!
9/24/2014 c2 14KayDeeDee
Awwwww, Sierra's mom is happy for her! *Mutters* Stupid bitch Heather had to ruin most of the fun. Great job as always too, poor Lindsay though!
9/21/2014 c1 KayDeeDee
Wow, this is... is... Dang I never find the right words for amazing stories :P

I should've looked at this story earlier. It's so, dang I can't find the right words again. XD

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