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1kauthreader
i have read this story at least 20 times, and i still love it...i just may read it again...
1kauthreaderi have read this story at least 20 times, and i still love it...i just may read it again...
4/24 c6 Guest
I was really excited about this fanfiction, but it’s just disjointed and makes no sense.
I was really excited about this fanfiction, but it’s just disjointed and makes no sense.
4/24 c36 3HarryPfanfic
Awesome chapter. I always felt like Dumbledore was too laid back, and you wrote this peace beautifully.
I just wished Snape didn't cry all over Harry like a kid... that felt a bit cringe and too OOC for snape.
3HarryPfanficAwesome chapter. I always felt like Dumbledore was too laid back, and you wrote this peace beautifully.
I just wished Snape didn't cry all over Harry like a kid... that felt a bit cringe and too OOC for snape.
4/20 c44 Killerpickle
Dumbledore joining the war late is a well known fact in the magical community and his friends would definitely be aware of it and more of the reasoning why, From memory even their relationship was public knowledge its not something that was hidden.
Just how your forcing this Dumbledore bashing without even understanding the character or his reasoning is just to frustrating to read.
Your turning him into a 2 bit cardboard villain instead of the flawed individual he is who has had to make a lot of tough choices throughout his life, and has been changed from them.
Dumbledore used to follow the greater good but after what happened with his sister and the love of his life he no longer believes in that anymore, every scheme every plan Albus has had to defeat Tom has been to save Harry and End Voldemort.
Dumbledore joining the war late is a well known fact in the magical community and his friends would definitely be aware of it and more of the reasoning why, From memory even their relationship was public knowledge its not something that was hidden.
Just how your forcing this Dumbledore bashing without even understanding the character or his reasoning is just to frustrating to read.
Your turning him into a 2 bit cardboard villain instead of the flawed individual he is who has had to make a lot of tough choices throughout his life, and has been changed from them.
Dumbledore used to follow the greater good but after what happened with his sister and the love of his life he no longer believes in that anymore, every scheme every plan Albus has had to defeat Tom has been to save Harry and End Voldemort.
4/20 c43 Killerpickle
Seriously its fucking bullshit that he's dying now, its such a forced plot point to just and artificially add some suspense.
Realistically if Harry wanted to defeat Tom he would of just kidnapped him then interrogated him for all information he wanted i.e where the parts of his soul are hidden. The only reason you added the injury is to make it more 'fair'
Seriously its fucking bullshit that he's dying now, its such a forced plot point to just and artificially add some suspense.
Realistically if Harry wanted to defeat Tom he would of just kidnapped him then interrogated him for all information he wanted i.e where the parts of his soul are hidden. The only reason you added the injury is to make it more 'fair'
4/20 c38 Killerpickle
How the hell does Sal always get defeated all the time when he is meant to be the most skilled, learned, powerful, most bloody knowledgeable magical in the world?
Then as well always getting magically exhausted from doing nothing?
How the hell does Sal always get defeated all the time when he is meant to be the most skilled, learned, powerful, most bloody knowledgeable magical in the world?
Then as well always getting magically exhausted from doing nothing?
4/19 c34 Killerpickle
Why would Salazar be the one to leave particularly after not solving the problem of Godrics racism.
Also why didn't everyone already know about his nature or at the very least have him explain things properly, its been several years since they've started teaching...
Why would Salazar be the one to leave particularly after not solving the problem of Godrics racism.
Also why didn't everyone already know about his nature or at the very least have him explain things properly, its been several years since they've started teaching...
4/19 c32 Killerpickle
Why did you make Albus retarded you do realize he is a genius and more importantly Albus isn't a melicous manipulative asshole,
If you've ever Read the books and appendices by JK Roweling Dumbledore only found out how Tom survived around first year as well figured out that Harry was a soul container and that for Voldemort to die Harry had to do as well.
The important thing to note though is that Albus doesn't follow the path of 'the greater good' at least anymore That Albus died the night his sister died.
Dumbledore realizing that the only way to kill Voldemort was to kill Harry had to plan and concoct a scenario where Harry could survive but also end Tom and so he created scenario such as first year with the 'tests' to make Harry seem like a prodigy someone to be feared a rival. So that once Voldemort uses Harry's blood the love (which is what Albus is always talking about) from his mum's sacrifice would bind Harry to the realm of the living once killed through the bond between him and Voldemort.
All of Dumbledore's plans weren't necessarily to defeat Voldemort it was to defeat him but make sure Harry survived.
Why did you make Albus retarded you do realize he is a genius and more importantly Albus isn't a melicous manipulative asshole,
If you've ever Read the books and appendices by JK Roweling Dumbledore only found out how Tom survived around first year as well figured out that Harry was a soul container and that for Voldemort to die Harry had to do as well.
The important thing to note though is that Albus doesn't follow the path of 'the greater good' at least anymore That Albus died the night his sister died.
Dumbledore realizing that the only way to kill Voldemort was to kill Harry had to plan and concoct a scenario where Harry could survive but also end Tom and so he created scenario such as first year with the 'tests' to make Harry seem like a prodigy someone to be feared a rival. So that once Voldemort uses Harry's blood the love (which is what Albus is always talking about) from his mum's sacrifice would bind Harry to the realm of the living once killed through the bond between him and Voldemort.
All of Dumbledore's plans weren't necessarily to defeat Voldemort it was to defeat him but make sure Harry survived.
4/19 c14 Killerpickle
Serisouly god this chapter was atrocious all the random laws being brought up but the real problem is How they were brought up/explained - you literally were just saying 'there is a law that says this is illegal' not under section 'xxx' of the 'education legal policy procedures' etc
Serisouly god this chapter was atrocious all the random laws being brought up but the real problem is How they were brought up/explained - you literally were just saying 'there is a law that says this is illegal' not under section 'xxx' of the 'education legal policy procedures' etc
4/19 c4 Killerpickle
God he is so arrogant in this as well Why is he just revealing information, information he has no reason to reveal for obvious reasons
God he is so arrogant in this as well Why is he just revealing information, information he has no reason to reveal for obvious reasons
4/19 c3 Killerpickle
I'm sorry wtf a single fucking letter would'n't get a newspaper to change their tune and do their job.
I'm sorry wtf a single fucking letter would'n't get a newspaper to change their tune and do their job.
4/17 c72 Guest
This was a very good story... that I very much want to take a red pen to! Grammar and spelling! I'm firing your proof reader! Very long, but quite good enough to make up for the annoyance of having to translate sentences in my mind periodically. Which is an odd experience seeing as I'm sadly monolingual.
Nice work with the history and gravitas. Very good conceptually. I feel like the end was a bit short in comparison? Like you could have added more detail to it like you did with sections in earlier timeframes, but instead just left it to our assumed knowledge? And it ended up a bit 'threadbare'. Well done anyway, I'll go check out your other works.
This was a very good story... that I very much want to take a red pen to! Grammar and spelling! I'm firing your proof reader! Very long, but quite good enough to make up for the annoyance of having to translate sentences in my mind periodically. Which is an odd experience seeing as I'm sadly monolingual.
Nice work with the history and gravitas. Very good conceptually. I feel like the end was a bit short in comparison? Like you could have added more detail to it like you did with sections in earlier timeframes, but instead just left it to our assumed knowledge? And it ended up a bit 'threadbare'. Well done anyway, I'll go check out your other works.