7/29/2016 c2 3one.who.reads
Your pacing seems a bit slow. Two long chaos for an introduction is a bit much. I am looking forward to the first chapter of the story proper though.
Your pacing seems a bit slow. Two long chaos for an introduction is a bit much. I am looking forward to the first chapter of the story proper though.
4/12/2015 c2 1RudyHenkel
Great stuff! I look forward to the ending!
No idea on the gifts... "book" is pretty darn generic for Giles. The fedora is a reference to whistler, maybe?
Great stuff! I look forward to the ending!
No idea on the gifts... "book" is pretty darn generic for Giles. The fedora is a reference to whistler, maybe?
4/12/2015 c2 58Starway Man
Glad to see an update on this story. I was a bit confused by the time skip, and how/why Xander disappeared. And the significance of the gifts? How you explain/update soon.
Glad to see an update on this story. I was a bit confused by the time skip, and how/why Xander disappeared. And the significance of the gifts? How you explain/update soon.
10/13/2014 c1 reiite
Extremely well written. I cant wait for more
Extremely well written. I cant wait for more
9/22/2014 c1 58Starway Man
Well, this was certainly different! Not a lot of action, but some nice introspection. You make some interesting arguments, but the "no soup for you!" quote was what really caught my eye. Kinda hard to imagine Sweet as the Soup Nazi from Seinfeld, but I tried my best! Hope we see the next chapter soon, looking forward to seeing just how different your version of season 6 will be.
Well, this was certainly different! Not a lot of action, but some nice introspection. You make some interesting arguments, but the "no soup for you!" quote was what really caught my eye. Kinda hard to imagine Sweet as the Soup Nazi from Seinfeld, but I tried my best! Hope we see the next chapter soon, looking forward to seeing just how different your version of season 6 will be.